Beside You( A Josh Ramsay love story)
Ive seen some ppl make love stories so i want to try it out...Marianas Trench fans and Josh Ramsay lovers will love this, this is my first love story so plz dont judge me its my first...plz comment
I was all alone...waiting for him to come..wondering if i was ever going to see him again....then he came i turned around but no one was there...then I woke up. Crying in my sleep i wiped the tears from my face...wishing to see Josh again....i turned up the music tht was playing over night..it was my favourite Marianas Trench song: Beside You...i got up and turned it off...pushing the hope, the wonder, the need down inside me....I got ready and went on a walk to the pier....where my dream haunted me...i stood in the exact same spot..exact same place....where i was in my dream...TBC
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its my first love story plz tell me what u think and shuld i make more?
AWE!!! i swear Marianas Trench song: Beside You always makes me tear up! it sounds so good and almost like the video! How freaking awesome your emotions and feelings i could feel in the writing!
SWEET!
I love that song BTW!
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I love Beside you!..ive never wrote anything like this before....so should i make more?...I'm a ParWhore and a Trencher ;) love both bands...but Josh is just a sexy beast LMFAO
should i make more?..i really want to know, when i read this over its like ive been writitng stories like this all my life when this is actually my very first one and im very proud of it :D
~ Hayley
HERS NAMZEZ OZZZ NOZZ 'AYLEY!!!! IT VICKY..... BUTT TRUM
Of course miss thang! do your DO!
If you want to write do it! and i will always read em! i loved it I cried to the video and it was all heartfelt wording!
Josh is SUPER cute!!!
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oka...im so gonna make another Josh Ramsay love story....this story was actually based on the video for Beside You i just added a twist and some other stuff.....
HELL YEAH JOSH ISNT CUTE.......HES A SEXY BEAST....u should check out my photo album i have this amazing pic of him from the newest vid.....hes basically shirtless...omg i like totally melted over it i think its in page 3...
Uhhh.. This is the video.......
i know smart one i just mixed it up....there wasnt a dream in the video tho...im gonna make a continuation of the vid...tht they never made so basically its not the video
Still.... creating a story is about creating a new idea. Something you can call your own and make it how you want it to be, not just copying from something else..... that's plagerism.....
I didnt try to copy it it came to mind i was listening to tglhe song while writing it......and a story can be whatever it wants to be it doesnt HAVE to be a new idea thats ur thing not mine so whatever....i can do whatevr i want
YOUR GUNNA GET ARESTED YOU BUTTY MICBUTTERSON!!!
As long as you give credentials to the people that made the video it doesn't matter if you change some parts... and i think these are really good you just need to make them longer :)
ik...the second one the chapters are really longer and i wasnt trying to copy it anyway...i made this at like 2 in the morning..so i guess i wasnt thinking straight....ill prob change it when i have time
Its ok :)
yeah i guess...i had no intention of copying it anyway :/