Over my Dead Body Chapter 3
Hi Everyone!!! Thankyou all for reading my past chapters I have decided to make this a book and post all the chapter on Quibblo!! I have decided to name the main character Maya!!! AAHHHHH I'm just so excited!!! Ok so please comment and give me your HONEST opinion!!! Thanks!!
Have you ever wondered what it would be like to be someone else, that had a better life than you do? Well I have.
I awake in James arms. He looks down at me a 5 foot 3 girl with exotic sparkling green eyes, long black eye lashes, and long black hair. He was beautiful how could he ever like me? James was 6 foot something with blond hair, wonderful clear blue ocean water eyes, and was very pale. I tried to speak but he put his strong fingers to my mouth and shooshed me while cradling my petite body on the floor. I begin to get nervous and the question "Where am I", pops out. He clears his throat and says with a deeper voice than I remember, "We are in Romania". I begin to wonder how I got here and why I am here. I ask, "why am I here"? " You are here because your mother found out about the vampire world and that your father was a hermit Vampire." I had no response for what he said except to start crying and remember that my mother was killed. And then the obvious question comes forward. "Does that mean I am a vampire?" HE begins to rock his body in a comforting manner. And after a while he begins telling me the story of my past......
I awake in James arms. He looks down at me a 5 foot 3 girl with exotic sparkling green eyes, long black eye lashes, and long black hair. He was beautiful how could he ever like me? James was 6 foot something with blond hair, wonderful clear blue ocean water eyes, and was very pale. I tried to speak but he put his strong fingers to my mouth and shooshed me while cradling my petite body on the floor. I begin to get nervous and the question "Where am I", pops out. He clears his throat and says with a deeper voice than I remember, "We are in Romania". I begin to wonder how I got here and why I am here. I ask, "why am I here"? " You are here because your mother found out about the vampire world and that your father was a hermit Vampire." I had no response for what he said except to start crying and remember that my mother was killed. And then the obvious question comes forward. "Does that mean I am a vampire?" HE begins to rock his body in a comforting manner. And after a while he begins telling me the story of my past......
6 Comments
great! But did you know you can make the whole story in one place by clicking Write another chapter on the first story?
ok you HAVE 2 make another one!!!! make a whole book i mean the way it goes you could make a whole series it is just SO AWESOME!!! 5 stars
This isn't terrible. Nice.
Though, extremely short. lol.
Hahahahaha yeah H I learned that but i've already done it seprerate what should i do?? Oh and THANKYOU sparklersareawesome!!!! Ur really....nice!!! And lol activebird!!!
i think you should just continue writing chapters on the 3rd one...oh and by the way i think you are doing GREAT with this book i wish her name was emily but i still absouloutly LOVE this story even if it is just the 3rd chapter
Thanku soooooo much!!!!