My Breaking Dawn pt1
Name- Natalie Swan
Age- 18
Info- Natalie is from Florida her parents are Charlie and Renee they sent her into boarding school Bella has never met her before. One night she was in her cabin when she heard crashing noises downstairs she went down and saw that her friend was found in a pool of blood and a man standing beside her and thats when her life changed and now she has gotten an invite to Bella and Edwards wedding.
Chapter 1
Chapter 1
I hope you will like it as iam new hear onto qibblo this is my first story that iam writing enjoyy!!:)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Today is the day iam meeting Bella and her Edward i was on the plane looking out the window thinkig how would i ever tell Bella that iam a Vampire and yes iam. I haven't gone off the human blood but i think i will be fine my eyes are perfectly blue and my hair well its blonde used to be brown but im ok with it. I have these insanely cool powers Fire,Earth,Air and Water cool or what. I got out of my trance when i heard the pilot saying "passengers please fasten seatbelts as we are landing in Los Angles". Finally i thought to myself as i felt the bump of the plane landing. I never told anyone about me coming i grabbed my bags and headed out the door. I bought a red ferrari as of course the people that i eat well i took there wallet to just in case. I walked into the parking lot and went into my ferrari and drove off down to Bellas. I wondered how she would react when i tell he r that was all that was going through my head right now.
Edwards P.O.V
I was in Bellas house talking to her about the wedding but of course Alice had it planned we are going to be having the wedding at the house and the reception there to. I could not wait to be marryied to the one i loved and as for the honeymoon iam keeping that a secret. Bella told me her sister was coming to the wedding and that she wanted her to be a bridesmaide. I then heard a car pull up to the house and then i could smell the smell of a Vampire.
Normal P.O.V
I pulled up to the house and saw that Charlie wasent home and in its place was a Volvo i opened the door and could smell a Vampire but i just thought it was me but i could smell it more as i got closer to the door when i could hear a conforsation going on between a man and a women and i knew it were Bella and Edward so i stood on the porch listening quietly.
E:" Do not go near that door Bella"
B:"Why whos there"
E:" Its a Vampire Bella"
B:" What are you talking about thats Natalie"
As soon as i heard my name i stepped away from the door quikly and stood there waiting Bella opened the door and said.
B:" Natalie omg your here what a surprise" she then gave me a hug and led me inside when the smell was getting stronger when i saw Edward he was a Vampire i gave him a horrible look when he gave me the same and grabbed Bella and put her behind his back in a very protective way. Bella looked confused when Edward asked me.
E:" What are you?."
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Today is the day iam meeting Bella and her Edward i was on the plane looking out the window thinkig how would i ever tell Bella that iam a Vampire and yes iam. I haven't gone off the human blood but i think i will be fine my eyes are perfectly blue and my hair well its blonde used to be brown but im ok with it. I have these insanely cool powers Fire,Earth,Air and Water cool or what. I got out of my trance when i heard the pilot saying "passengers please fasten seatbelts as we are landing in Los Angles". Finally i thought to myself as i felt the bump of the plane landing. I never told anyone about me coming i grabbed my bags and headed out the door. I bought a red ferrari as of course the people that i eat well i took there wallet to just in case. I walked into the parking lot and went into my ferrari and drove off down to Bellas. I wondered how she would react when i tell he r that was all that was going through my head right now.
Edwards P.O.V
I was in Bellas house talking to her about the wedding but of course Alice had it planned we are going to be having the wedding at the house and the reception there to. I could not wait to be marryied to the one i loved and as for the honeymoon iam keeping that a secret. Bella told me her sister was coming to the wedding and that she wanted her to be a bridesmaide. I then heard a car pull up to the house and then i could smell the smell of a Vampire.
Normal P.O.V
I pulled up to the house and saw that Charlie wasent home and in its place was a Volvo i opened the door and could smell a Vampire but i just thought it was me but i could smell it more as i got closer to the door when i could hear a conforsation going on between a man and a women and i knew it were Bella and Edward so i stood on the porch listening quietly.
E:" Do not go near that door Bella"
B:"Why whos there"
E:" Its a Vampire Bella"
B:" What are you talking about thats Natalie"
As soon as i heard my name i stepped away from the door quikly and stood there waiting Bella opened the door and said.
B:" Natalie omg your here what a surprise" she then gave me a hug and led me inside when the smell was getting stronger when i saw Edward he was a Vampire i gave him a horrible look when he gave me the same and grabbed Bella and put her behind his back in a very protective way. Bella looked confused when Edward asked me.
E:" What are you?."



10 Comments
Next please
Next!
Yup i'll ge te it soon i'm back te school ugh hate it :)
Awesome! ples continue!
Tanx an i surly wil:)
This is amazing! Go to Eminem14Raps or Diana_E_An (my second account). I'll add it to my Story Review. Give me time though. There are things I need to handle first.
Tanx an how do i do tha?
Love it!! Cant wait to see what happens next! =)
Preety good :)
Hey guys this is Natalie i was Love_u_x until i deleted my account by accident ha sorry