Evil Nature:Chapter 6
Ok,I'm really sorry,this took me so long to get up
As you may have read on my one story
My Computer Crashed on May 1st and It took about 2 weeks to get it back
and I couldnt get on as often
But I promised you I have not quit
and I wasnt lieing the stories will continue
so heres chapter 6
Hope its good
Its longer than the last one,(i think),
And I'll try to update quicker
please read the other chapters if you havent already
"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT!?!?!?!?",Crow screamed. "I DONT KNOW!!!!!!!!!",I replied back screaming just as loud. I was hiding the fact,that I was actucally quite scared. I didnt know what it was,But I had an idea. I got the feeling that someone was dead. "Maybe.....maybe you should check it out",Crow suggested,his voice cracking from fear as he spoke.. "Are you kidding me?",I asked.shaking "You go"
"No,you" "What?,You're the guy",I said. I was actucally too scared to go.
"Whats that matter?",my brother hissed,still trying to hide his fear."You're...you're braver",I said.my fear taking over my voice as I began to cry. "I'm I'm scared as crap,to go out there",I admitted. "You think,I'm braver?",he asked quitely. I didnt even have time to say anything when he added "I'm just as scared,I have no clue,what's going on". "I think I may have an IDEA,but I'm not exactly sure"I mummbled. I was pretty sure Crow didnt hear a single thing I said.
"Huh?,What did you just say Syb? "I think I may know whats wrong",I responded
"What?",Crow questioned,seeming to gain intrest in what I had to say.
"I think someone may have died",I felt kind of stupid after saying that though,I expected my brother to just laugh and blame it on the fact that I watch to many horror movies and that I'm just paranoid. The response I got however surprised the living crap out of me..."Y'know,you may actucally be right about that?",he agreed,breathing heavily. "You serious?",I asked,eyes bugging out. "Yeah",he answered its completely possible. "Maybe....maybe we should check it out",I suggested.
"Good Idea,"Crow agreed. "JUST make sure you stay behind me",he added.
"I will",I promised. And with that my brother began slowly creeping towards the door,with me following close behind. Then we halted to a sudden stop. "Why did you stop?",I asked getting scared all over again. I got no response,Crow just took a deep breath,and started towards the door again. And I started walking ,picking up the rear again. Then slowly he reached for the door nob,turned it,and pulled the door open very,very slowly...
"No,you" "What?,You're the guy",I said. I was actucally too scared to go.
"Whats that matter?",my brother hissed,still trying to hide his fear."You're...you're braver",I said.my fear taking over my voice as I began to cry. "I'm I'm scared as crap,to go out there",I admitted. "You think,I'm braver?",he asked quitely. I didnt even have time to say anything when he added "I'm just as scared,I have no clue,what's going on". "I think I may have an IDEA,but I'm not exactly sure"I mummbled. I was pretty sure Crow didnt hear a single thing I said.
"Huh?,What did you just say Syb? "I think I may know whats wrong",I responded
"What?",Crow questioned,seeming to gain intrest in what I had to say.
"I think someone may have died",I felt kind of stupid after saying that though,I expected my brother to just laugh and blame it on the fact that I watch to many horror movies and that I'm just paranoid. The response I got however surprised the living crap out of me..."Y'know,you may actucally be right about that?",he agreed,breathing heavily. "You serious?",I asked,eyes bugging out. "Yeah",he answered its completely possible. "Maybe....maybe we should check it out",I suggested.
"Good Idea,"Crow agreed. "JUST make sure you stay behind me",he added.
"I will",I promised. And with that my brother began slowly creeping towards the door,with me following close behind. Then we halted to a sudden stop. "Why did you stop?",I asked getting scared all over again. I got no response,Crow just took a deep breath,and started towards the door again. And I started walking ,picking up the rear again. Then slowly he reached for the door nob,turned it,and pulled the door open very,very slowly...
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aWesomE....continue plzzz
Next pleas :)
sorry it took me awhile I'll try to get the next one up this week (maybe even today)