The End. An original poem...
Haha its a poem that randomly poped in to my mind. Its quite.... Uh well it just about as messed up as I am.
Look here, look close,
A failure in the eyes if most
A heart broken in two,
And its all because of you
The evil glint of the knife,
As she planned to take her life
A cool blade against he wrist,
She clenches her hand in a fist
"Close your eyes and count to three,
Then you will be free."
She whispers as her eyes slide shut,
On the count of three she cuts
The blad slashes the pale white skin,
No one can imagine the pain she is in
But it is nothing compared to everyday,
The vile things that her peers say
But now she doesn't care,
All she does is stare
Stare at the darkening ceiling,
As she loses all feeling
She grins while thinking back on her life,
Her grip loosening on the knife
Her eyes are vacant and tear-stained,
Crimson blood is all that remains
A teenage girl takes her life,
Because you cut her, just like the knife.
Well there it is. A sucky poem from the insanity of my mind:D its quite depressing really....
A failure in the eyes if most
A heart broken in two,
And its all because of you
The evil glint of the knife,
As she planned to take her life
A cool blade against he wrist,
She clenches her hand in a fist
"Close your eyes and count to three,
Then you will be free."
She whispers as her eyes slide shut,
On the count of three she cuts
The blad slashes the pale white skin,
No one can imagine the pain she is in
But it is nothing compared to everyday,
The vile things that her peers say
But now she doesn't care,
All she does is stare
Stare at the darkening ceiling,
As she loses all feeling
She grins while thinking back on her life,
Her grip loosening on the knife
Her eyes are vacant and tear-stained,
Crimson blood is all that remains
A teenage girl takes her life,
Because you cut her, just like the knife.
Well there it is. A sucky poem from the insanity of my mind:D its quite depressing really....
13 Comments
Wow.....................................This is so sad yet such a very well written poem!!!
Thanks:D it is quite depressing:/
It's depressing, yet a very good poem.
Aww.. Buddie! Great sad, depressing poem. Now you made me cry.... haha
Thank you buddy! And I'm sowwy:/ I wrote it cause I had a little encounter with the razor blade myself but I'm good now. :))
Haven't we all? And I'm glad to hear that :)
Hehe xD we all have our bad times and our worse times. I made my friend promise to beat me up if I do somethin liek that so yeash. But yay for depressing poems and skittles:))))))))
Wow, well written. ^.^
Thankie you:))))))
this is amazing!
so well written :)
thankies!!!!!!!!
OMG................. just blew my mind........................AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!