Red Shadows: The Bloody Abyss (Horror Story)
Adeele Pierce is a 17 year old girl going to her vacation home in England. But what happens at night?
Chapter 1
Killing List
"I thought you loved me!" She screamed trying to escape her death
"I never did you stupid girl. Your on my Killing List!" The monster growled chasing her violently. He stabbed her with a knife piercing through her flesh.
"Ren! Turn that of!" My mother burst through the door shrieking.
"It's too violent and I told you not to watch that until we get on the plane! Now go finish packing!" She spoke firmly. I sighed and walked to my room and grabbed my suitcase.
"Adelee! Hurry up! Get off the phone already!" I yelled down the hallway. Of course, she's talking to her boyfriend: Alex, again. Suddenly the doorbell rang. Running down the stairs frantically I opened the door.
"Rose!" I yelled excitedly with a big smile on my face. Rose is my sister's best friend. She's kind of like my sister in a way, only better. She had black hair and azure colored eyes. She was a skinny girl. She always wore converse and skinny jeans-Even when it was Summer! And she always had this bracelet. It was purple and yellow. I don't know why but it was very special to her. She met Adelee in kindergarten when Rose was about to go down the slide and she fell off.
"Hey kiddo! How ya been?" Rose giggled lightly.
"Hey Rose! Are you ready to go?" My mom spoke in a soft tone
"WHAT!? Adelee gets to bring someone with us?!?!" I scream
"DON'T USE THAT TONE WITH ME!" My mother shrieks loudly.
I shyly ask "Why couldn't I bring anyone with me?"
"Well you can, but I seriously doubt anyone would let their kid go to Eng-" I cut my Mother off
"Bailee can come!" I yell cheerfully
"No way! There is no way I will let your girlfriend come with us!" My Mom says in an angry tone
"But Mom! Pleeeeaaase?" I beg quietly
"Fine" My Mother growls.
"Thank you!" I laugh and hug my Mom
"But-" My Mother continues to speak. "Ughhh, Of course there's the 'But' I hate when she does that"
"She has to sleep in Adelee's room" She spoke in a firm tone
"Fine, now lets go!" I yell excitedly. We're silently walking to when...
"I never did you stupid girl. Your on my Killing List!" The monster growled chasing her violently. He stabbed her with a knife piercing through her flesh.
"Ren! Turn that of!" My mother burst through the door shrieking.
"It's too violent and I told you not to watch that until we get on the plane! Now go finish packing!" She spoke firmly. I sighed and walked to my room and grabbed my suitcase.
"Adelee! Hurry up! Get off the phone already!" I yelled down the hallway. Of course, she's talking to her boyfriend: Alex, again. Suddenly the doorbell rang. Running down the stairs frantically I opened the door.
"Rose!" I yelled excitedly with a big smile on my face. Rose is my sister's best friend. She's kind of like my sister in a way, only better. She had black hair and azure colored eyes. She was a skinny girl. She always wore converse and skinny jeans-Even when it was Summer! And she always had this bracelet. It was purple and yellow. I don't know why but it was very special to her. She met Adelee in kindergarten when Rose was about to go down the slide and she fell off.
"Hey kiddo! How ya been?" Rose giggled lightly.
"Hey Rose! Are you ready to go?" My mom spoke in a soft tone
"WHAT!? Adelee gets to bring someone with us?!?!" I scream
"DON'T USE THAT TONE WITH ME!" My mother shrieks loudly.
I shyly ask "Why couldn't I bring anyone with me?"
"Well you can, but I seriously doubt anyone would let their kid go to Eng-" I cut my Mother off
"Bailee can come!" I yell cheerfully
"No way! There is no way I will let your girlfriend come with us!" My Mom says in an angry tone
"But Mom! Pleeeeaaase?" I beg quietly
"Fine" My Mother growls.
"Thank you!" I laugh and hug my Mom
"But-" My Mother continues to speak. "Ughhh, Of course there's the 'But' I hate when she does that"
"She has to sleep in Adelee's room" She spoke in a firm tone
"Fine, now lets go!" I yell excitedly. We're silently walking to when...



14 Comments
I love it already! :D please continue!
Thank you so much(: Sorry its so short. The next chapter will be longer :D
Awesomeness! :3
Cool. I love the intro to the first chapter. Very well written. Keep writing, it is very good :)
Thank you(:
(: I love it! I can really picture it in mind easily. Great story so far twinie
Thanks twinieee(: Where ya been? :D
You're welcome =^-^= Where have I been? Ugh, I've been in LaLaLollipopLand for a few days! I just had to get away from reality! If you haven't noticed, it's boring here xD Wow, I really lost my marbles... searches for missing marbles
I found a purple one :D
Beautiful, BrayBray! (:
Sicko XD
love it! :)
Yipee :3 You can keep it though! I know it's one of your fave colors. hands you the marble and smiles
nice