Soul Mates, A Draco Malfoy Love Story
This is a love story about Draco Malfoy and Adele Hansen. Everyone knows what Draco looks like but Adele is short with medium light brown/golden hair. She has gray blue eyes and rosie cheeks. Her personality is shy but opens up to her real friends.
Chapter 1
The Beginning
As I make my way to platfrom 9 and 10 I realize that my parents were not joking when they said you had to run into the wall. I get my courage up and begin to run just when I am about to doubt myself I open my eyes and I see that I had done it!! Here right in front of me was the Hogwarts Express!! I take a deep breath and look around at other students then I begin walking again. 10 minutes later I am on the Train and in a compartment all by myself. You see I am a only child like both of my parents, so I have no siblings and I know no one. For me this is probably the scarest moment of my life. I am all caught up in my thought when a stern looking boy enters my compartment. Neither of us a say a word he just enters and takes a seat as far away from me as possible. I have no idea what to say. So I announce my name. He grunts. Now I am a little annoyed but at the same time I feel like laughing. I did not think I would laugh but I had no control, so I burst into laughter. He looks at me like I am retarded. Now I am anger all I was trying to do was be freindly. So I say, "What is your problem?" He truns his head and says,"Sorry I am a little shy and I don't act well around people I just met." "Well thencould you tell me your name?" And in return he says "Draco Malfoy". I had never heard such a strange name in my entire life. I guess he could tell what I was thinking so he says, "whats so funny?" "Oh, nothing" Just in time the candy lady says, "Anything off the trolly, dears?" I say sure and stand to look at all the goods so does Draco. After we had stuffed ourselves and Draco had loosened up by cracking some jokes I ask what house he would like to be placed in. He replys, "Slytherin." And in return he asks me where I want to be, I say, " I don't know." I begin to like him, and he was just so cute. I think he could tell that I was pratically staring at him so he turns his head to look at me and says the sweetest thing, "Adele, you are possibly the most beautiful girl I have ever met." Now I know I am blushing and I say, "Thank you very much. I like you alot also Draco. I do not think anyone has ever been as honest or caring as you have to me." Suddenly he stands and comes to sit right next to me. I feel as if butterflies were over taking my stomache and then he takes my hand in his. His is pale and cold and mine is very small in his. I look into his eyes and felt complete and utter joy



11 Comments
Er, it kind of was rushed. But I think it could be made into a good story (And by the way, they are 11 in first year, so I don't think that they'd find there should
Mate??). Sorry just an honest opinion!!:) don't hate me for it, please??:)
No its ok I was just in a rush mood earlier I will try to slow it down.
Is just that, not many people like it when they fall in love in the first chapter? I mean like , they just met?XD you can edit the chapters too? Oh and once the person is sorted you should skip a few years to like fifth year, or fourth year and make them go to the Yule ball??:) ha... Me and my random comments??:) because in fourth year that's when they usually start noticing girls!:) x
Hahaha Thanks Im gonna edit the chapters! And then I will skip ahead after they are both put into Slytherin to year 4
I changed it.
WOw, it sounds interesting now!
Hahahaha thanks so much!!!
It's really good! I enjoyed reading it and just a little advice for the future, when the characters are speaking in direct speech, it would help the readers if you skipped lines since it would be easier to verify but other than that it was awesome :D
Thanks for the advice.
Are you writing more???
Oh sorry, I have been beyond sick lately....and I kind of found a new site to write HP Fanfictions. Its called HarryPotterFanFiction.com, so yeah....sorry