Teenage Dream Parady? More Like a Trajety
i didn't write this...
TO THE TUNE OF TEENAGE DREAM BY KATY PERRY!!!
I really miss you,
Hope that you miss me too,
I wanna hold you,
Nothing that I can do,
So ordinary,
Without you by my side,
And I cry,
I loved your laughter,
The look that you gave just me,
Such a disaster,
I wish my soul was free,
So I could find you,
Wherever you are out there,
Cause I Care,
Why'd you go,
Why did you leave,
Me alone,
In life,
It's not fair,
That you are gone,
And I feel empty inside,
I hope you are in a better place,
Hope the Lord has your soul to save,
Nothing left in my heart to break,
And now you are gone,
I am so torn,
All I saw was the love in you,
Heart so strong and I always knew,
You were mine and I was yours,
You are no more,
I can't ignore,
I found a picture,
Remembered the night we spent,
With us together,
Bairley could pay the rent,
It didn't matter,
Because you were my best friend,
Till the end,
I can't scream,
It does no good,
Doesn't fix, what's wrong,
No way to reverse the past,
Me and you,
How do I move on?
I hope you are in a better place,
Hope the Lord has your soul to save,
Nothing left in my heart to break,
And now you are gone,
I am so torn,
All I saw was the love in you,
Heart so strong and I always knew,
You were mine and I was yours,
You are no more,
I can't ignore,
This may seem obsence,
But I keep living,
Knowing I will see you soon,
And I feel misplaced,
Cause life's a race,
You set the pace for now,
Ohhhh!
I know you are in better place,
See you at the pearly gates,
My heart beats to see my fate,
I live for you,
I will make it through,
Maybe it was just your time,
I know I will be just fine,
Cause of love must be divine,
I will see again,
I will see my best friend.
This may seem obscene,
But I keep living,
Knowing I will you see you soon,
And I feel misplaced,
Cause lifes a race,
You set the pace for now,
For now.
Hope that you miss me too,
I wanna hold you,
Nothing that I can do,
So ordinary,
Without you by my side,
And I cry,
I loved your laughter,
The look that you gave just me,
Such a disaster,
I wish my soul was free,
So I could find you,
Wherever you are out there,
Cause I Care,
Why'd you go,
Why did you leave,
Me alone,
In life,
It's not fair,
That you are gone,
And I feel empty inside,
I hope you are in a better place,
Hope the Lord has your soul to save,
Nothing left in my heart to break,
And now you are gone,
I am so torn,
All I saw was the love in you,
Heart so strong and I always knew,
You were mine and I was yours,
You are no more,
I can't ignore,
I found a picture,
Remembered the night we spent,
With us together,
Bairley could pay the rent,
It didn't matter,
Because you were my best friend,
Till the end,
I can't scream,
It does no good,
Doesn't fix, what's wrong,
No way to reverse the past,
Me and you,
How do I move on?
I hope you are in a better place,
Hope the Lord has your soul to save,
Nothing left in my heart to break,
And now you are gone,
I am so torn,
All I saw was the love in you,
Heart so strong and I always knew,
You were mine and I was yours,
You are no more,
I can't ignore,
This may seem obsence,
But I keep living,
Knowing I will see you soon,
And I feel misplaced,
Cause life's a race,
You set the pace for now,
Ohhhh!
I know you are in better place,
See you at the pearly gates,
My heart beats to see my fate,
I live for you,
I will make it through,
Maybe it was just your time,
I know I will be just fine,
Cause of love must be divine,
I will see again,
I will see my best friend.
This may seem obscene,
But I keep living,
Knowing I will you see you soon,
And I feel misplaced,
Cause lifes a race,
You set the pace for now,
For now.
16 Comments
Is it that hard to use a dictionary? Computer search? Something?
It isn't a Trajety it's a Tragedy.
Grrr. Why do ppl hate? Imma writer, not a speller.
Writer means speller. You cannot write without spelling of some form, and you are not legible if you do not spell correctly. No correct spelling=no writer. Correct spelling = Writer.
I don't hate you, but it doesn't advertise your writing in a very good light.
Well, maybe that's true in your book, but not in mine. You don't have to be able to spell to write, you just have to have a brain to undertsand what's written.
Your book needs re-writing then. Otherwise we would have no such thing as a dictionary. There is a reason we stopped making up spellings as we went along, and settled on certain spellings for certain words--because no one could understand what another had written. Yes, you do have to be able to spell what you write. Even people with severe dyslexia learn to spell/get editors who check their spelling before others read it. You need to make your brain learn the spellings and use them.
So I can't spell one word? What's the big deal? You knew what it was, right?
You need to make your brain learn that if you don't have anything nice to say in the first place, then don't say anything at all.
It wasn't unkind. You misspelled--how hard is it to look it up if you are unsure of the spelling? And even if you thought I was rude, all you had to say was "Oh sure, thanks for pointing that out!" and fixed it. Either way you win. Now you just look like someone who is attempting to remain willfully ignorant--the worst kind of person.
It felt unkind to me because of the way you said it. "Is it that hard to use a dictionary?" What I meant in my first reply was that I know that I'm not a good speller, and that's not what counts; it's what the words miss-spelled words mean. Then, you went and said that by not spelling things correctly I'm not a good writer. So again unkindness! Look, I don't want to argue any more, okay? I'm not promising to spell things right in the future, but "Oh sure, thanks for pointing that out!" ...
...I'm not going to fix it. So get over it.
Writing is not just having good characters. You have to spell their names correctly. You have to describe them well, with words used and spelt right. If you can't do the most essential of writing--the spelling--then no, you are not a good writer. You could be a good story teller, depending on what you have to say, but no, not a good writer. You have to spell right to be a writer.
I don't know why I keep replying when you keep critisizing me(I know! That word might not be spelled right! I really don't care!)I told you I don't want to argue anymore, but you keep bagering me that I'm not a good writer. That HURTS! Please STOP! I do undertsand what you're saying, but as you can see I refuse to admit that I'm not a good writer, because one of my favorite things to do is write and I don't want some random person from the internet saying I'm not a good writer. You don't know me
XD Which is why you need to present your best work. Of course I don't know you. All I have is a page, and to judge whether it's good or not. And if you tried, if you practiced your speling, you would no longer be a 'bad' writer. If you love to write, it isn't that hard--since you'll love to practice. I know I do. :)
I hate to say this, but----I'm LAZY!!! lol I don't have time i gotta go get fitted for braces tomorrow. But---Ok, I'm working on it. It'll take me awhile though. I only finally got it into my brain how to spell tomorrow and character, a couple months ago. ;) haha
Good job this is a good remake of teenage dream :D
nice
I don't know the tune of teenage dream so wahtev