Nessie and Luna
This is a story I wrote at school and decided to pass it on to Quibblo.
it's about 2 girls, a cat, and a time machine. I can't actually remember every word of the story, but I'll do it roughly.
so it may not be exactly like i wrote it.
and no skipping ahead. And I changed the story title from Nessie's time Travel Adventure to Nessie and Luna.
It's not exactly a long novel, but I hope you like it.
Nessie was lying on her bedroom floor at quarter to 3 in the afternoon reading a book when the phone rang. ring ring ring It was her best friend Luna.
"Get over here right now I have a surprise."
So Nessie got over there right then and found Luna's new kitten,Bloopers, a purple cat.
"Lets take Bloopers to the park" said Nessie.
so they went to the park, but it was closed!
Then they found a red door. They went through it and found themselves in a red room with a red metal thingy on one wall. They fiddled with some buttons and everything went black.
Wow! They had actually time traveled to 2040 (it was 2011 just a few minutes ago.)
But during the time travel, Bloopers had suddenly gone missing, so they had to find him and Quickly with a capital Q.
A man walked by.
"Hi I'm Dan. U can teleport by yelling 'kazam' and u will teleport."
"Thx, bye." said Nessie and Luna.
And they yelled 'kazam' and they teleported.
"Hey there's bloopers!!!" said Luna.
They grabbed the cat and walked along, til they found a red door.
They walked in.
After they were back in their own time, Nessie got a phone call.
"Hi." said Luna. "I have discovered the genie in a bottle."
Here we go again.
"Get over here right now I have a surprise."
So Nessie got over there right then and found Luna's new kitten,Bloopers, a purple cat.
"Lets take Bloopers to the park" said Nessie.
so they went to the park, but it was closed!
Then they found a red door. They went through it and found themselves in a red room with a red metal thingy on one wall. They fiddled with some buttons and everything went black.
Wow! They had actually time traveled to 2040 (it was 2011 just a few minutes ago.)
But during the time travel, Bloopers had suddenly gone missing, so they had to find him and Quickly with a capital Q.
A man walked by.
"Hi I'm Dan. U can teleport by yelling 'kazam' and u will teleport."
"Thx, bye." said Nessie and Luna.
And they yelled 'kazam' and they teleported.
"Hey there's bloopers!!!" said Luna.
They grabbed the cat and walked along, til they found a red door.
They walked in.
After they were back in their own time, Nessie got a phone call.
"Hi." said Luna. "I have discovered the genie in a bottle."
Here we go again.
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