The Angel,My Savior
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The Angel,My Savior (an Angel love story)
Created by musicrocksmyworld1618
CHAPTER 1! sorry for the misspellings and grammer.
Created by musicrocksmyworld1618 on Tuesday, June 21, 2011
I was walking down a road trying to get home to my drunken mother and abusive father when I heard a cry. I turned around the sound was coming from the woods. I was having second thoughts when I heard that sound again louder. I didn't waste any time I ran right into the woods trying to find the little kid. "IF YOU CAN HEAR ME CRY OR SOMETHING!" I shouted I heard the cry again I was so relieved that I wasn't paying attention to where I was going. I slipped and fell head first into a creek. The creek was frozen but I fell from a high height and I broke the surface. I was immendtly frozen. I urged my muscles to work. I was numb but I had enough feeling to swim bring myself out that hole and onto dry land. I took off my winter jacket and my sweat suit (sweatpants, sweatshirt). This left me in my black tank top and red basketball shorts. I took my hair out its ponytail and tried rubbing my hands together. I slowly started to lose feeling. I started to walk toward where I thought the road was. I lost the little kid and I was praying to God they were ok.I fell not being able to feel my legs. I felt my body shut down I closed my eyes letting darkness surround me. I felt warmth then someone shaking me awake. I opened my eyes to see a guy with golden brown hair, and hazel eyes. He had angel wings the color of snow. I looked behind him and there were the gates of heaven. "Am I dead?" I asked "no but you are close. It's not your time so you have a choice to die now or to go back to your old life" the angel said. "I'd rather die" I said harshly "ok forget about your family. Think about your friends your brother. All your favorite sports the books you're working on. If you die you leave all that behind and you won't be able to follow your dream “the angel said. He crouched down so he was eye level with me. "I know how you feel I died 2 years ago I was 18.My life was just getting started. My family didn't really care for me I was a loner but I had many friends and sports. I would write my feelings out in journals until they turned into stories. Then I died in a car crash after turning in my book to my publisher. I never published anymore books but my death was peaceful knowing I followed my dream “the angel said."You're the only one who's ever understood me. Please don't leave me" I said grapping his hand. "I won't Samantha I promise" he said I woke up still frozen but I felt a sudden heat and I knew it was the angel."What's your name" I asked "Danny now come on we need to get you to the road “Danny answered he picked me up bridal style and took me to the road. "I unthawed your legs enough for you to walk into the middle of the road. Your friend Christian should be coming in 3 2 1" Danny said sure enough I saw headlights. "Danny is you going to leave me “I asked as I saw his form fade. "No I'm right inside your heart. You can hear me like a whisper in your ear. I'm going to make you better Sammy I promise" he whispered. I started to wave my arms and after the car stopped I slumped to the ground. "Oh gosh! Sammy! Sammy please is ok" Christian asked pulling off his coat and putting it on me. "What happened “he asked once we were in his car and the heater was turned up. All I managed to get out was " woods...little kid...ice...water....height...break....so cold" through chattering teeth. He seemed to understand though. He took me to his house ran the hot water and stripped me of my clothes. Danny growled in my head as Christian put me in the tub naked 'Danny calm down please we've been friends since we were in diapers' I thought I felt him calm down before I went to sleep. When I wake up the next morning I was in a pair of Christian's boxers and one of his shirts. I looked at the clock and it read 10:30 I panicked cause I was supposed to be in school. I started to jump out of bed but a warm hand pushed me back down."Where do you think you’re going" Danny asked "to school" I answered. "Uh no you're not" Danny said "yes I am! Now let me up!"I argued I finally broke out his grip but he pinned me to the bed. "You're an annoying angel you know that" I asked after giving up. "Well I wouldn't be a good guardian angel if I let you out of bed after recovering from hypothermia now would I" Danny answered, I was still trying to catch my breath. Half of it was from the fight I put up the other half was from the way Danny was looking down at me and how his hair was getting in his eyes. When I finally caught my breath Danny said "tell me what you're thinking" I shook my head "nothing important" I replied. I heard Danny sigh "it's so frustrating not knowing what you're thinking. For 2 years I’ve watched you laugh, dance,sing,smile.I've watched you play your games and win them. I’ve watched you crush on guys never the jocks nor the dramas you were always too smart to fall for their charm. I've watched you make a fool out of yourself too many times to count. I watched you party with your friends. I’ve watched you lock yourself in your room and write while your parents fought. I watched you cower in fear when your father banged on the door. I've watched you sneak out the window to avoid bruises before school then get them that same day for what happened that morning and the night before. I have felt so many different emotions watching you but never frustration and this other emotion that I can't put my finger on. Please tell me what you're thinking “Danny pled. I let out a sign and said "I'm thinking about how many bruises I'm going to have and that I'm going to have to buy a big jar of cover up". I saw his face go hard and turned my head seeing that he still had me pinned to the bed. I felt him