Creature

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This is another one of my Bloody Brilliant collection poems, this one is somewhat different, I imagine. This is one from when I was twelve, I believe it was because I was madly in love with an evil nitwit that broke my heart...yeah, that was it. Anyway, it might be childish but I wasn't about to edit it! Hope you enjoy!
-Katie

Chapter 1

Creature (No offense to any man that reads this, please!)

There I was,
Broken heart,
Because of you,
You torn me apart,
Look at you,
A big, big man you are,
A creature, you are,
I know.

Bleeding some,
My wounded heart,
There I was,
Torn apart,
Thinking your a big big man?
A creature, I say once again.
From pain,
To tears,
To silence,
But I know it's nothing,
Nothing more than immaturity,
A creature among me,
Was all you were.

Lost a soul,
Lost a heart,
Dark sea screaming,
Look at us,
Look at me,
Your just a creature from the sea,
So now I know,
I'm much smarter,
I've out-smarted you,
Oh, creature from the dark, deep blue sea.

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