The Way You Make Me Feel (A Michael Jackson Love Story)
Heyyy... Since I luv Michael Jackson, here's a story about him.
Name: Nikki Anderson
Looks: Regular highth, thigh lenghth red hair, pale, freckled, white skin, sparkly green eyes, hot, skinny, 12-years-old
Personality: Tom-Boy, tough, fun-loving, crazy, funny, athletic
Family: Mom, Dad, Darren, 15, Max and Matt, 13, Ethan, 8, and Nathan, 2
BFFs: Cathy Carter (C.C.) and Vanessa Wright (Nessa)
You don't care about colors. Just as long as they are nice. Always wears fedora
Chapter 1
Ohmigosh!!! You got Jackson 5 tickets!?!
"Nikki... Nikki.... NIKKI!!!" someone screamed in my ear.
"Wassa matta?" I asked, stupidly.
"Nikki, Mom and Dad want you downstairs," said Ethan (the Evil). "They have a surprise for you."
"Wha- Oh!! Today's my birthday!" I said
"Yeah, way to figure that out, Oh Smart One," Ethan sneered. Ugh, what a nightmare. Anyway, I got my favorite outfit on (http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=33429789), Put my hair in a pony tail (I never wore in plain) and went downstairs to my kitchen and found my whole family shouting "Happy Birthday!!" at me. Darren should have been on a date and the twins should have been with friends, but they were both there! It was especially cute to watch 2-year-old Quinten try singing "Happy Birthday."
"Here's you're special breakfast!" Mom said. Mmmm..... Waffles with a mountain of whipped cream and strawberries.
"Thank you all!" I said. "One problem, Mom. Why'd you send Ethan to get me?" Everyone started laughing except Mom and Dad, who were giving me the old that-wasn't-funny look.
"Kidding!" I said, hastily.
"Sooo," Mom said casually. "What do you want to do today?"
"I dunno," I replied.
"How 'bout going to the Jackson 5 concert tonight?" she asked, grinning.
I nearly passed out! "OHMIGOSH!!! YOU GOT JACKSON 5 TICKETS!?!?"
"Do you like our presant?" Mom asked.
"ARE YOU KIDDING?" I screamed. "THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!! Are C.C. and Nessa going to come?"
"That's why there are 3 tickets!" Mom said.
------------------------At the Concert--------------------------------------------------------
We were waiting outside to go in when the Jackson 5 walked in! I swear, Michael winked at me! I picket out a very special out fit for this night (http://www.polyvore.com/at_concert/set?id=33985785) and I was wishing someone would notice..... looks like Michael did... I giggled to myself. We went in and got in our FRONT ROW SEATS!!! Then they started, starting Rockin' Robin (one of my personal favorites), then I Want You Back, The Love You Save, then something unexpected happend... Michael went into the audience and pulled me onstage!! Then he asked me to sing ABC with him!
"Of course," I said. "You're MICHAEL JACKSON!! Who wouldn't want to sing with you or your brothers?" He started blushing. Tee Hee...
We sang like we were connected. It was amazing!! After we finished, Michael murmured to me, "Meet me backstage."
"Okay," I answered back. I got off stage and C.C. and Nessa were like "OMGOSH girl! You were singing with MICHAEL FREAKING JACKSON!!!"
"I know right" I shouted back. After the concert I went backstage with C.C. and Nessa on my heels.
"Hey, Michael," I said as he opened the dressing room door. "Sorry I didn't introduce myself proplerly. I'm Nikki. Nikki Anderson. And these are my friends, C.C. and Nessa."
"Pleasure to meet you," Michael said politely.
"Don't tell me who is who. I want to guess," I said. "Jackie, Tito, Jermaine, Marlon, and, of course, Michael."
"You are right!" said Jermaine. "Nice to meet you." he said as he kissed my hand. I giggled, but Michael looked murderous.
We stayed and chatted for awhile, then I looked at the clock on the wall.
"It's really late now," I said. "We have to go."
"But- But-," Michael stammered. "But why?"
"Because my parents don't know that I'm alright."
"Oh," Michael looked disappointed. "Before you go, I just want you to know that you are like the best friend I never had."
"Michael," I said smiling sadly. That was the sweetest thing anyone has ever said to me!" All of a sudden, I feel a push and jerk forwards. So does Michael. Our lips meet... We are both shocked but Michael relaxes into the kiss. Soon I kiss back. We were the only two people in the world. I pull away and look into his eyes. His adorable, chocolate brown eyes.
"Goodbye, Michael," I say, never taking my eyes off his. "I will call you evey week and write you, too."
"So will I," He says back, looking into my eyes. "We will never forget you..."
As I walk out of the door I turn around and say to my friends, "Alright, who pushed me?" Nessa raised her and and smiled guiltily. I attack her with a bear hug.
"Thank you, thank you, thank you!!" I scream.
I went home, and Mom asked how it went.
"Oh," I reply. "They just started with my favorite song and I got to sing with Michael Jackson. I'm going to be calling him a lot now."
"That's lovely, Honey," Mom said.
---------------------------------------Michael's POV---------------------------------------------
As Nikki walked out the door, I asked "Alright, you guys, who pushed me?" Jermaine raised his hand and I jumped on him and gave him a huge hug.
"Thank you!!!" I shouted in his ear.
"Heh, heh," Jackie said. "Michael, you're quite the ladies man, huh?"
"Aww, c'mon, guys," I said bashfully.
"It's true, Mike," said Marlon. Then they all jumped on me and started tickling me.
"Stop it, stop it!!" I screamed. When they stoped, Tito said "We will never forget Nikki Anderson."
