Identical
Our town was made into an old-fasioned Tourist Trap for people that actually care enough to take the old back roads to Queen City, Population 25 People, countless animals.
We literally have 1 motel, with a whopping total of 4 rooms. A general store with an attatched cafe, that has a counter that our friends and our siblings sit at almost everyday for fountain sodas, and on Friday's for rootbeer floats or some of Mrs. Dawson's homemade sweets.
That's the rundown for our town.
Chapter 1
New Guy
Ashton
"Nash, being with you makes me feel bad!" I joked with my boyfriend.
"Why's that?" he asked, kissing me. We were in the prairie that we liked to hike up to since we were little.
"Because you're the only 15 year old boy in this small-town, so Bae, Gabryela, and Loni don't have anyone."
"Not for long," I looked at Nash in wonder.
"Huh? What are you talking about?"
"Oh, well, a new family, the Keith's, have a 16 year old boy. I've heard he's bad news, though. Baelin, Allona, and Gaby are smart enough."
"I hope so." He could tell I was worried about my twin. He ruffled my long, blonde hair.
"Baelin will be just fine." He said, kissing my forehead. I nodded.
Baelin
"Yo, Bae-Bae!" my older brother called. Bae-Bae was my annoying baby nickname.
"What, Preston?"
"Guess what a little birdy told me?"
"What?"
"Guess!" I swear, he is just like a 3 year old sometimes.
"Fine, fine... your waffles caught on fire? Again?" I was master at random. He looked at me funny.
"No, moron! A new pair of people are coming here, so I got a job painting the 'Population: 23' sign to a 'Population: 25' sign!"
"Good for you. Know any about the family?"
"Yeah. They're going to live at the motel for a while until they build there house, so that's how Zara, Nash, and I know, and if Nash knows, then Ashton knows, I'm assuming. Anyway's the kid, Rory, is 16 and he sounds like a jerk. The whole bad-boy image. You and Gaby and Loni might be desperate, but be careful. I'm sure that Loni's dad won't let her. The dad of the family sounds pretty cool, though. He's Xavior Keith, and is the newest cop. Not that we need another one... now you'll have to excuse me," He checked his watch. "I'm late for picking up Destiny. Dinner date, all the way in Bright's City!" I didn't get why he loved that girl so much, but at the rate they were going, they were probably going to get married.
"Bae?" I heard my twin come into the room. "You heard about the new guy yet?"
"Oh yeah, Rory Keith. Pres just told me."
"That's his name?" I nodded, then told her everything I knew. Then we pondered every possibility and awaited his arrival.
Ashton
The day the Keith's arrived, Cass and I were sick. That was because I was stuck with baby-sitting duty when Cass had the flu.
Now, Baelin is welcoming the newcomers while I'm at home, puking my guts out.
Baelin
Rory Keith was like nothing else. Credit given to his latest blowout with his dad, Rory now had his own motel room, where he lived by himself. He started hitting on me as soon as I walked through the door to his room, unaccompanied by my dad.
"You Baelin? Or Ashton?" He asked. I liked that he put my name first, as nobody did that in this town.
"Baelin. You're Rory, right?"
"Nope. I'm yours." I grimaced at the horrible pick-up line.
"Well, I'm still Baelin." T could tell that we were going to be friends, despite my brother and sister's warnings.
"Too bad. Hey,"
"What?"
"Let's get out of here," he silenced my instantaneous protest by placing his pointer finger on my lips, "I've heard that there's some sort of meadow-"
"Prairie,"
"-Whatever, Prairie, that everyone hikes to. Common, Bae-b, let's go." I thought he was ballsy for making my name into 'Babe'. Despite my wanting to punch him in his flaunting face, I went.
As soon as we got there, he tried to kiss me.
"What the hell are you doing?" I all but yelled at him.
"You're awful purty." he joked, dropping into a hick accent. I had to blush. Ashton and I were forever having compliments handed to us about our looks. We were identical, both with tan skin, blonde hair down to our waists, green eyes, and we were tiny, petite. With a total height of 5'3", and a weight of 100 pounds.
