Better than Revenge (Story for Someone_Like_You's Contest)
I am currently stopping both of my stories to write this, but it will probably only be a few chapters, so....don't worry!!!!
Ha ha, like any of you care about my stories....jk :P
Chapter 1
The Story Starts When it Was Hot and It Was Summer
"Isn't this place beautiful?" I said.
Alex, my boyfriend, looked at me and smiled.
"Not as beautiful as you."
I blushed, and we walked forward.
The sand was hot under my feet. The waves crashing against the rocks and the rapid wind roared in my ears. I saw dozens and dozens of teenagers. Two of them were throwing a frisbee back and forth, and one glanced over at me. He grinned, but I rolled my eyes and pointed to Alex.
His eyes narrowed, and he pretended to have never saw me.
I felt lucky. Out of all of the girls in town, Alex chose me to be his girlfriend. And our relationship, going on for seven months, by the way, was going perfectly!
The only thing that bothered me was that girls were always hitting on him. But being the guy he was, he always ignored them and turned them down immediately. And whenever guys hit on me (which rarely ever happened) I did the same.
But, I still felt incredibly grateful to have found a guy so......perfect. Perfect for me.
"You hungry?" He asked me.
"Oh, a little."
"I'll get us a snack or something. Soda?"
"Yes, please."
I smiled and sighed as he walked off.
"Hello there!"
I whirled around. There was a teenage girl, incredibly skinny and sort of tall. She was blonde with tan skin and blue eyes.
"Who are you?" I asked.
She smiled fakely. "I'm Britney. You?"
"Colbie."
"Cool! Can I ask you a question?"
"No."
She laughed in a forced way. "Well, that guy over there?" She pointed in the direction Alex had left. "Who is he?"
"My boyfriend."
She laughed, but this time it was genuine.
"That's funny. But truly, brother, cousin, what?"
"He's my boyfriend." I repeated in an aggravated voice.
An evil grin spread across her face. "Not for long."
She strut off in Alex's direction, not bothering to look back to see me holding up my middle finger.
I was angry at her, but I wasn't worried. Alex would just turn her down like he does all the other girls. He would, wouldn't he?
Alex, my boyfriend, looked at me and smiled.
"Not as beautiful as you."
I blushed, and we walked forward.
The sand was hot under my feet. The waves crashing against the rocks and the rapid wind roared in my ears. I saw dozens and dozens of teenagers. Two of them were throwing a frisbee back and forth, and one glanced over at me. He grinned, but I rolled my eyes and pointed to Alex.
His eyes narrowed, and he pretended to have never saw me.
I felt lucky. Out of all of the girls in town, Alex chose me to be his girlfriend. And our relationship, going on for seven months, by the way, was going perfectly!
The only thing that bothered me was that girls were always hitting on him. But being the guy he was, he always ignored them and turned them down immediately. And whenever guys hit on me (which rarely ever happened) I did the same.
But, I still felt incredibly grateful to have found a guy so......perfect. Perfect for me.
"You hungry?" He asked me.
"Oh, a little."
"I'll get us a snack or something. Soda?"
"Yes, please."
I smiled and sighed as he walked off.
"Hello there!"
I whirled around. There was a teenage girl, incredibly skinny and sort of tall. She was blonde with tan skin and blue eyes.
"Who are you?" I asked.
She smiled fakely. "I'm Britney. You?"
"Colbie."
"Cool! Can I ask you a question?"
"No."
She laughed in a forced way. "Well, that guy over there?" She pointed in the direction Alex had left. "Who is he?"
"My boyfriend."
She laughed, but this time it was genuine.
"That's funny. But truly, brother, cousin, what?"
"He's my boyfriend." I repeated in an aggravated voice.
An evil grin spread across her face. "Not for long."
She strut off in Alex's direction, not bothering to look back to see me holding up my middle finger.
I was angry at her, but I wasn't worried. Alex would just turn her down like he does all the other girls. He would, wouldn't he?



26 Comments
I like it! :) I love Taylor Swift!
:O He'd better turn that- that monster down!
Great Start!
Thanks!
Awesom. Crap. I have competition. GOSH DARN IT! WHY IS EVERYONE SO MUCH BETTER THAN ME!!!
Oh, I'm not that competitive.....and I doubt I'm too much better than you. :)
Kills Britney I can't believe it!
Yours is A LOT BETTER than mine. :(
Well, I doubt that. In fact, I'm gonna read it right now.
Um.... awkward Can I pretty please have the link I can't find it or is it just a draft uhh.....I feel like such an idiot..... :P
hahahahaha... sigh
If you want to read the horrible thing :)
and i love the 3rd chapter :D shaving britneys head will be fun ;)
heere's the link :)
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/f-3dvko/Enchanted-based-off-the-song-by-Taylor-Swift
WOHOOO! Go girl!
Woot! Ready for part 3!