A Place in my Heart: A Percy Jackson Love Story
Name: Violet McKnight
Hair: Mid-Back Lenght, Blonde, straight
Skin: Tan
Height: 5'4
Changes: Annabeth doesn't like Percy, Luke is good.
Chapter 1
Camp Half Blood, Here I Come!
My Protector, Fiona, walked me into Camp Half Blood. It looked aboslutely beautiful! I always loved nature and being outside. It was like a second home to me.
"There's going to be a feast tonight to find out who your parent is and what cabin you'll be staying in. Hopefully, you'll be in the Athena cabin like me! Annabeth, you, and I will have so much fun together!" Fiona said.
"Well, I was hoping to be in the Demeter cabin because nature is basically my thing. I always felt right when I was around it. You know what I mean?"
"Yeah, I know. Well, the feast is starting really soon, so if you want to get ready you should start now. Use the Athena cabin."
I pulled my suitcases to the Athena cabin. Thankfully, no one was there at the moment. I took the outfit I wanted to wear out and put it on.
Links for outfit:
http://www.missselfridge.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplay?catalogId=33055&categoryId=208040&productId=1614916&cmpid=affwin1&beginIndex=0&viewAllFlag=&langId=-1&parent_category_rn=208036&storeId=12554&_$ja=tsid:29609|prd:78888
http://www.flickr.com/photos/13472684@N00/193630108/
I put on some make-up and scrunched my hair. Gotta look good on your first day at a camp. I finished just in time for the feast. I ran out the cabin and when I walked into the feast, it seemed as if all the boys were staring. I must look good! I walked to where Chiron told me too. Turns out, I'm a child of Apollo! Cool! Now wonder why I easily pick up music and instruments and love being under the sun!
After I was done eating, I decided to walk around the feast and see what the people look like. Eventually I walked by the Posieden table. Woah! There was a really cute boy there. I should talk to him! I sat down at the Posieden table next to the boy.
V: "Hey, I'm Violet! So how's Camp Half Blood?"
P: "I'm Percy. It's amazing! Especially the food!"
V: "Percy. Interesting name."
P: "I guess you could say that.."
V: "Well, I'll se you around. Im going to catch up with my friend Fiona, and meet some more people. See you around?"
P: "Sure. We should sword fight tomorrow!"
V: "Sounds good! I did fencing for 10 years before I came here! You're going down!"
P: "We'll see about that!"
Wow! Percy is hot! And so easy to talk to. Wonder if there are any other boys like him here.
All of a sudden, a cute boy caught my eye. He was at the Hermes table. Better go talk to him. I'll talk to Fiona later. I sat down next to the boy
V: "Hey. I'm Violet. Is the Apollo cabin nice?"
L: "Im Luke. From what I've heard, the Apollo cabin is really cool. Hope you like it there."
V: "I hope I like it too. I'm going to be spending alot of time there."
L: "If you don't like it, you can hang at my cabin. It's pretty awesome if you ask me!"
V: "I'll be the judge of that!"
I walked away from the Hermes table to catch up with Fiona. I was supposed to talk to her as soon as I was done eating. Oops!
V: "Hey Fiona!" hugs
F: hugs back This is my best friend, Annabeth. Annabeth, this is Violet. I was her protector.
A: "Hey Violet. What's up?"
V: "Just trying to talk to people at the camp. Make some friends. So far, I've talked to Percy, Luke, and you guys.
F: "Wow, you have alot of people to meet!'
V: "Yeah. See you later!"
I went to find some more people that caught my eye. Quickly, I found someone. She looked like she liked punk alot.
V: "Hi. Im Violet. Like your outfit!"
T: "I'm Thalia. And thanks!"
V: "Welcome. Do you have any half brothers?" I realized that was a stupid question, because I saw a boy right next to her. He was kinda cute.
T: "What do you think?"
V: "Sorry, stupid question. See you around?"
T: "Yepp!"
I went to talk to her brother.
V: "Hey. I am Violet."
J: "I'm Jason."
V: "Hi Jason."
J: "So how do you like camp so far?"
V: "It's really cool looking, from what I've seen."
J: "It is really cool."
V: "Yeah, I can tell!"
J: "Soo.."
V: "I'm tired. Gonna go to my cabin. See you later?"
J: "Sure."
I walked away. Today was a good day. Now for me to go to bed!
"There's going to be a feast tonight to find out who your parent is and what cabin you'll be staying in. Hopefully, you'll be in the Athena cabin like me! Annabeth, you, and I will have so much fun together!" Fiona said.
"Well, I was hoping to be in the Demeter cabin because nature is basically my thing. I always felt right when I was around it. You know what I mean?"
"Yeah, I know. Well, the feast is starting really soon, so if you want to get ready you should start now. Use the Athena cabin."
I pulled my suitcases to the Athena cabin. Thankfully, no one was there at the moment. I took the outfit I wanted to wear out and put it on.
