The Tale of Two Sisters
Please help me finnish this story!! I think ti is off to a good start, and all I really need is your help!!!Thank you! And hope you can think of the next chapter!
Chapter 1
Missing
"Hannah!" Shouted Callie, "Wait up!" The girls were going to their favorite place...the stream. Now, this was not an ordinary stream, it was magical. Ever since the girls were young, they would go down there, and what ever troubles they had, would be resolved by the stream waters. The Girls were orphaned at the age of 6, and lived with their Aunt and Uncle, Mary and Tom. The girls were always interested in their past. Knowing that their dad "Died" and their "mom' left them on the street, they were always wondering why. Why did these things happen?
So, one day when they were working out all their problems by the stream, they found a note...
" What the..." " what did you find?" Callie was always being curious. " I am not exactly sure what it is, I think it is for us". The girls looked at each other. "Read it, I want to know what it says!" Hannah started to read.
YOU WILL NEVER KNOW FOR SURE, BUT YOU MAY FIND IT ALONG THE WAY ~ MADDAM FIDALGO
"Okay... who?" "Maddam Fidalgo! I remember reading about her in my book of enchantments!" Callie seemed to love magic, and always loved the thought of there being witches and wizards. This note ment a lot to Callie. It made her exited, and scared all at the same time. "Tell me more about Maddam Fidalgo", Hannah said with an interested look on her face. " Well, this is what scares me...." Callie Stopped. " Maddam Fidalgo was... Well, one... She was a famous FAMOUS sorcerous, and two.. welll.. um...." Callie did not want to say anymore. " Um....... What?" At this time Hannah was getting edgey. " She was not good" Callie exclamed. " In fact, she was very bad". Hannah did not like the sound of this. The girls decided to go back to the house and talk it over with their Aunt and Uncle. When they got to the house, It was empty. Their Aunt and Uncle were gone.
So, one day when they were working out all their problems by the stream, they found a note...
" What the..." " what did you find?" Callie was always being curious. " I am not exactly sure what it is, I think it is for us". The girls looked at each other. "Read it, I want to know what it says!" Hannah started to read.
YOU WILL NEVER KNOW FOR SURE, BUT YOU MAY FIND IT ALONG THE WAY ~ MADDAM FIDALGO
"Okay... who?" "Maddam Fidalgo! I remember reading about her in my book of enchantments!" Callie seemed to love magic, and always loved the thought of there being witches and wizards. This note ment a lot to Callie. It made her exited, and scared all at the same time. "Tell me more about Maddam Fidalgo", Hannah said with an interested look on her face. " Well, this is what scares me...." Callie Stopped. " Maddam Fidalgo was... Well, one... She was a famous FAMOUS sorcerous, and two.. welll.. um...." Callie did not want to say anymore. " Um....... What?" At this time Hannah was getting edgey. " She was not good" Callie exclamed. " In fact, she was very bad". Hannah did not like the sound of this. The girls decided to go back to the house and talk it over with their Aunt and Uncle. When they got to the house, It was empty. Their Aunt and Uncle were gone.



14 Comments
It's off to a good start! Could I write the next chapter?
Did you invite the next person yet? please do! :)
did you invite the next person?
Yes! I hope they write it soon :)
Sure! Go ahead! and Thanks :)
Okay, I finished my chapter :) Who should I assign it to?
hmmm... idk.... anyone who you think is a good writer! lol
awesome!! I just read your chapter... and it rocks!! yay :) I am so happy with the story :)
yay! good!
really good,i like it! :D
hehe.. thanx!
Great!!! keep writing everyone!!
Can I write?
hmmm... i think so.... I am not sure if you have to be invited by someone though. I will ask someone.....But, if you would like to, I will try to find a way :)