All you ever did was lie (Poem/song)
this is my poem/song. It is based on Annabeth, Thalia, and Luke. Some are from the song Love The Way You Lie by Skylar Gray. I had the same life as them with my nepfews. They are Annabeth and Thalia and I am Luke. all I ever did for them was lie.... I regret it dearly. This song is decated to zackrulz on Quibblo and Percy Jackson
the first time we met
the future seemed so bright.
But then they turned you so evil
I don't know why I am still suprised
Even the angels have their wicked dreams
but you take that to the new extremes
But you will always be my hero
even though you lost your mind
Are just going to watch me cry?
I helped you
but you never did
you only gave me voilent words and empty threats
now there's hate in our voices
as my heart shatters from our fights
In our wars
you always win
even if i am right
You tell me lies from your head all with voilent words and empty threats
it's horrible that all these battles and wars are what keeps me still sane
Are you just going to watch me cry?
I helped you
but you never did ever help me
you only gave me voilent words and empty threats
But it's alright
since I loved the way you lied to me
all you ever did for me was to lie
So maybe I am crazy
I want to run but I want to stay
Since all you ever did for me was to lie
Are you just going to watch me cry?
But it's okay
since all you give me are empty threats and voilent words
You are still my hero
even though you have lost your mind
even though all you did was lie
the future seemed so bright.
But then they turned you so evil
I don't know why I am still suprised
Even the angels have their wicked dreams
but you take that to the new extremes
But you will always be my hero
even though you lost your mind
Are just going to watch me cry?
I helped you
but you never did
you only gave me voilent words and empty threats
now there's hate in our voices
as my heart shatters from our fights
In our wars
you always win
even if i am right
You tell me lies from your head all with voilent words and empty threats
it's horrible that all these battles and wars are what keeps me still sane
Are you just going to watch me cry?
I helped you
but you never did ever help me
you only gave me voilent words and empty threats
But it's alright
since I loved the way you lied to me
all you ever did for me was to lie
So maybe I am crazy
I want to run but I want to stay
Since all you ever did for me was to lie
Are you just going to watch me cry?
But it's okay
since all you give me are empty threats and voilent words
You are still my hero
even though you have lost your mind
even though all you did was lie
14 Comments
wow. I SHOULD WRITE SHEET MUSIC FOR THIS! it would make an awesome song! geat song/poem! rates 5/5 and gives you 2 thumbs up
thanks so much!
YOU'RE WELCOME! starts drawing out sheet music from scratch on a peice of paper
I put that AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tag on your song because it's AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(again)
I finished the guitar part here it is:
Verse 1 arpeggiate on Low E, G, B and high E strings
G chord, D chord, A chord, B miner chord, D chord B miner chord, A chord, strum G chord let it ring
Chorus 1 strumming patern: DDD U DD U
after hangin on G
E, D, G, B miner, C, A, D
Bridge strumming: U D U DD U D
G, A, G, A
Verse 2 repeat Verse 1
Choruses 2/3= same as 1
Intro/outro (arpegiate)
G, Am, Bm, D, A, Dm (outro only) strum Em chord let it ring.
Hope you like what I did! it sounds awesome!
umm.... i don't know how to play a guitar. can you send me a video or something please. I bet it's awesome. Thanks for the comments. you're the best. May the gods bless you. Thanks.
sorry, don't own a video cammera (and I don't have a yotube account). I don't want my face all over the internet either. all oyu need for this song is a guitar (duh) a bassic chord chart, and a lot of patience. if you play any other instruments you can change it to that intsryment, (it's been done before). all you need to do fot that is take the comment, and use the chords I'd listed and play on any ther instrument (unless it's the flute, then you just play the note that the chord is named after
ok. i'll try. i have an ipad so... thanks for the song. you're the best!
where's the u chord?
Yes I am the best. what other beep year old could write such an awesome song in less than 30 minutes (that really is how long it took me lol). Don't mean to brag or anythiung, but it feels awesome to be called "The Best". YOU R THE BEST 2!
no you're the best. yep. i envy you. I used to play the voilin bt only knew about 3 songs.
what u chord? the U's mean to strum UP. The D's mean to strum DOWN.
how do you do the c?
ohh