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To see what the twins look like follow this link:
http://www.google.com/imgres?hl=en&gbv=2&biw=1280&bih=642&tbm=isch&tbnid=uB8gfvCHjwnm7M:&imgrefurl=http://warriorcatsrpg.com/other-role-playing/the-pretty-comittee-sign-up-only-226261.0.html&docid=9EY2ilvIzpNWlM&imgurl=http://data.whicdn.com/images/10173457/0b61c51900096c984ddafd35_large.%253F1306484078&w=500&h=648&ei=CZodT4CPK6mGiQLKpcCzCA&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=1036&vpy=55&dur=7597&hovh=256&hovw=197&tx=82&ty=80&sig=100351463246233001989&page=4&tbnh=152&tbnw=117&start=86&ndsp=31&ved=1t:429,r:30,s:86
Also! Pleeeeeeeeeease comment! I won't do another chapter without comments! Love's ya! Mo)
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Baelin continued
"Uhm, thanks?" My voice made it into a questions. "We should get back soon..." I hinted. He just smiled at me.
"Won't you give me just one little kiss?" I felt torn. I hadn't noticed how hot he was. But first I had a question.
"Rory?"
"Yes, Baelin?" I bit my lip.
"Are you really a... bad boy?" he laughed.
"Define bad boy!" then he leaned in. If I had had it my way, I wouldn't have kissed him back, wouldn't have let this city-boy be my first kiss. But, as usual, I didn't have my way.
And fate took it's course.
Ashton
"Common, Bae-Bae! Tell me EVERYTHING! Start at the beginning! What are our newcomers like?" Baelin had just come in from welcoming Rory. I could feel her tension. "Spill!" She bit her lip.
"So, when I walked into his room, he immeadiately started hitting on me. He first asked me, 'You Baelin? Or Ashton?'" I felt as if Baelin flip-flopped the names. Everyone always put my name first!
"He said your name first?" I asked.
"Yep. Then I said, 'Baelin. You Rory?', then he said the worst pick-up line ever!"
"Common! What was it?" I pressed, impatient.
"He said, 'Nope, I'm yours!'" She giggled.
"Then what happened?" when I noticed her blush, I smiled in encouragement.
"Keep in mind... well..."
"Tell!"
"Maybe I'm not the kiss and tell type!"I threw a pillow at Baelin.
"Yes." she said simply, catching the pillow. "Now, I know that both you and Pres warned me, but..." she trailed off, staring into space.
With adoring eyes.
That girl was in love.
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If you want to contact me, leave a comment or e-mail Identical.the.story.or.twins@gmail.com
Thanks,
MoMo
"Nash, being with you makes me feel bad!" I joked with my boyfriend.
"Why's that?" he asked, kissing me. We were in the prairie that we liked to hike up to since we were little.
"Because you're the only 15 year old boy in this small-town, so Bae, Gabryela, and Loni don't have anyone."
"Not for long," I looked at Nash in wonder.
"Huh? What are you talking about?"
"Oh, well, a new family, the Keith's, have a 16 year old boy. I've heard he's bad news, though. Baelin, Allona, and Gaby are smart enough."
"I hope so." He could tell I was worried about my twin. He ruffled my long, blonde hair.
"Baelin will be just fine." He said, kissing my forehead. I nodded.
Baelin
"Yo, Bae-Bae!" my older brother called. Bae-Bae was my annoying baby nickname.
"What, Preston?"
"Guess what a little birdy told me?"
"What?"
"Guess!" I swear, he is just like a 3 year old sometimes.
"Fine, fine... your waffles caught on fire? Again?" I was master at random. He looked at me funny.
"No, moron! A new pair of people are coming here, so I got a job painting the 'Population: 23' sign to a 'Population: 25' sign!"
"Good for you. Know any about the family?"
"Yeah. They're going to live at the motel for a while until they build there house, so that's how Zara, Nash, and I know, and if Nash knows, then Ashton knows, I'm assuming. Anyway's the kid, Rory, is 16 and he sounds like a jerk. The whole bad-boy image. You and Gaby and Loni might be desperate, but be careful. I'm sure that Loni's dad won't let her. The dad of the family sounds pretty cool, though. He's Xavior Keith, and is the newest cop. Not that we need another one... now you'll have to excuse me," He checked his watch. "I'm late for picking up Destiny. Dinner date, all the way in Bright's City!" I didn't get why he loved that girl so much, but at the rate they were going, they were probably going to get married.
"Bae?" I heard my twin come into the room. "You heard about the new guy yet?"
"Oh yeah, Rory Keith. Pres just told me."
"That's his name?" I nodded, then told her everything I knew. Then we pondered every possibility and awaited his arrival.
