Death & Me {Poem, Vampire One/ Check It Out}
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You died
I bit out your neck
I drained your soul
And skipped your fragile heart
Your misery is vanished
Your heart is no longer beating
Your eyes no longer blinking
So your lungs no more rising
I felt your memories run through me
Such a temptation reading my victim’s head
I spoke bitterly and I am telling you
Creating walls of secrets
And my fangs are an open death
A wicked smile
On my face
A wicked face
Are my features
My beauty deceived you
My beauty dazzled you
My beauty ruined you
My lips no longer as a rose colored
Nor my cheeks are as a blossom pink
I am described as a monster
A monster of the night
I ruined everyone’s life
I brought them to their death
I shall except the curse that held me
Consumed my mind
And ruined my chance with the beaming sun
I cried yet my crying was such in agony
A walk like no speed of a wind
A walk like no other can complete
Yet a walk everyone sadden for it
A walk of lost soulless vampire
Roaming for hunting
Roaming for destruction
Roaming for nothing
I bit out your neck
I drained your soul
And skipped your fragile heart
Your misery is vanished
Your heart is no longer beating
Your eyes no longer blinking
So your lungs no more rising
I felt your memories run through me
Such a temptation reading my victim’s head
I spoke bitterly and I am telling you
Creating walls of secrets
And my fangs are an open death
A wicked smile
On my face
A wicked face
Are my features
My beauty deceived you
My beauty dazzled you
My beauty ruined you
My lips no longer as a rose colored
Nor my cheeks are as a blossom pink
I am described as a monster
A monster of the night
I ruined everyone’s life
I brought them to their death
I shall except the curse that held me
Consumed my mind
And ruined my chance with the beaming sun
I cried yet my crying was such in agony
A walk like no speed of a wind
A walk like no other can complete
Yet a walk everyone sadden for it
A walk of lost soulless vampire
Roaming for hunting
Roaming for destruction
Roaming for nothing
27 Comments
woah...
what inspired this?
this is deep
Gir: deeper then the cupcake
Me: smacks Gir upside the head
Dunno What Inspired.. Hehe Thanks! (:
awesome...... vampires!!!!!
;D
nice
Vampires rock
Hehehe :D
Wow! Intense!
The last three stanzas are seriously good! I re-read this like three times and it amazes me! Seriously enjoyed this thanks for sending it!
I think that this is a very inspiring poem for me. YOU are describing the person very well.
5 stars!
Thanks!
Hehehe (:
I Know, You Inspired Me Too!
I Loved Your Character In "Darkness" So I Felt A Poem Before And I Added Those!
(:
This was amazing!!! Def. 5 stars!!!! and favorite!!!! :)
THANKS! Mwah! Bwhahah ;3
You are a true poet! applause
~bows~ Ssanks yew!
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THANKS!!!!!!!!!! ~grins~ mwah xD
Wow. These are amazing.
Thank You (: (:
You're so welcome!
LOVE THIS!
THANKS! Mwah :P
AGHHHH!!!!!! this is better than the first one i read! Ok it is going to sound crazy...but, your poem in the 2nd chapter is somewhat a foreshadow of my story.
Well done and I hope you continue writing!! thanks for letting me see this it ROCKS
xD wow.. I seriously didn't know hahah!
THANK YOU! (: