Beside You 2 (Josh Ramsay Love Story)
Hey ppls this is my second love story and the continuation of my first one...btw if havent read my first one plz read it beforre this one thnx...hopw u like it ENJOYY ^_^
I was alone again.....he left me and i once again missing him....i don't know when he'll return..and i am dying inside...with the pain and the agony..i struggle to live life without him.....i listen to music in my room...trying to get him out of my head...suddenly..it feels like my mind is fighting with itself...one says kill yourself he's done with you he left for a reason....and the other says...he loves u dont listen to tht thing.....im confused trying to run away but i cant....then a call.....hes dead...i drop the phone....crying....i am too hurt i get a knife....and i die too.....I wake up terrified...wondering wtf happened..then i realized it was a dream....i look at my phone....8:00 am no calls..no texts....i go downstairs...no knife of the floor...checking just to make sure it was a dream...then it hit me..duhh i would be dead rite now.....i get dressed and take a walk.....everytime i get to a street....i see him waititng for me..then i bump into someone....omg its Matt...one of Josh's best friends....first i think where is Josh second thing i think...why is Matt here....TBC ( I know tht was kind out of the dream but....im ending it here i kinda got carried away ^_^)
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plz comment if u want for me to do another love story thnx so much for reading i want to know if u guys liked it so plz comment thnx again ^_^
These are really good!! xD
thnx but this one isnt as good as the first one...i kinda let my creativity down i can see the drop in the emotion in the writing
remember your your own worst critic so let yourself know you did a good job and just try a little harder next time :)
im reading this over and i realize tht its not as good as the first one =(
ur right..but im still thinking wht story to do next =/
OMG wonderful! i loved it!
Your so good at this I think you should like write songs too theres a lot of emotion and you can really feel what your feeling in the story
=)
Thnx soo much Angie...but u know ive tried to wrte songs and it just doesnt work for me i cant even get onr word of the first verse in....im soo bad at it i have writers block and a bad case.....and im gonna wrte another story but when i get the time
TTYL
~Hayley
AWE!! no worries my friend it will come to you in good time.
Thanks for the heads up on your reply I enjoy talking with you!! your my bestie
* hugs*
chat soon!!
Thanks Angie ur the best =)
no prob on the reply...it wasnt working and idk why =/
ur my bestest bestie =D
talk to u soon!
~Hayley