The Games
Me: tall, dirty blonde, and 17
The man: gruff and brown haired 38
Carmen Patrone: Tall, strawberry blonde, 17
Je: (pronounced Jay) Wolf pup. male.
Please comment!
Chapter 1
Let the games begin
This is craziness!
Your probably wondering what's so crazy right?
Well.......
It all started 2 nights ago
I was at my cousins wedding when this man asked me to go outside. I was obidient and followed.
We walked for a bit when we came to a van. I saw it and knew what was going on. I tried to run. The man called "get 'er!"
Two giant black dogs came and tackled me. They pinned me and dragged me back to their sick, cruel master.
He then said, "If you don't be"ave yourself, you'll be the first ine gone!"
I was then shoved in to the back of the van.
"You will be a fun one to shoot"
He gave me two pills.
Before I was completley out he tied me to the seat in the back and put a strip of duct tape over my mouth. Which is still there.
I was asleep for the rest of the night until early afternoon. I woke up.
And here I am. Seven other people besides me were all in the same room all tied to seperate chairs.
The man walked in with his two mutts.
He began to talk, "You have been brought here today because you have all, in one way or another, proven yourself to be able to compete in my ga-"
Someone next to me was struggling, trying to untie himself.
"fine if thats how you want it..."
The man shot the young boy next to me. He looked about thirteen.
I saw the life leave his eyes.
My first death.
"Now. As I was sayng you are all going to participate in my little game. If any of you deny it.... You will die.'
"now does anyone not want to be apart of the games?"
A girl my age with red hair slowly, hesitently rose her arm.
The man chuckled.
Another one is shot
"Anyone else?"
.....
"I thought so"
"rules you may ask?"
" well first rule: you must no interacting with other, rule two: have fun"
He laughed into sort of a cackle
"Now lets go, GET UP!!!"
We all practically jump out of our seats.
We go outside.
One by one, he blindfolds us all.
"follow my voice"
We start walking down what I sense is a gravel road.
He begins to sing 'If I had You' in a cracked voice.
I begin to laugh.
I hear him turn back.
"Who's laughing"
I raise my hand hoping I can get this over with quick.
He comes over and rips off my blindfold.
"Well.... Do you think my singing is.... funny?!"
He turns beat red.
He pulls out a large knife.
He slits my cheek.
"yes," I say.
"Well! ok then you will be the first one!"
He puts my blindfold on again. Tighter than before.
We all walk again.
I think for about a mile.
After a while he stops us and takes off our blind folds and ropes
He stands in front of all of us.
" Welcome"
"NOW GO!!!!!"
We all run off.
I immediatley climb up a tree. I already have lost two friends. I know not of there names.
I will never forget them.
In a tree over I see a girl whom I guess is 15. I put my finger to my lips and make the silence gesture.
I'll be safe til the morning.
Should I continue?
Please comment!
tell me names and descriptions. I'll work a few into the story.
Your probably wondering what's so crazy right?
Well.......
It all started 2 nights ago
I was at my cousins wedding when this man asked me to go outside. I was obidient and followed.
We walked for a bit when we came to a van. I saw it and knew what was going on. I tried to run. The man called "get 'er!"
Two giant black dogs came and tackled me. They pinned me and dragged me back to their sick, cruel master.
He then said, "If you don't be"ave yourself, you'll be the first ine gone!"
I was then shoved in to the back of the van.
"You will be a fun one to shoot"
He gave me two pills.
Before I was completley out he tied me to the seat in the back and put a strip of duct tape over my mouth. Which is still there.
I was asleep for the rest of the night until early afternoon. I woke up.
And here I am. Seven other people besides me were all in the same room all tied to seperate chairs.
The man walked in with his two mutts.
He began to talk, "You have been brought here today because you have all, in one way or another, proven yourself to be able to compete in my ga-"
Someone next to me was struggling, trying to untie himself.
"fine if thats how you want it..."
The man shot the young boy next to me. He looked about thirteen.
I saw the life leave his eyes.
My first death.
"Now. As I was sayng you are all going to participate in my little game. If any of you deny it.... You will die.'
"now does anyone not want to be apart of the games?"
A girl my age with red hair slowly, hesitently rose her arm.
The man chuckled.
Another one is shot
"Anyone else?"
.....
"I thought so"
"rules you may ask?"
" well first rule: you must no interacting with other, rule two: have fun"
He laughed into sort of a cackle
"Now lets go, GET UP!!!"
We all practically jump out of our seats.
We go outside.
One by one, he blindfolds us all.
"follow my voice"
We start walking down what I sense is a gravel road.
He begins to sing 'If I had You' in a cracked voice.
I begin to laugh.
I hear him turn back.
"Who's laughing"
I raise my hand hoping I can get this over with quick.
He comes over and rips off my blindfold.
"Well.... Do you think my singing is.... funny?!"
He turns beat red.
He pulls out a large knife.
He slits my cheek.
"yes," I say.
"Well! ok then you will be the first one!"
He puts my blindfold on again. Tighter than before.
We all walk again.
I think for about a mile.
After a while he stops us and takes off our blind folds and ropes
He stands in front of all of us.
" Welcome"
"NOW GO!!!!!"
We all run off.
I immediatley climb up a tree. I already have lost two friends. I know not of there names.
I will never forget them.
In a tree over I see a girl whom I guess is 15. I put my finger to my lips and make the silence gesture.
I'll be safe til the morning.
Should I continue?
Please comment!
tell me names and descriptions. I'll work a few into the story.



30 Comments
oops its supposed to be patrone not patron sorry
wow noooo comments.............................................
HAHA I MADE A COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jk. Luv it!!!!!
Carmen should die.................
wow. ur positive........... but yes she will die............... eventually
MWA HA HA!!!!!!
Um, it's good but maybe try writing in paragraphs and not in lines?
to herm_own_ninny: I find it easier to read if its in lines. i also feel that most readers find it easier too. no hard feelings. thats just how i write, thank u for bringing it to my attention
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Oh yeah, and take Herm_own_ninny's advice. Just an opinion...
Im on vacation so thats y I'm not on alot. SORRY! PLZ COMMENT!!!!!!! PRETTY PRETTY PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a really good read! I think though that Je should find the correct one, but it's in a bush, while all the other ones are fake! Great So Far!
thats a greast idea. i might change it up a bit but i will definetly take that into account. thank you very much
make more!!!