My Own (lovely! =D) Hunger Games Poems!
Warning: these poems may contain:
Awesomeness
Impulsive rhyming
Hunger Games
Rhyming
Amazing rhyming!!!!!
Football
Oh, I lied. ^^^ :3
Yep, this is just here so I can start writing drafts.
So, meh.
Sorry if I faked you out.
But the next time there will be poems!!!!! Yay!!!!!!
So, meh.
Sorry if I faked you out.
But the next time there will be poems!!!!! Yay!!!!!!
24 Comments
Well written? Yes.
Lovely? Let others be the judge of that.
It was a sweet poem, however there was no rhythm.
It should follow an even beat
If it rhymes format should be neat
Ba-dum, ba-dum
Ba-dum, ba dum.
Not
dum ba
Ba-
Dum dum
Ba-dum.
Otherwise, it's well done.
Oh, ok. =) I thought it would follow an even rhyme if I rhymed the second and the fourth.
Even rhyme, yes.
even rhythm, no.
They're quite different.
Don't feel bad, I'm a terrible culprit of this..
I don't rhyme in my poems anymore.
See that? What I did right there? I used rhytm in my sentances to give an example.
Oh, I get it. ^.^ but I think I might stick without rhythm. I kinda.... like it. XD oh gosh, that probably sound weird. Well, to each his own I guess. =3
I think it's really awesome!
Thank you!!!!! =D
Your a great poet :)
Thank you! That means a lot! =D
Great as always, I love Boy With The Bread =)
Thank you!!! =3 yeah, I really like Boy with the Bread too!
Boy With The Bread is good because I am Team Gale.
Rhythm is friggin so much better. You done me proud.
Hahaha, thanks! ^.^ to be honest, I wasn't even trying to use rhythm. XD
I LOVE the last one!
"The name is called I volunteer, you may have guessed i'm a Career" I love it!!
Thanks! =D
That last one had a wonderful meter! You're improving!
Thanks! You really helped me out, too! =)
I love the last one! :D These are amazing, girlie :D
Thanks so much, boo. ;D
Wow your good!
Thank you!!!!! =3
yep