toby's first mystary
so this is the first story i ever wrote with my charther toby i had to do it for school for mystrey and surspense there has been a murder and it is up to toby to find out who did it
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Hi my name is Toby, Toby lamington. Yes i know it is a funny name but here in lamington ville it means i am ment to be amazing because my great,great,great,great,great,great, not so great grandfather mr lamington founded the town....Oh look at me i am rambling agian enough about me,and i wiil tell you the story i am here to tell you. you see my friends, (well my only friends),sophie and pipa got them selfs into an awful mess and this is how it all started....
"pipa" sophie yelled "were are you?"
"right here" pipa yelled back
"good stay close" sophie said looking at pipa in that way that mothers do.
"sophie just because i am two and a half minutes younger then you does not mean you can treat me like a baby"
"you have been telling me that since we could talk... now SHUT up and RUN!"
so sophie and pipa ran and ran untill sophie ran head first into me, yes me, Toby lamington. sorry i am rambling again that happens when i am nervous. so sophie runs into me and,,,
"T....T...Toby hi" sophie said nervously
"hey sop.... what's wrong with you?"
at this point pipa comes tearing round the corner like the bogey man was after her, and guess what? straight into the back of sophie whitch made her fly into me again harder this time.
"OW!!!" i yelled as she hit me
"OMG TOBY I AM SOOOOO SORRY"yelled pipa when she saw me
"no it's fine but more inportantly. why do you two look like you have seen a ghost?"
"ummm do we? ummm well we have to ummm go do ummm homework" said pipa. but lets just say that she is not a verry good lier and this was when i first knew something was wrong and this is the list i had.
1 pipa was lying to me she never lies to me
2 pipa and sophie NEVER DO THEIR HOMEWORK. so why start now?
so sophie walked of and went home,i did the same still trying to work out what was going on.
the next day at school i went to my locker,i looked around, i could not see sophie and pipa.That was odd they are normally here by now fighting about what they had in there sandwitch our something like that. When the bell rang, i grabed my stuff and went stright to class and still no sophine or pipa by moring break. This was when i realised the thired thing that was wrong it is as follows.
3 pipa abd sophie never miss a day of school unless somthing really bad happend.
They were not at school for a number of days. Then finally they come back when i saw them in the moring. It triggered 1,0000 questions in my brain, i ran up to them, without really knowing i was.
"TOBY SLOW DOWN YOU WILL KILL SOMEBODY!!!" both girls yelled at me
i stopped in surprise that i was moving so fast
"oh sorry about that... anyway where have you two been for the last few days?...well?
"we were ummm we were sick , Yeah we were sick" said the girls
"oh ok", i said trying to make it seem that i did not suspect anything (being a big nacy drew fan i kind of pick up on the little hits and clues here and there)
i now have a fourth thing on my list and that is as follows
4 sophie and pipa are not sure where they have been for the last few days
"pipa" sophie yelled "were are you?"
"right here" pipa yelled back
"good stay close" sophie said looking at pipa in that way that mothers do.
"sophie just because i am two and a half minutes younger then you does not mean you can treat me like a baby"
"you have been telling me that since we could talk... now SHUT up and RUN!"
so sophie and pipa ran and ran untill sophie ran head first into me, yes me, Toby lamington. sorry i am rambling again that happens when i am nervous. so sophie runs into me and,,,
"T....T...Toby hi" sophie said nervously
"hey sop.... what's wrong with you?"
at this point pipa comes tearing round the corner like the bogey man was after her, and guess what? straight into the back of sophie whitch made her fly into me again harder this time.
"OW!!!" i yelled as she hit me
"OMG TOBY I AM SOOOOO SORRY"yelled pipa when she saw me
"no it's fine but more inportantly. why do you two look like you have seen a ghost?"
"ummm do we? ummm well we have to ummm go do ummm homework" said pipa. but lets just say that she is not a verry good lier and this was when i first knew something was wrong and this is the list i had.
1 pipa was lying to me she never lies to me
2 pipa and sophie NEVER DO THEIR HOMEWORK. so why start now?
so sophie walked of and went home,i did the same still trying to work out what was going on.
the next day at school i went to my locker,i looked around, i could not see sophie and pipa.That was odd they are normally here by now fighting about what they had in there sandwitch our something like that. When the bell rang, i grabed my stuff and went stright to class and still no sophine or pipa by moring break. This was when i realised the thired thing that was wrong it is as follows.
3 pipa abd sophie never miss a day of school unless somthing really bad happend.
They were not at school for a number of days. Then finally they come back when i saw them in the moring. It triggered 1,0000 questions in my brain, i ran up to them, without really knowing i was.
"TOBY SLOW DOWN YOU WILL KILL SOMEBODY!!!" both girls yelled at me
i stopped in surprise that i was moving so fast
"oh sorry about that... anyway where have you two been for the last few days?...well?
"we were ummm we were sick , Yeah we were sick" said the girls
"oh ok", i said trying to make it seem that i did not suspect anything (being a big nacy drew fan i kind of pick up on the little hits and clues here and there)
i now have a fourth thing on my list and that is as follows
4 sophie and pipa are not sure where they have been for the last few days
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