Links for outfit:
http://www.missselfridge.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/ProductDisplay?catalogId=33055&categoryId=208040&productId=1614916&cmpid=affwin1&beginIndex=0&viewAllFlag=&langId=-1&parent_category_rn=208036&storeId=12554&_$ja=tsid:29609|prd:78888
http://www.flickr.com/photos/13472684@N00/193630108/
I put on some make-up and scrunched my hair. Gotta look good on your first day at a camp. I finished just in time for the feast. I ran out the cabin and when I walked into the feast, it seemed as if all the boys were staring. I must look good! I walked to where Chiron told me too. Turns out, I'm a child of Apollo! Cool! Now wonder why I easily pick up music and instruments and love being under the sun!
After I was done eating, I decided to walk around the feast and see what the people look like. Eventually I walked by the Posieden table. Woah! There was a really cute boy there. I should talk to him! I sat down at the Posieden table next to the boy.
V: "Hey, I'm Violet! So how's Camp Half Blood?"
P: "I'm Percy. It's amazing! Especially the food!"
V: "Percy. Interesting name."
P: "I guess you could say that.."
V: "Well, I'll se you around. Im going to catch up with my friend Fiona, and meet some more people. See you around?"
P: "Sure. We should sword fight tomorrow!"
V: "Sounds good! I did fencing for 10 years before I came here! You're going down!"
P: "We'll see about that!"
Wow! Percy is hot! And so easy to talk to. Wonder if there are any other boys like him here.
All of a sudden, a cute boy caught my eye. He was at the Hermes table. Better go talk to him. I'll talk to Fiona later. I sat down next to the boy
V: "Hey. I'm Violet. Is the Apollo cabin nice?"
L: "Im Luke. From what I've heard, the Apollo cabin is really cool. Hope you like it there."
V: "I hope I like it too. I'm going to be spending alot of time there."
L: "If you don't like it, you can hang at my cabin. It's pretty awesome if you ask me!"
V: "I'll be the judge of that!"
I walked away from the Hermes table to catch up with Fiona. I was supposed to talk to her as soon as I was done eating. Oops!
V: "Hey Fiona!" hugs
F: hugs back This is my best friend, Annabeth. Annabeth, this is Violet. I was her protector.
A: "Hey Violet. What's up?"
V: "Just trying to talk to people at the camp. Make some friends. So far, I've talked to Percy, Luke, and you guys.
F: "Wow, you have alot of people to meet!'
V: "Yeah. See you later!"
I went to find some more people that caught my eye. Quickly, I found someone. She looked like she liked punk alot.
V: "Hi. Im Violet. Like your outfit!"
T: "I'm Thalia. And thanks!"
V: "Welcome. Do you have any half brothers?" I realized that was a stupid question, because I saw a boy right next to her. He was kinda cute.
T: "What do you think?"
V: "Sorry, stupid question. See you around?"
T: "Yepp!"
I went to talk to her brother.
V: "Hey. I am Violet."
J: "I'm Jason."
V: "Hi Jason."
J: "So how do you like camp so far?"
V: "It's really cool looking, from what I've seen."
J: "It is really cool."
V: "Yeah, I can tell!"
J: "Soo.."
V: "I'm tired. Gonna go to my cabin. See you later?"
J: "Sure."
I walked away. Today was a good day. Now for me to go to bed!



15 Comments
WOW really good so far next plz
Ok first off thila never rly went to camp and grover was anabeths protector not some made upp person called fiona and thereis no guy named jason in any of the books that defeists the purpous of the prophocy srry person but this story sucked
thanks critisism (sp?) is good but could you not be rude about it? ok, thanks.
Nope ill b as rude as I want this chick clearly didnt do her home work b 4 makeing this story ive read all 5books 5 times and this is an insult to the books
I agree with what you say completely but it would be better to say it a tad nicer. Once again, what you said is true though.
there is 2 a guy named jason have u ever heard of the heros of olymious(sp?) {the continuing version of percy jackson and the olymipans} n yes he is thalia's half brother n havnt u evry heard of imagination?
Jason isn't thalia's half brother. The both have the same mom and dad
Hey, moonmistress. This is late, but Jason's actual sister is Thalia. You'd know that if you read The Last Olympian. And there's this thing called an imagination. Use it. If it's a FanFic, there's going to be made up people. If you don't like it, you don't have to be so rude about it.
Ok ill try to b nicer but the story still sucked
there is another series called the heros of olymious(sp?) n it is a continuing of the percy jackson series. in tha 1st book there is a guy named jason,son of the roman version of zues so yes there is a guy named jason! n yes he is thalia's full brother!
nxt plz!!!
Ok fine but thilas brother jason being there still defeats the purpose of the prophcey
Jason sounds so romantic!!!
LOVE IT NEXT 1 PLZ!
Next please!