The Story of a Slytherin
ok this is a rewrite didn't like giving an introduction so here goes nothing. Again based off of me kind of, because i was sorted into Slytherin on Pottermore.
DISCLAIMER: I do not own the characters or the base of the plot that is all J.K. Rowling.
Hope you like my story
Chapter 1
Back to Heaven away from Hell
"Miss Cole, Miss Cole, get up Miss Cole, you need to get ready or you will miss your train Miss Cole," I hear our house elf Twinkle say. "Twinkle what did I say about coming into my room without knocking." I say tiredly. "Miss Twinkle knocked, you did not answer so I came in miss, Twinkle did not mean to angry you miss, its just Master Cole asked me to wake you." I sit up in my bed and look at little Twinkle with fear in her eyes. "Twinkle it's ok I was only joking, thank you Twinkle for waking me, now you may leave and tell me father I am getting ready." I say as the little elf bows and and scurries away out of the room.
As I get up I open my curtains in my room and looks out into the garden always the same, "oh I hate it here it is so gloomy," I think to my self. At least I am going to Hogwarts today for the 5th time in my life, still a happy moment though. As I decided on what to wear I finally put on this http://www.polyvore.com/back_to_hogwarts/set?id=42316470 and i walk out of my room, down the stairs, and into the kitchen. I see my mother and father already there eating they didn't even look at me. "Hello mum, dad" I say. "Hello dear" my mum says, my dad not even looking at me didn't even say a word. I sit down by my mum as twinkle gives my plate of bacon and eggs. When I finish eating I go back up stairs to finish packing. Then I go to the cage by my bed side and look at my Tawny Owl, Flower sitting in her cage looking at my with her big black eyes. "So Flower ready to go back to Hogwarts." I say as she hoots happily. I finally finish packing and I walk down stairs with my trunk in one hand and Flower in the other.
"Come on" my father says as we walk out the door and to the car. I climb into the car, and my dad starts to drive farther away from the gloomy sad mansion. Finally going back to Heaven and away from my Hell.
Author's Note: Please Comment and Thanks for reading
As I get up I open my curtains in my room and looks out into the garden always the same, "oh I hate it here it is so gloomy," I think to my self. At least I am going to Hogwarts today for the 5th time in my life, still a happy moment though. As I decided on what to wear I finally put on this http://www.polyvore.com/back_to_hogwarts/set?id=42316470 and i walk out of my room, down the stairs, and into the kitchen. I see my mother and father already there eating they didn't even look at me. "Hello mum, dad" I say. "Hello dear" my mum says, my dad not even looking at me didn't even say a word. I sit down by my mum as twinkle gives my plate of bacon and eggs. When I finish eating I go back up stairs to finish packing. Then I go to the cage by my bed side and look at my Tawny Owl, Flower sitting in her cage looking at my with her big black eyes. "So Flower ready to go back to Hogwarts." I say as she hoots happily. I finally finish packing and I walk down stairs with my trunk in one hand and Flower in the other.
"Come on" my father says as we walk out the door and to the car. I climb into the car, and my dad starts to drive farther away from the gloomy sad mansion. Finally going back to Heaven and away from my Hell.
Author's Note: Please Comment and Thanks for reading



2 Comments
interesting i like it so far!
thanks I will write another chapter later today, just let me get some ideas so it doesn't seem choppy(hope I spelled that right)