stiffen then he disappeared. "Danny “I whispered "Christian just walked in. I forgot to tell you he left a note saying he would come back for lunch" Danny whispered. As soon as he said that I heard the front door slam and footsteps coming up the staris."SAMMY!I GOT YOUR FAVORITE BURGER!"Christian shouted as he was coming down the hallway. "NO WAY"I yelled he came in dangling the bag "way" he answered. "Chris I'm going to look like a fatty and it's going to be all your fault" I joked as I took a bite. "No you're going to look like a starved person. Have you seen how skinny you are “Christian joked. "Ha ha you're soooo funny" I said sarcastic while rolling my eyes. I took another bite "Sam you have to be feeling better the way you're acting" Christian said serious I smiled at him started to eat my fries. "You must have someone who loves you up there “Christian said pointing up towards heaven. "Yeah and I have a feeling he's watching me right now" I stared out loud then I said in my mind 'isn’t that right you stalker?' Danny started laughing 'Danny the stalker hey that's catchy' he laughed harder."Sam Sam Sammy" Christian called. "Sorry I was thinking about my guardian angel" I said. "Do you think it's a family member" Christian asked "nah no one in my family likes me. I was thinking someone who has watched me my whole life who actually cared" I answered. Christian nodded his head "yeah that makes sense”. I looked at the clock "you should head to class I'll join you soon “I said."You need to stay in bed. I told the secretary who told your parents so hopefully they don't do anything rash. See ya" Christian said he got up and left. "Won't do anything rash my butt yeah my mom might be sober enough to yell and my dad might not beat me all the way black and blue but close enough" I mumbled as I finished my lunch. Danny appeared crossed legged in front of me and took my hands and looked deeply into my eyes. "Sammy I promise I will get you out this house" "But where will I go" I asked "let me worry about that “he answered I smiled in relief."You really are and angels aren’t you?"I asked he smiled "got that right" I laughed.
AT HOME LAYER THAT DAY:I snuck into my house quietly through my bedroom window. I closed the window quietly."Where have you been? You didn't come home last night and you didn't go to school “my father said from my bed."Daddy I got hurt I stayed at Christian's house “I said backing away from him."Lay down on your back because I don’t believe that for a minute” dad growled."But daddy” I pled but he pushed me down on the bed and took off his belt."Daddy not the belt please “I pled. He didn't listen to me he just started hitting me with it. I cried silently 'my punishment is worse than I thought' I thought. Danny lay down next to me and smoothed my hair down "shhhh it's going to be ok" he whispered in my ear. I bit my lip when he hit me harder "it hurts danny"I whispered "I know “Danny said he kissed my hair "I know".
The Angel,My Savior (an Angel love story)
Created by musicrocksmyworld1618
CHAPTER 1! sorry for the misspellings and grammer.
Created by musicrocksmyworld1618 on Tuesday, June 21, 2011
I was walking down a road trying to get home to my drunken mother and abusive father when I heard a cry. I turned around the sound was coming from the woods. I was having second thoughts when I heard that sound again louder. I didn't waste any time I ran right into the woods trying to find the little kid. "IF YOU CAN HEAR ME CRY OR SOMETHING!" I shouted I heard the cry again I was so relieved that I wasn't paying attention to where I was going. I slipped and fell head first into a creek. The creek was frozen but I fell from a high height and I broke the surface. I was immendtly frozen. I urged my muscles to work. I was numb but I had enough feeling to swim bring myself out that hole and onto dry land. I took off my winter jacket and my sweat suit (sweatpants, sweatshirt). This left me in my black tank top and red basketball shorts. I took my hair out its ponytail and tried rubbing my hands together. I slowly started to lose feeling. I started to walk toward where I thought the road was. I lost the little kid and I was praying to God they were ok.I fell not being able to feel my legs. I felt my body shut down I closed my eyes letting darkness surround me. I felt warmth then someone shaking me awake. I opened my eyes to see a guy with golden brown hair, and hazel eyes. He had angel wings the color of snow. I looked behind him and there were the gates of heaven. "Am I dead?" I asked "no but you are close. It's not your time so you have a choice to die now or to go back to your old life" the angel said. "I'd rather die" I said harshly "ok forget about your family. Think about your friends your brother. All your favorite sports the books you're working on. If you die you leave all that behind and you won't be able to follow your dream “the angel said. He crouched down so he was eye level with me. "I know how you feel I died 2 years ago I was 18.My life was just getting started. My family didn't really care for me I was a loner but I had many friends and sports. I would write my feelings out in journals until they turned into stories. Then I died in a car crash after turning in my book to my publisher. I never published anymore books but my death was peaceful knowing I followed my dream “the angel said."You're the only one who's ever understood me. Please don't leave me" I said grapping his hand. "I won't Samantha I promise" he said I woke up still frozen but I felt a sudden heat and I knew it was the angel."What's your name" I asked "Danny now come on we need to get you to the road “Danny answered he picked me up bridal style and took me to the road. "I unthawed your legs enough for you to walk into the middle of the road. Your friend Christian should be coming in 3 2 1" Danny said sure enough I saw headlights. "Danny is you