Life is hard...Death is easy - A Draco Malfoy love story
I've seen alot of these around and so i thought I'd write one for my self.
Please. No haters. I must have at least 5 comments from 5 different people for me to write the next chapter. thanks!
Name:Anna Salvator. American. Gothish. loves black & dark things. Nice. A good person. a Hufflepuff 3rd year. pretty long black hair. blue eyes. pale. smallish. knows how to fight physically. a powerful wizard. pure blood.
draco is in 5th year
Chapter 1
Smitten
I was making my way down the train, trying to find an empty compartment, dragging my trunk behind me. I was early, so most of the compartments were empty anyway, but for some reason i kept going.
When i found a compartment that pleased me, i went in and hefted my trunk up to the racks, then sat down next to the window with my book: twilight.
Later, as i was deep in my book, at the part when Edward says, "And so the lion fell in love with the lamb," the compartment door slid open with a bang. my head jerked up and to my utter horror, Draco Malfoy strode in like he was the king of cool and i should bow down to him, folloed by his posse, Crabbe and Goyal (i know i spelt that wrong...anyway).
He came to a halt in the middle of the small space, staring at me, a smirk marring his handsome features. And was was good looking. Bleach blond hair, cut to the perfect length, stong face, beautiful silver-grey eyes, and a very kissable-looking mouth.
I took a deep breath, meeting his gaze. "What?" I asked.
"Oh, nothing," he said. "Crabbe, Goyal, find somewhere else to sit."
"But why?!" they said.
"Tell the mudblood to leave," Crabbe said gruffly.
Draco spun on his heel,hiding his face from my view. "I said go."
There must have been something in his facial expression that made them leave, because they scattered like mice. Draco slid the door shut and closed the blindes. then he finlly came to sit in front of me, followed by a few minutes of awkward silence.
"You don't have to be afraid of me," he finally said.
I snorted."Afraid of you? Ha. I'm more afraid of Victor Krum."
His eyes narrowed. "Ouch," he said sarcastically. "Some insult."
I smiled. "Thank you." I crossed my legs and closed my book shut with a thud and placed it beside me. "Care to say anything more so I can continue to insult you?"
He crossed his arms over his sinewy chest. "I'm bringing s3 xy back."
"Pul-eez. You're the reason it left." But he is s3 xy.
He frowned, then he smiled mischeviously. "You're beautiful."
I opened my mouth, then shut it quickly. I could feel myself start to blush.
"What?" he asked, leaning forward and resting his elbows on his knees. i pressed my back against the seat. "Nothing to say?"
"Nope."
He smiled again, chuckling, looking gorgeous.
Then, suddenly, the train lurched forward. We were on our way to Hogwarts.
* As You may have noticed I could use some ideas. so please. comment and tell me your ideas.*
When i found a compartment that pleased me, i went in and hefted my trunk up to the racks, then sat down next to the window with my book: twilight.
Later, as i was deep in my book, at the part when Edward says, "And so the lion fell in love with the lamb," the compartment door slid open with a bang. my head jerked up and to my utter horror, Draco Malfoy strode in like he was the king of cool and i should bow down to him, folloed by his posse, Crabbe and Goyal (i know i spelt that wrong...anyway).
He came to a halt in the middle of the small space, staring at me, a smirk marring his handsome features. And was was good looking. Bleach blond hair, cut to the perfect length, stong face, beautiful silver-grey eyes, and a very kissable-looking mouth.
I took a deep breath, meeting his gaze. "What?" I asked.
"Oh, nothing," he said. "Crabbe, Goyal, find somewhere else to sit."
"But why?!" they said.
"Tell the mudblood to leave," Crabbe said gruffly.
Draco spun on his heel,hiding his face from my view. "I said go."
There must have been something in his facial expression that made them leave, because they scattered like mice. Draco slid the door shut and closed the blindes. then he finlly came to sit in front of me, followed by a few minutes of awkward silence.
"You don't have to be afraid of me," he finally said.
I snorted."Afraid of you? Ha. I'm more afraid of Victor Krum."
His eyes narrowed. "Ouch," he said sarcastically. "Some insult."
I smiled. "Thank you." I crossed my legs and closed my book shut with a thud and placed it beside me. "Care to say anything more so I can continue to insult you?"
He crossed his arms over his sinewy chest. "I'm bringing s3 xy back."
"Pul-eez. You're the reason it left." But he is s3 xy.
He frowned, then he smiled mischeviously. "You're beautiful."
I opened my mouth, then shut it quickly. I could feel myself start to blush.
"What?" he asked, leaning forward and resting his elbows on his knees. i pressed my back against the seat. "Nothing to say?"
"Nope."
He smiled again, chuckling, looking gorgeous.
Then, suddenly, the train lurched forward. We were on our way to Hogwarts.
* As You may have noticed I could use some ideas. so please. comment and tell me your ideas.*



63 Comments
that was awardly good
thanks.
your welcome
Well, that was like a Twilight book,
"His pale features were gorgeous,"
Shoot really? sorry. was it good though?
Well, sort of
there should be like a moment when Draco does something stupid to mess it all up and she forgives him in like a 30-second time span cuz he looks so effin sexy
mabe he could walk up to her one day and kiss her in front of some guy she likes (but he doesnt like her back of course) and she kisses him back for a moment, but then she realizes who she's kissing and slaps him.... i like that. thanks for your input. im definitely going to use it.
no prob!
next!
I like it! You should continue with it :)
I liked it but I have a few things to say 1: plz do NOT follow the books cause I really don't want to have to read itbpver again only to have 1 new character. 2: make the chapters longer I like reading long stuff.
Well, like I said, i need ideas. It's easier to go by the books right now, but once I get more into the story, believe me, IT WILL BE DIFFERENT!
Haha good. I'm not good at writing books but I do have a VERY big imagination. But I have no clue what shoul happen next. Sry I'm not much help.
I'll ask if anybody can come up with anything. Thanks for the support.
Cool story.