Ashton
The day the Keith's arrived, Cass and I were sick. That was because I was stuck with baby-sitting duty when Cass had the flu.
Now, Baelin is welcoming the newcomers while I'm at home, puking my guts out.
Baelin
Rory Keith was like nothing else. Credit given to his latest blowout with his dad, Rory now had his own motel room, where he lived by himself. He started hitting on me as soon as I walked through the door to his room, unaccompanied by my dad.
"You Baelin? Or Ashton?" He asked. I liked that he put my name first, as nobody did that in this town.
"Baelin. You're Rory, right?"
"Nope. I'm yours." I grimaced at the horrible pick-up line.
"Well, I'm still Baelin." T could tell that we were going to be friends, despite my brother and sister's warnings.
"Too bad. Hey,"
"What?"
"Let's get out of here," he silenced my instantaneous protest by placing his pointer finger on my lips, "I've heard that there's some sort of meadow-"
"Prairie,"
"-Whatever, Prairie, that everyone hikes to. Common, Bae-b, let's go." I thought he was ballsy for making my name into 'Babe'. Despite my wanting to punch him in his flaunting face, I went.
As soon as we got there, he tried to kiss me.
"What the hell are you doing?" I all but yelled at him.
"You're awful purty." he joked, dropping into a hick accent. I had to blush. Ashton and I were forever having compliments handed to us about our looks. We were identical, both with tan skin, blonde hair down to our waists, green eyes, and we were tiny, petite. With a total height of 5'3", and a weight of 100 pounds.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
To see what the twins look like follow this link:
http://www.google.com/imgres?hl=en&gbv=2&biw=1280&bih=642&tbm=isch&tbnid=uB8gfvCHjwnm7M:&imgrefurl=http://warriorcatsrpg.com/other-role-playing/the-pretty-comittee-sign-up-only-226261.0.html&docid=9EY2ilvIzpNWlM&imgurl=http://data.whicdn.com/images/10173457/0b61c51900096c984ddafd35_large.%253F1306484078&w=500&h=648&ei=CZodT4CPK6mGiQLKpcCzCA&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=1036&vpy=55&dur=7597&hovh=256&hovw=197&tx=82&ty=80&sig=100351463246233001989&page=4&tbnh=152&tbnw=117&start=86&ndsp=31&ved=1t:429,r:30,s:86
Also! Pleeeeeeeeeease comment! I won't do another chapter without comments! Love's ya! Mo)
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Baelin continued
"Uhm, thanks?" My voice made it into a questions. "We should get back soon..." I hinted. He just smiled at me.
"Won't you give me just one little kiss?" I felt torn. I hadn't noticed how hot he was. But first I had a question.
"Rory?"
"Yes, Baelin?" I bit my lip.
"Are you really a... bad boy?" he laughed.
"Define bad boy!" then he leaned in. If I had had it my way, I wouldn't have kissed him back, wouldn't have let this city-boy be my first kiss. But, as usual, I didn't have my way.
And fate took it's course.
Ashton
"Common, Bae-Bae! Tell me EVERYTHING! Start at the beginning! What are our newcomers like?" Baelin had just come in from welcoming Rory. I could feel her tension. "Spill!" She bit her lip.
"So, when I walked into his room, he immeadiately started hitting on me. He first asked me, 'You Baelin? Or Ashton?'" I felt as if Baelin flip-flopped the names. Everyone always put my name first!
"He said your name first?" I asked.
"Yep. Then I said, 'Baelin. You Rory?', then he said the worst pick-up line ever!"
"Common! What was it?" I pressed, impatient.
"He said, 'Nope, I'm yours!'" She giggled.
"Then what happened?" when I noticed her blush, I smiled in encouragement.
"Keep in mind... well..."
"Tell!"
"Maybe I'm not the kiss and tell type!"I threw a pillow at Baelin.
"Yes." she said simply, catching the pillow. "Now, I know that both you and Pres warned me, but..." she trailed off, staring into space.
With adoring eyes.
That girl was in love.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
If you want to contact me, leave a comment or e-mail Identical.the.story.or.twins@gmail.com
Thanks,
MoMo



2 Comments
This is a pretty cool idea :) I like it.
Hmmm...
I have to say, this love story/ drama that I'm slightly intrigued by. The change between Ashton and Baelin was a little confusing at first, but I eventually got it. The writing style (thank God) is actually pretty good. Sounds interesting enough, at least enought to read through. Waiting for the next chapter, kutgw. :D