When Shadows Cross
Okay so I based this story off this picture
http://www.quibblo.com/user/therobberduck521/photoalbum/1715156?page=4&per_page=9
Because no one choose it in my contest and I really wanted someone too so here is the story.
A/N:Italics wasn't working so anything in ' those marks is the angels voice,at least until Italics works again.
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The dark angel stood over me,her sword poised to kill.Her voice spoke as clearly in my head as if she said it aloud.'Its your time to die monster'.I felt my breath coming is shallower and shallower breaths as she raised her sword above her head,the gold of the swords angel winged hilt winked it the fires of the hellish land that surrounded us.Her sword whsitled down as she spoke in my head again,'Let my blade sing your death song beast'.
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What do you think,
If I get 5 comments
then I will tell the story.
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The dark angel stood over me,her sword poised to kill.Her voice spoke as clearly in my head as if she said it aloud.'Its your time to die monster'.I felt my breath coming is shallower and shallower breaths as she raised her sword above her head,the gold of the swords angel winged hilt winked it the fires of the hellish land that surrounded us.Her sword whsitled down as she spoke in my head again,'Let my blade sing your death song beast'.
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What do you think,
If I get 5 comments
then I will tell the story.
15 Comments
Nice so far!
i was going to choose this pic, it was my second choice ^-^
but good job so far ^-^
Awesome so far :D
Love it! :D
Pleeeeeze write more!!! It's awesome!! And your grammar is, like, perfect!! I say that because, nowadays, it's sort of rare to find grammar like that. :D
Wow,I didn't excpect my grammar to be good
Are you kidding me???? It's great! Oh, and the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks,normally my grammar sucks crap
XD
Really good! XD
Dude,whats with the XD
It's my super happy face. Because I'm super happy your write such a good story.
Oh...............XD
Cool. A little dark, but cool none the less :)
I was in one of those moods when I wrote the second chapter :D