"Never," we all agreed.
"Wassa matta?" I asked, stupidly.
"Nikki, Mom and Dad want you downstairs," said Ethan (the Evil). "They have a surprise for you."
"Wha- Oh!! Today's my birthday!" I said
"Yeah, way to figure that out, Oh Smart One," Ethan sneered. Ugh, what a nightmare. Anyway, I got my favorite outfit on (http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=33429789), Put my hair in a pony tail (I never wore in plain) and went downstairs to my kitchen and found my whole family shouting "Happy Birthday!!" at me. Darren should have been on a date and the twins should have been with friends, but they were both there! It was especially cute to watch 2-year-old Quinten try singing "Happy Birthday."
"Here's you're special breakfast!" Mom said. Mmmm..... Waffles with a mountain of whipped cream and strawberries.
"Thank you all!" I said. "One problem, Mom. Why'd you send Ethan to get me?" Everyone started laughing except Mom and Dad, who were giving me the old that-wasn't-funny look.
"Kidding!" I said, hastily.
"Sooo," Mom said casually. "What do you want to do today?"
"I dunno," I replied.
"How 'bout going to the Jackson 5 concert tonight?" she asked, grinning.
I nearly passed out! "OHMIGOSH!!! YOU GOT JACKSON 5 TICKETS!?!?"
"Do you like our presant?" Mom asked.
"ARE YOU KIDDING?" I screamed. "THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!! Are C.C. and Nessa going to come?"
"That's why there are 3 tickets!" Mom said.
------------------------At the Concert--------------------------------------------------------
We were waiting outside to go in when the Jackson 5 walked in! I swear, Michael winked at me! I picket out a very special out fit for this night (http://www.polyvore.com/at_concert/set?id=33985785) and I was wishing someone would notice..... looks like Michael did... I giggled to myself. We went in and got in our FRONT ROW SEATS!!! Then they started, starting Rockin' Robin (one of my personal favorites), then I Want You Back, The Love You Save, then something unexpected happend... Michael went into the audience and pulled me onstage!! Then he asked me to sing ABC with him!
"Of course," I said. "You're MICHAEL JACKSON!! Who wouldn't want to sing with you or your brothers?" He started blushing. Tee Hee...
We sang like we were connected. It was amazing!! After we finished, Michael murmured to me, "Meet me backstage."
"Okay," I answered back. I got off stage and C.C. and Nessa were like "OMGOSH girl! You were singing with MICHAEL FREAKING JACKSON!!!"
"I know right" I shouted back. After the concert I went backstage with C.C. and Nessa on my heels.
"Hey, Michael," I said as he opened the dressing room door. "Sorry I didn't introduce myself proplerly. I'm Nikki. Nikki Anderson. And these are my friends, C.C. and Nessa."
"Pleasure to meet you," Michael said politely.
"Don't tell me who is who. I want to guess," I said. "Jackie, Tito, Jermaine, Marlon, and, of course, Michael."
"You are right!" said Jermaine. "Nice to meet you." he said as he kissed my hand. I giggled, but Michael looked murderous.
We stayed and chatted for awhile, then I looked at the clock on the wall.
"It's really late now," I said. "We have to go."
"But- But-," Michael stammered. "But why?"
"Because my parents don't know that I'm alright."
"Oh," Michael looked disappointed. "Before you go, I just want you to know that you are like the best friend I never had."
"Michael," I said smiling sadly. That was the sweetest thing anyone has ever said to me!" All of a sudden, I feel a push and jerk forwards. So does Michael. Our lips meet... We are both shocked but Michael relaxes into the kiss. Soon I kiss back. We were the only two people in the world. I pull away and look into his eyes. His adorable, chocolate brown eyes.
"Goodbye, Michael," I say, never taking my eyes off his. "I will call you evey week and write you, too."
"So will I," He says back, looking into my eyes. "We will never forget you..."
As I walk out of the door I turn around and say to my friends, "Alright, who pushed me?" Nessa raised her and and smiled guiltily. I attack her with a bear hug.
"Thank you, thank you, thank you!!" I scream.
I went home, and Mom asked how it went.
"Oh," I reply. "They just started with my favorite song and I got to sing with Michael Jackson. I'm going to be calling him a lot now."
"That's lovely, Honey," Mom said.
---------------------------------------Michael's POV---------------------------------------------
As Nikki walked out the door, I asked "Alright, you guys, who pushed me?" Jermaine raised his hand and I jumped on him and gave him a huge hug.
"Thank you!!!" I shouted in his ear.
"Heh, heh," Jackie said. "Michael, you're quite the ladies man, huh?"
"Aww, c'mon, guys," I said bashfully.
"It's true, Mike," said Marlon. Then they all jumped on me and started tickling me.
"Stop it, stop it!!" I screamed. When they stoped, Tito said "We will never forget Nikki Anderson."
"Never," we all agreed.



14 Comments
I like it! I've never heard if anyone doing a MJ Love story, so Next please!
Well, look around! There are a lot. I spesificaly (sp?) like The Girl Is Mine by I_lOvE_mIcKeY_mOuSe.
I really like it! It's cute :D
Btw, thank you for saying you like my story too, lol
Yours is the best Michael Jackson love story in the whole univirse!!!!
Love it!! Make more!!
I love it!! Its awesome!
Write more!!!
i luve it! it's so cute! make more!!!
That was cute. More pwease!
Yay! I'm working on the nxt chapter right now!! *Stares into space with thinking face on*
cool
Cool! I like it, next! :)
loved.the.2nd.chapter.....write.more