Since you guys liked my first song, here's another one!
This is dedicated to one of my friends. We have a mutual love/hate relationship.
Tell me what you guys think of this one too!
Chapter 1
I hate that I love you
First verse:
Your precious torture
Your sweet revenge
Has me addicted to have more
Has me wanting to avenge
I wait for your call
Cause you have become my all
Chorus:
And how you love that I hate you
Makes me not know how to
Even when you tear me in two
You always come through
And I hate that I love you
Second verse:
See you everyday
When you make fun of my self-esteem
You make my days turn grey
Yet I can't blame you for being me
Everyday a new brawl
Still don't like you at all
Chorus:
And how you love that I hate you
Makes me not know how to
Even when you tear me in two
You always come through
And I hate that I love you
Bridge:
When I see you
I need to come near
Because I become blue
Whenever you are not here...
With me
Chorus:
And how you love that I hate you
Makes me not know how to
Even when you tear me in two
You always come through
And I hate that I love you
Your precious torture
Your sweet revenge
Has me addicted to have more
Has me wanting to avenge
I wait for your call
Cause you have become my all
Chorus:
And how you love that I hate you
Makes me not know how to
Even when you tear me in two
You always come through
And I hate that I love you
Second verse:
See you everyday
When you make fun of my self-esteem
You make my days turn grey
Yet I can't blame you for being me
Everyday a new brawl
Still don't like you at all
Chorus:
And how you love that I hate you
Makes me not know how to
Even when you tear me in two
You always come through
And I hate that I love you
Bridge:
When I see you
I need to come near
Because I become blue
Whenever you are not here...
With me
Chorus:
And how you love that I hate you
Makes me not know how to
Even when you tear me in two
You always come through
And I hate that I love you



21 Comments
Good job. I like it.
thanks!
very nice!(:
thanks!!!
Cool :D
thanks!
I like the chorus :)
YAY! thanks!
It's sounds sort of like what a character in one of my stories thinks: She hates that she loves someone ^_^
Ooh! What story??
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/fYRTsND/Falling-For-You-For-glamorousgirls-story-contest
GRET! your a fantasitc writer!
GRAMMAR NAZI ATTACK AGAIN! You spelled great wrong. BUT THANK YOU!!! You're really sweet for saying so.
hahaha u damn nazis!!! lol np! when i read something this good i have to comment :3 (grr u made me check my grammer like twice!)
HAHAHAHA!!! still... thanks for believing i'm that good!
It's good!
Thanks!
Sweet song!! I like it!
Hahahaha... yeah. Thanks though.
Pretty good!
thank you!