A Mermaid's tale (EcoDude's contest)
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As all fairytales begin, once upon a time...
Deep down below, there lived a king and a queen in the kingdom of Annenome. They always wanted a child of their own, and one day, they finally had one. A sweet, cute baby girl. Everyone in the kingdom was invited to see the newborn baby.
However, there was a kingdom on the opposite side of the ocean. A kingdom that was not pleased with the new heir to the Annenome throne. They payed the only dark witch in the ocean to kill this baby. Obviously, the dark witch agreed to this arrangement.
Luckily, the dark witch had a twin sister, who was the good enchantress. Now, the good enchantress heard all of this going on in her sister's head. The enchantress hurried to the Annenome palace and told the king and queen. The king and queen didn't know what to do, so they asked the good enchantress for her help.
So, the enchantress cast a magical spell on this baby girl. It has only been cast once before, with another mermaid, Ariel. The baby girl earned legs, feet, and toes. She even looked like a human. The enchantress quickly swam up to the shore. Then, she carries the small baby to the nearest house that she can find, rings the doorbell, and hurries back to the ocean.
The couple opened the door seeing the cutest child they have ever placed eyes on. And the way that the little baby opened her hands wide, instantly makes the couple take her in as their own human baby.
Little did they know who she actually was...
End of Chapter 1
Rate and Comment :)
Deep down below, there lived a king and a queen in the kingdom of Annenome. They always wanted a child of their own, and one day, they finally had one. A sweet, cute baby girl. Everyone in the kingdom was invited to see the newborn baby.
However, there was a kingdom on the opposite side of the ocean. A kingdom that was not pleased with the new heir to the Annenome throne. They payed the only dark witch in the ocean to kill this baby. Obviously, the dark witch agreed to this arrangement.
Luckily, the dark witch had a twin sister, who was the good enchantress. Now, the good enchantress heard all of this going on in her sister's head. The enchantress hurried to the Annenome palace and told the king and queen. The king and queen didn't know what to do, so they asked the good enchantress for her help.
So, the enchantress cast a magical spell on this baby girl. It has only been cast once before, with another mermaid, Ariel. The baby girl earned legs, feet, and toes. She even looked like a human. The enchantress quickly swam up to the shore. Then, she carries the small baby to the nearest house that she can find, rings the doorbell, and hurries back to the ocean.
The couple opened the door seeing the cutest child they have ever placed eyes on. And the way that the little baby opened her hands wide, instantly makes the couple take her in as their own human baby.
Little did they know who she actually was...
End of Chapter 1
Rate and Comment :)
20 Comments
Sounds great! I've got competition.... xD
Ssssuuuure.
Nice job! Keep writing :)
Haha. Good enough for the contest? :D
There is no "Good Enough" for this contest, but it would make is past the "Good enough" mark (if there was one) xD
Another great chapter! Please continue!
thankies!
really good but now i have to come up with a different title for my story for lalalunas contest
awww... I'm sorry. Let me think.
How about... Deep Down. Or Lost in the waves?
no its fine it just makes me have to be more creative with my title thanks for the suggestions though.
NEXTTTTTT!
Haha. Okay :) working on it.
Yayness!
Woohooo! Amazing chapter! I want to know what happens next!
Haha. I am actually going to be continuing another one of my stories now, because I am getting bored of writing this one. Make sure to read it! :D Jkjkjk. You don't have to if you don't want to.
Of course I will! Tomorrow, though, I have to sleep now...xD
love it
:D thanks so much!
Your story has been judged!
I know! I saw...
I didn't expect to win, but thanks :)