If it's wrong why does it feel right? A harry potter love story
hiya! Thanks for reading my story! If you want to be in it comment and tell me about your self! i also want to point out that *7things is in this story as Jacqueline Olivia Parker or Jackie
Character: Lucy James
Age: 11
house: you'll see!
appearence: average height, skinny
hair:http://www.google.com/imgres?q=miley+cyrus+blonde+hair&hl=en&gbv=2&biw=1366&bih=667&tbm=isch&tbnid=gi_lOswIk545gM:&imgrefurl=http://www.bopandtigerbeat.com/miley-cyrus/miley-cy
grey-blue eyes
staright teeth
Chapter 1
What, Where, Why?
It was April 14th My birthday! I woke up at 8 am (for school) and ran downstairs, I was so excited i was turning 11! When i got downstairs my dad was sitting in his usual reclining chair reading a paper that looked just like the news paper, but was called the "Daily Prophet". Must have got a new name for the paper i thought.
"Morning Papa" i was so excited i was almost bursting, but i new better in front of my Papa.
"Morning Honey and Happy Birthday!"
"Thank you Papa!" then he turned and left the room. Weird maybe he had to go to the bathroom. So i turned to my mom.
"Hi mommy!" i nearly screamed at her she was making chocolate chip pancakes!
" Hi honey ready for school? Here have some pancakes"
"Thanks mom and i am really excited Mrs. Ril-" i was cut off by an owl smashing into a window.
"What the-" i turned and looked at mom she looked excited
"Well go and get the letter off its leg dear"
"But what-"
"Go on" i went and got the letter of its leg as mom had told me to do. It was addressed to me from Hogwarts School of Witch Craft and Wizardry. What is that I never heard of that place before. I opened it and it said i was accepted into the school, but i never applied was this a joke? It also included a supply list, I turned to mom.
"Mom what is this place?"
"It is a school for wizards and witches just like you and me!"
"What about papa?"
"Oh sweetie he is a muggle. Oh dear look at the time hurry and go brush your teeth and get dressed or you'll be late." I didn't even ask questions i was to busy thinking Wizard? Witch? Muggle? What is all of this? I got ready and came back downstairs, Papa looked happy, but sad at the same time. They both just stared at me i could feel the anger rising. How could they not tell me?
"Well are we going?" i snapped at the same time a vase broke, but Papa didn't yell he just got his car keys and motioned for me to follow him to the car. Well that was strange how did the vase break? Why didn't Papa yell? Then i thought about my brother he went to a different school, but my parents said it was just a private school what if he went to Hogwarts. Not possible i thought why would they lie? I was in a bad mood the rest of the day. To sum it up a made a window shatter and my teacher to fly in the air.
"Morning Papa" i was so excited i was almost bursting, but i new better in front of my Papa.
"Morning Honey and Happy Birthday!"
"Thank you Papa!" then he turned and left the room. Weird maybe he had to go to the bathroom. So i turned to my mom.
"Hi mommy!" i nearly screamed at her she was making chocolate chip pancakes!
" Hi honey ready for school? Here have some pancakes"
"Thanks mom and i am really excited Mrs. Ril-" i was cut off by an owl smashing into a window.
"What the-" i turned and looked at mom she looked excited
"Well go and get the letter off its leg dear"
"But what-"
"Go on" i went and got the letter of its leg as mom had told me to do. It was addressed to me from Hogwarts School of Witch Craft and Wizardry. What is that I never heard of that place before. I opened it and it said i was accepted into the school, but i never applied was this a joke? It also included a supply list, I turned to mom.
"Mom what is this place?"
"It is a school for wizards and witches just like you and me!"
"What about papa?"
"Oh sweetie he is a muggle. Oh dear look at the time hurry and go brush your teeth and get dressed or you'll be late." I didn't even ask questions i was to busy thinking Wizard? Witch? Muggle? What is all of this? I got ready and came back downstairs, Papa looked happy, but sad at the same time. They both just stared at me i could feel the anger rising. How could they not tell me?
"Well are we going?" i snapped at the same time a vase broke, but Papa didn't yell he just got his car keys and motioned for me to follow him to the car. Well that was strange how did the vase break? Why didn't Papa yell? Then i thought about my brother he went to a different school, but my parents said it was just a private school what if he went to Hogwarts. Not possible i thought why would they lie? I was in a bad mood the rest of the day. To sum it up a made a window shatter and my teacher to fly in the air.



24 Comments
it is my first harry potter story so tell me what you think! If you want to be in it tell me your name, age, house, friends/family, appearence!
I love it :)
thanks you'll be in it soon!
Itano comes in too, correct? Well, it was good. Work a bit on capitals, grammer, etc.
But its the writing that counts!
yea she will be in it! Sorry about the grammar it was late at night and I was tired.
got chapter 4 up!
More please =D
ok ok i ahve a sever case of writers block but i promise mmore.....i have some really good ideas just got to write them down!
i got chapter 4 up!
Love it :)
I love it!!!!!!
Thanks!!!!!!!!!
your welcome
i have a questin about my carater?
yes wait your jackie right? ask away..........
No im Devyn lupin
And i was curious if i can be a werewolf? if it ok ;)
sorry about the Jackie thing i got my stories mixed up!
yea sure(: