new poem
its getting hectic in my house right now. i felt like writing something. this one is kinda personal so...
Cries within
makes me feel dim
afraid to let it out
afraid of your screams and shouts
holding on to reality
watching all this brutality
feels more like a nightmare
doesn''t anyone care?
falling inside
for all the lies
that i tell myself,
"it'll be ok...."
Feels like i'm abused
Emotionally used
I'm sure you've heard this a hundred times
but it feels like i'm going out of my mind.
Just waiting to get out.
of this prison, of this grave.
while you just ingnore my shouts,
and keep me locked in this cave.
falling inside
for all the lies
that i tell myself,
"it'll be ok...."
makes me feel dim
afraid to let it out
afraid of your screams and shouts
holding on to reality
watching all this brutality
feels more like a nightmare
doesn''t anyone care?
falling inside
for all the lies
that i tell myself,
"it'll be ok...."
Feels like i'm abused
Emotionally used
I'm sure you've heard this a hundred times
but it feels like i'm going out of my mind.
Just waiting to get out.
of this prison, of this grave.
while you just ingnore my shouts,
and keep me locked in this cave.
falling inside
for all the lies
that i tell myself,
"it'll be ok...."
10 Comments
its.........epic @_@
srsly that was good :P
and when you make it a little longer, you can turn it into a song :D
thanks for the new fave quiz :P
lol thanks,
its was awesome!!! keep up the writing!
Awesome, you are great at writing poems
Yea I agree with Roos_Cullen
You could so make it a song if you write more toit!! it was very good!
i liked it a lot and keep writing! ♥♥
O.o i liked it. honestly i agree with those two. it could be a song. a great song! o.O lol keep writing more to it :))
0.0 seems like someone has a secret talent 0.0
I liked it :) keep it up and u just might be as awesome as me =P
AWESOME
OMFG YOU CAN WRITE TOO?????????
*copy pastes Roos's comment*
i loved it