A song/poem. not sure what to call it yet.
Original made by me. This song is based on my life. Tell me about what you think, if you want.
Bring me down
Let me fall
It doesn't matter to you
Because you never cared
Invisible to the world
Unknown to you
Chorus
Remember when I had a dream
And you tore it apart
Remember when I had a heart
And you shattered it
I used to believe
And now I know
That dreams don't come true
Should I have known?
You told me the truth
My soul lost of any talent
What can I ever become?
I was God's mistake
His one and only flaw
Chorus
Remember when I had a dream
And you tore it apart
Remember when I had a heart
And you shattered it
I used to believe
And now I know
That dreams don't come true
Dreams crushed
Love long-gone
Hope broken
Prayers failed
Chorus
Remember when I had a dream
And you tore it apart
Remember when I had a heart
And you shattered it
I used to believe
And now I know
That dreams don't come true
Don't let people bring you down like they have done to me. Hope you liked some of it if any at all. Thanks for wasting a minute or two of your life on this and on me.
Let me fall
It doesn't matter to you
Because you never cared
Invisible to the world
Unknown to you
Chorus
Remember when I had a dream
And you tore it apart
Remember when I had a heart
And you shattered it
I used to believe
And now I know
That dreams don't come true
Should I have known?
You told me the truth
My soul lost of any talent
What can I ever become?
I was God's mistake
His one and only flaw
Chorus
Remember when I had a dream
And you tore it apart
Remember when I had a heart
And you shattered it
I used to believe
And now I know
That dreams don't come true
Dreams crushed
Love long-gone
Hope broken
Prayers failed
Chorus
Remember when I had a dream
And you tore it apart
Remember when I had a heart
And you shattered it
I used to believe
And now I know
That dreams don't come true
Don't let people bring you down like they have done to me. Hope you liked some of it if any at all. Thanks for wasting a minute or two of your life on this and on me.
33 Comments
It's beautiful!!!! It made me think of the song Unforgivable by HH :3
HH? I never heard of it.
It's short for Hawthorne Heights
I like your poem/ song. I think it is more a song because it has a chorus.
Cool.
Wow I love it! Do you have any more? :)
5 stars! =D
I made two other songs that I already posted. Thanks for liking them even thhough they aren't that good :(
They are AWESOME! =D
its incredible!!! ur amazing!! XD
You are too sweet. I dont deserve the compliment though.
it made me think of whatever it is called...
you cant bring me-e down.
i am beatiful...
no matter what you say.
That song is called Beautiful by christina aguilera. This song is basically accepting all the bring-me-downs not embracing who you are.
and also call the songdreams dont come true
or dreams wont come true cause of you
Dreams dont come true work better :) and thanks
ya. i thought that too. welcome!
i love it! describes my life perfectly so its too late for me to be careful.
Aww. Im sorry :(
dont be sorry for the past, instead be glad im not thinking about sueside (sorry if it sounds harsh. im not trying to be)
I AM! :)
Uniqe I like it. Could I write another song based off of it?
Sure :) i dont mind.
Nice poem/song. It was very well-written (like everything you write).
But to be honest...it's too late.
whats 2 late ?
Awwww. Im sorry :( but thanks for the comment :/
Anytime Violet. You deserve every positive word said to you! Don't you forget that.
thanks :))))
love :3