My Private Heaven
Chapter 1
New place.
One thing I've learned from moving recently is that there's a brand new start to it. No longer does anyone from the past get a say in what people may or may not think of you. Of course in my case I see hardly anyone.In fact I live out in the woods and am home schooled so that we can't see anyone new. It's alright though because I'll always have my newly found escape.
I call it my own private heaven on earth.
At first look my escape doesn't seem like much but I don't see what most see. What everyone else saw at first as nothing special I saw as a magical and unique place just for me. It's just an ordinary pond that's in the middle of nowhere. When I first saw it it was over run with cattails and weeds grew along the edge, but I saw a project perfect for someone like me.
I could reflect on myself from it's waters once it was ready and maybe, just maybe understand who I am.Of course I know ordinary things like my name, or what food I like but those things don't make up a person and due to recent events I thought that I should get to know myself.
The day after my discovery of the pond I began working on it trying to make it a beautiful place for any one who wishes to see it when I'm not there.At first it was difficult trying to make sure that I didn't harm nature but giving back to it.I used an old fashioned tool called a scythe to cut down the jiggers and tall grass.I pulled the cattails and weeds by hand, one by one.
The sun was just beginning to set when I heard his voice.
"Do you need any help," he asked.
"No, who are you," I asked.
"My name's Adrian."
"Do you always talk to random people you find in the woods," I asked him.
"Are you always in the woods to talk to?"
"No, why do you care?"
"I don't. You just kept asking questions so I followed your lead.What's your name," Adrian asked.
"Elizabeth"
I call it my own private heaven on earth.
At first look my escape doesn't seem like much but I don't see what most see. What everyone else saw at first as nothing special I saw as a magical and unique place just for me. It's just an ordinary pond that's in the middle of nowhere. When I first saw it it was over run with cattails and weeds grew along the edge, but I saw a project perfect for someone like me.
I could reflect on myself from it's waters once it was ready and maybe, just maybe understand who I am.Of course I know ordinary things like my name, or what food I like but those things don't make up a person and due to recent events I thought that I should get to know myself.
The day after my discovery of the pond I began working on it trying to make it a beautiful place for any one who wishes to see it when I'm not there.At first it was difficult trying to make sure that I didn't harm nature but giving back to it.I used an old fashioned tool called a scythe to cut down the jiggers and tall grass.I pulled the cattails and weeds by hand, one by one.
The sun was just beginning to set when I heard his voice.
"Do you need any help," he asked.
"No, who are you," I asked.
"My name's Adrian."
"Do you always talk to random people you find in the woods," I asked him.
"Are you always in the woods to talk to?"
"No, why do you care?"
"I don't. You just kept asking questions so I followed your lead.What's your name," Adrian asked.
"Elizabeth"



4 Comments
Haha... You used the same names from my story...
I didnt know your names
I just think that's ironic xD haha. Well, it's a good story :) You used good descriptions to make me picture it. The only thing that I would say you could change would be the first paragraph... It doesn't really flow. Well, the first few sentences are perfect but in the sentence where you say
"In fact I live out in the woods and am home schooled so that we can't see anyone new."
It sounds like you're rushing it...Like you're joining two sentences that shouldn't be together. Read next comment
Anyway, I do love the way you captured my attention... I'm wondering who this adrian is... Why he's in the woods. I love having questions! :) I hope you write more soon! :) (Send the invite please :)