I'd go far for a wanna be rockstar (a because they can story)

"Jed! Where late.....again!" Jackson stood over his friends sleeping form beating him on the head with a pillow. Out of the whole band Jed had to be the laziest. And just had to sleep in on the most important day of there lives! The this is bat country tour with short stack and heroes for hire. They where finally getting out there, getting there music heard! And Jed had to sleep in. 
"go away!" the bass player mumbled into his pillow. Rolling over and protecting his head from the pillow with a skinny arm 
"don't make me get the guys! You know how James woke me up last tour" with that word Jed shoot up and quickly made his way around his room, opening draws and pulling out jeans "we're waiting for you outside in the car, hurry up!" with that Jackson left him to change and headed toward his friends in the sliver car parked in Jed's drive way 
"he up?" Eddie asked, cooling down from apparently very funny joke James had just told him 
"yer. Had to threaten him with James but he's up" Jackson simply shrugged and climbed into the back seat of the car. Eddie was driving for this trip and, all truth be told, every band member told there mum they loved them before climbing in the car. Finally Jed came running out the front door, pulling on one arm of his brown fake leather jacket 
"ok I'm ready!" he announced, hand on the door handle "wait eddies driving?" we all nodded and Eddie smiled. On those nods Jed ran back to the front door and yelled 'I love you mum!' before running back to the car and jumping in 
"I am hurt by your guys lack of trust" Eddie pouted and pressed a hand to his heart, as if it hurt "I'm not that Badder driver" the boys said nothing, but the engine starting up masked there sniggers. While the boys where praying that Eddie wouldn't kill them, The band that they where to support was having difficulties with a certain sister. 
"why do you have to come with us?" Shaun whined, packing his guitar into the back of the white people mover. 
"because I know about make up! And let's face it, you could use it" the girl, examining shaun's face for imperfections, was about as tall as her brother (maybe a foot or two shorter) and had his hair for sure. The black locks where dyed darker than her brothers making her pale face stand out from behind the ragged cut fringe over one eye. Her eyes where green (once again like her bothers) and where framed by naturally long lashes. You could call them twins if not for the age difference. She was 17 in October and was not letting her bother forget it. 
"I'm on stage! No ones going to care if i have a pimple of two showing" he shut the boot with a thud making a zoned out bradie jump. 
"what the hell?! You almost gave me a heart attack!" braide threw his empty up & go at Shaun, making the singer laugh at his drummers childish ways 
"little Sarah Jane here wants to go on tour with us" shaun said, pushing his sister towards the spiderman loving guy, leaning against the cars side. Sarah Jane instantly blushed. Her stupid brother knew she had a small crush on the guy, and being massively shy around cute guys (yet confident around guy friends) didn't help. 
"then what's the problem? SJ's cool" bradie offered her a malt biscuit which she gladly took. Bradie had called her SJ for 4 years now. He said it was cool, like MJ from spiderman, and the nick name stuck 
"she's my sister!" Shaun's augment was futile as he finally gave up and sighed nosily "fine! But your hanging with the because they can guys, people your own age. And don't get in my way. It's embarrassing having your little sis on tour" he pushed her playfully in the shoulder before making his way into the back of the car. 
"so let me get this straight. Shaun wants me to spend most oh the tour with four hots guys, around my age?" sarah Jane looked at bradie for confirmation 
"that's about the gist of it" he shrugged and ate a few more  biscuits before joining Shaun in the car 
"awesome" while it was now short stacks turn to yell at a bass player for being late the because they can boys where half way into there trip to the Enmore theater. Jed and Jackson had fired up a lord of the rings movie in the back, and where watching contently. Eddie and James where in the front, talking over there set list for the shows to come 
"no we should play rockstar at Perth" James was arguing "I mean it's our first trip there, first show so...." 
"but it's an old song wouldn't they what to hear new songs?" Eddie flicked his blinker and turned left at an old roundabout then swiftly turned it off 
"it's oldie but it's a classic. They'll love it" Eddie shrugged and caved into james' argument. The sun was blazing now, Eddie had to pull down the cars blocker and James was force into his sunnies by the glare. 
"guys where almost there put that movie away" Eddie said, turning into view of the venue. Jed and Jackson quickly pulled out there ear plugs and turned off the laptop, packing it neatly away "you guys ready?" the car pulled up to the band entrance and stopped with a small jolt in there parking spot.
"defiantly" was chorused by the band as they opened there doors and began to unpack there gear. 

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