going to leave me “I asked as I saw his form fade. "No I'm right inside your heart. You can hear me like a whisper in your ear. I'm going to make you better Sammy I promise" he whispered. I started to wave my arms and after the car stopped I slumped to the ground. "Oh gosh! Sammy! Sammy please is ok" Christian asked pulling off his coat and putting it on me. "What happened “he asked once we were in his car and the heater was turned up. All I managed to get out was " woods...little kid...ice...water....height...break....so cold" through chattering teeth. He seemed to understand though. He took me to his house ran the hot water and stripped me of my clothes. Danny growled in my head as Christian put me in the tub naked 'Danny calm down please we've been friends since we were in diapers' I thought I felt him calm down before I went to sleep. When I wake up the next morning I was in a pair of Christian's boxers and one of his shirts. I looked at the clock and it read 10:30 I panicked cause I was supposed to be in school. I started to jump out of bed but a warm hand pushed me back down."Where do you think you’re going" Danny asked "to school" I answered. "Uh no you're not" Danny said "yes I am! Now let me up!"I argued I finally broke out his grip but he pinned me to the bed. "You're an annoying angel you know that" I asked after giving up. "Well I wouldn't be a good guardian angel if I let you out of bed after recovering from hypothermia now would I" Danny answered, I was still trying to catch my breath. Half of it was from the fight I put up the other half was from the way Danny was looking down at me and how his hair was getting in his eyes. When I finally caught my breath Danny said "tell me what you're thinking" I shook my head "nothing important" I replied. I heard Danny sigh "it's so frustrating not knowing what you're thinking. For 2 years I’ve watched you laugh, dance,sing,smile.I've watched you play your games and win them. I’ve watched you crush on guys never the jocks nor the dramas you were always too smart to fall for their charm. I've watched you make a fool out of yourself too many times to count. I watched you party with your friends. I’ve watched you lock yourself in your room and write while your parents fought. I watched you cower in fear when your father banged on the door. I've watched you sneak out the window to avoid bruises before school then get them that same day for what happened that morning and the night before. I have felt so many different emotions watching you but never frustration and this other emotion that I can't put my finger on. Please tell me what you're thinking “Danny pled. I let out a sign and said "I'm thinking about how many bruises I'm going to have and that I'm going to have to buy a big jar of cover up". I saw his face go hard and turned my head seeing that he still had me pinned to the bed. I felt him stiffen then he disappeared. "Danny “I whispered "Christian just walked in. I forgot to tell you he left a note saying he would come back for lunch" Danny whispered. As soon as he said that I heard the front door slam and footsteps coming up the staris."SAMMY!I GOT YOUR FAVORITE BURGER!"Christian shouted as he was coming down the hallway. "NO WAY"I yelled he came in dangling the bag "way" he answered. "Chris I'm going to look like a fatty and it's going to be all your fault" I joked as I took a bite. "No you're going to look like a starved person. Have you seen how skinny you are “Christian joked. "Ha ha you're soooo funny" I said sarcastic while rolling my eyes. I took another bite "Sam you have to be feeling better the way you're acting" Christian said serious I smiled at him started to eat my fries. "You must have someone who loves you up there “Christian said pointing up towards heaven. "Yeah and I have a feeling he's watching me right now" I stared out loud then I said in my mind 'isn’t that right you stalker?' Danny started laughing 'Danny the stalker hey that's catchy' he laughed harder."Sam Sam Sammy" Christian called. "Sorry I was thinking about my guardian angel" I said. "Do you think it's a family member" Christian asked "nah no one in my family likes me. I was thinking someone who has watched me my whole life who actually cared" I answered. Christian nodded his head "yeah that makes sense”. I looked at the clock "you should head to class I'll join you soon “I said."You need to stay in bed. I told the secretary who told your parents so hopefully they don't do anything rash. See ya" Christian said he got up and left. "Won't do anything rash my butt yeah my mom might be sober enough to yell and my dad might not beat me all the way black and blue but close enough" I mumbled as I finished my lunch. Danny appeared crossed legged in front of me and took my hands and looked deeply into my eyes. "Sammy I promise I will get you out this house" "But where will I go" I asked "let me worry about that “he answered I smiled in relief."You really are and angels aren’t you?"I asked he smiled "got that right" I laughed.
AT HOME LAYER THAT DAY:I snuck into my house quietly through my bedroom window. I closed the window quietly."Where have you been? You didn't come home last night and you didn't go to school “my father said from my bed."Daddy I got hurt I stayed at Christian's house “I said backing away from him."Lay down on your back because I don’t believe that for a minute” dad growled."But daddy” I pled but he pushed me down on the bed and took off his belt."Daddy not the belt please “I pled. He didn't listen to me he just started hitting me with it. I cried silently 'my punishment is worse than I thought' I thought. Danny lay down next to me and smoothed my hair down "shhhh it's going to be ok" he whispered in my ear. I bit my lip when he hit me harder "it hurts danny"I whispered "I know “Danny said he kissed my hair "I know".
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