Daughter to Father
People think being an alcoholic is just innocent fun, well it's not. It can tear a family apart; it can change lives forever. Please comment.
Chapter 1
They Don't Know
They think it's funny,
It makes me sick
They think it's harmless,
I know it's not
They don't know what it's like,
I do
They think it doesn't matter,
I know it does
They think it doesn't bother me,
It always will
They don't know what it's like,
I do
They haven't seen what i've seen,
They haven't heard what i've heard,
They haven't felt what i've felt,
They don't know what it's like,
I do
It makes me sick
They think it's harmless,
I know it's not
They don't know what it's like,
I do
They think it doesn't matter,
I know it does
They think it doesn't bother me,
It always will
They don't know what it's like,
I do
They haven't seen what i've seen,
They haven't heard what i've heard,
They haven't felt what i've felt,
They don't know what it's like,
I do



22 Comments
That is so sad!!!! Was this written by you? It was nice the way it was written keep it up!!
yea, i wrote it
It's nice and I hope that one day you're right and your dad will realize whats come over him. I'll pray for you!!
thank you
wow amazing story prediction, is this a true story or a fantasy 1
true story
i mean is that really ur father attitude in ur house
yea
this is so sad. i'm glad my dad isn't like that.
yea, its hard 4 her
i feel sorry 4 u, i wish god would knock some sense in his head,
haha thanks me too
ur welcome n don't worry, someday he will have his lost senses
Oh, my gosh, you really have talent. You need to enter this in a contest. I've won quite a few, and my poetry isn't half as good as yours is.
umm... im not that good
Are U nuts, yes you are! I LIVE poetry, and I know that you are better than a lot of people I've read. You really let your emotions come through.
well thank you:) i just wrote it to get it off my mind but i didnt think it was any good
haha well thanks for reading my stuff, i didnt think anyone would read it
well thank you:) i just wrote it to get it off my mind but i didnt think it was any good
Well, it was! END OF ARGUMENT!!! Just kidding. ;-)