Moonlite Dancer

Moonlite Dancer

Reads: 3 | Chapters: 1 |

This is a story of a girl, a teenage girl, who is like an angel. This is a sneak peek at it, so it's not like a chapter or anything like that. Please comment and rate because I'm nearly 100% sure it's good. Not really, I was just kidding when I said that which is why I need you to comment...and rate...It starts out where the main character, Jessica, and her friend, Anika are walking around the training facility that they are staying at.

Chapter 1

Part of Chapter 2...I call this exert, Kicking Butt

by: Tousjour
...We went back to the over crowded halls reluctantly as we talked about random things, mainly gossip. We stopped and watched as a nerd shook a soda bottle and than opened it. It exploded in a rain of Root bear, blasting the nerd's face and showering the halls with stickiness. Anika and I burst out laughing right as a huge, I mean HUGE (tall and muscular) guy slammed into me knocking me to the ground with extreme force. I looked up and saw him cracking up with his buddies as he pointed at me and laughed. I grabbed onto the railing and heaved myself up, heading strait for the root of the problem. I approached the giant with a white tee and black B-ball shorts. His semi long hair was just barley out of his eyes. I ran up undetected, threw back my leg back mid run and drop kicked my foot strait into the guy's shin so hard that he fell forward onto the ground. By now, his comrades had stopped laughing. The man on the ground got up and stood straight at his full height, about 6ft 5inches. He spat upon me as he glared from above.
"What do you think you're doing, Freshman?" he asked.
"What do I think I'm doing, you ask? I'll tell you what I'm doin, kickin your a*** cause I can and it's not that hard," I spit back. "There's a reason you're not suppose to hit girls. That reason's cause they'll getch-ya back, ten times worse!"
"Shut up, Freshman! No one's better than me, no one can beat me! That's why I'm Brad, Brad the Unbeatable!" he roared back.
"Oh really? I though Brad the Baby would fit you better," I said as a 'Ooo, you just got dissed' came from the crowd that was slowly gravitating their attention to us. Brad moved to punch me but I ducked. Quickly, I rose back to full height and slammed him in the chest. I knocked him to the ground and landed on him as he tried to strangle me but I kicked him in the knee and bit him. He let go of me and I rolled to the ground. I got back up on my feet and said, "You're not gonna boss me around. I can take care of myself." His gaze was menacing as he looked up at me and cradled his hurt hand...

After that, he never left me alone, he would punch me, hit me, trip me...you name it! The first day after, we were in the halls, he stuck out his foot. I fell over it and than sprang up. My fist went straight to his eye. Next time, we were in the knife rang. He threw a knife that hit me square in the arm. I yanked it out, flexed my hand, and than gave him a scare that ran from his eye to his mouth. After that, he punched me in the nose. In return, I dropped him from 30 ft in the air onto cement. It went on like this for awhile, until I got my first quest...

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Tousjour
13, Female
Seattle, WA, US

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