Feeling Hazy
Feeling different but just can't explain it? Then this poem\ story is ment for you.
Crawling through a tunnel, feeling like life will never stop. Seeing faces I've seen before but just can't seem to remember. It seems fake,and crazy! My life is hazy to hazy to see what's on the other side. Smoke bursting with different color's. As I start to remember my memories that I regret from long ago. It's like dreams I wish I could have seen in the past, with all the things I love, some hate. But still would bare to see. But no not one single clue. As I look around waiting for someone or at least something to find me but there is no sound. I hate the feeling where I am so hazy my life turns upside down. Dreaming stuff I did not dream. Feeling stiff I would never feel. And kissing love as it hid behind my back. Oh I wish it would as just stop! As I wait.. And wait, for somthing to change my wish just there comes true. But sadly... I'm still dreaming of you!
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sry4 spellin' :L I'll do bett3r nest time. :D
Awww it's adorable
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!! Oh my gosh, this totally desribes me when i get into those moods! Which is a lot lol Really good... :)
I'm not a poem writer. But I decided to give it a chance!
U DID AWESOME! I ALWAYS LOVE YOUR WORK
wow! my fave lines are And kissing love as it hid behind my back. Oh I wish it would as just stop! As I wait.. And wait, for somthing to change my wish just there comes true. But sadly... I'm still dreaming of you!
these are my fave lines because you are still dreaming of them but you want your wish to change. I LOVE IT!