the untold hurt
Soooo Tell Me Wat You Think
Chapter 1
alone with the knife
My heart was screaming that night,begging for the pain to go away noone ever knew i was hurting for i hid the pain untill i wanted to explode,but that night was different,that night i wanted to take the knife that was sitting right infrount of me and push it through my heart.That night was dark and lonly......
flash back
i walk right beside her MP3 playing in both of our ears 'cause mine broke.We finilly make it to Jades house,Jade runs out and hugs both of us.
"Hey Jade."
"Ah you beat me to it."
"Oh wow you two are just the same." Jade says with a giggle
"Yeah." I say with a small smile looking around.
"Why you lookin' around?" Athena says to me with a glance around
"Being careful,why?" I say to her
"No reason,just wanted to make sure you didnt see anyone."
She says as Jade leads us into her house.She took us to our rooms and went into hers.There i sat alone,I unpack my bags and find my knife.With the people chasing us and all this stress and Josh giving his life for me and Athena,I want to push it through my heart,right as I pick it and start to press it to my heart Athena and Jade walk in;the first thing i do is through my knife under the bed.
"Hey we.....what were you doing?"Jade asks
"Nothing why?"
"Never mind anyway we gotta get out of here."
"Why?!'
"They found us;all of us!"
"Ok well I gotta pack."
"Well hurry up."
I through every thing into my bag and my knife into my pocket,We run out and into Jades car,she drop the keys.
"Ugh Jade come on!" I almost scream at her.
"I'm trying,I'm trying!"
Jade picks up the keys and starts the car,we speed off.You see our parents were into bad things and when "they" killed our parents we saw so now there after us.We've been running for years:about when i was nine is when my parents died Jades were when she was ten and Athena's when we were eleven.
"Alena what are you doing?" Athena says seeing me writing in my notebook
"Writing why?"
"Oh nothing just wondering." she says turning to the window
"Ok, I guess." I say wondering what just happened
Jade kicks on the music "How to love" Lil Wayne is playing,man i love this song.
flash back
i walk right beside her MP3 playing in both of our ears 'cause mine broke.We finilly make it to Jades house,Jade runs out and hugs both of us.
"Hey Jade."
"Ah you beat me to it."
"Oh wow you two are just the same." Jade says with a giggle
"Yeah." I say with a small smile looking around.
"Why you lookin' around?" Athena says to me with a glance around
"Being careful,why?" I say to her
"No reason,just wanted to make sure you didnt see anyone."
She says as Jade leads us into her house.She took us to our rooms and went into hers.There i sat alone,I unpack my bags and find my knife.With the people chasing us and all this stress and Josh giving his life for me and Athena,I want to push it through my heart,right as I pick it and start to press it to my heart Athena and Jade walk in;the first thing i do is through my knife under the bed.
"Hey we.....what were you doing?"Jade asks
"Nothing why?"
"Never mind anyway we gotta get out of here."
"Why?!'
"They found us;all of us!"
"Ok well I gotta pack."
"Well hurry up."
I through every thing into my bag and my knife into my pocket,We run out and into Jades car,she drop the keys.
"Ugh Jade come on!" I almost scream at her.
"I'm trying,I'm trying!"
Jade picks up the keys and starts the car,we speed off.You see our parents were into bad things and when "they" killed our parents we saw so now there after us.We've been running for years:about when i was nine is when my parents died Jades were when she was ten and Athena's when we were eleven.
"Alena what are you doing?" Athena says seeing me writing in my notebook
"Writing why?"
"Oh nothing just wondering." she says turning to the window
"Ok, I guess." I say wondering what just happened
Jade kicks on the music "How to love" Lil Wayne is playing,man i love this song.



2 Comments
A lot of grammar mistakes
Yea I Really Suck With Gram But I Did Write Most Of It At Like 1:00Am