POEMS :D
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Chapter 1
Voices in my head
There are tons of voices
inside of my head
memors of faces
remind me of what you said
begging me to remember
the elusive filth and dread
the breath of the underworld
the alive and the dead.
Dragging me into your dreams
by my hand
with antipathy and no truths
im quizzical and dont understand
just a look from the sideview
giving away the old me
the shadows that are meerly invisible
and hard to see.
Dont judge books by its cover
you dont know my name
my story nor whative been through
to drive me insane.
like this is a never ending movie
maybe a hard to lose game
maybe easy to win or cheat
my finger points to you and you are the one to blame.
this is long
nevertheless
give me the strenght
to be brave through this mess
maybe it couldve been worst
but never go for the better when you are at the best
you may not learn your lesson til you know the rest.
there they are
mumbling, trumbling, tumbling
voices in my head
remembering, believing, decieving.
voices in my head, mazel tov, mazel tov
inside of my head
memors of faces
remind me of what you said
begging me to remember
the elusive filth and dread
the breath of the underworld
the alive and the dead.
Dragging me into your dreams
by my hand
with antipathy and no truths
im quizzical and dont understand
just a look from the sideview
giving away the old me
the shadows that are meerly invisible
and hard to see.
Dont judge books by its cover
you dont know my name
my story nor whative been through
to drive me insane.
like this is a never ending movie
maybe a hard to lose game
maybe easy to win or cheat
my finger points to you and you are the one to blame.
this is long
nevertheless
give me the strenght
to be brave through this mess
maybe it couldve been worst
but never go for the better when you are at the best
you may not learn your lesson til you know the rest.
there they are
mumbling, trumbling, tumbling
voices in my head
remembering, believing, decieving.
voices in my head, mazel tov, mazel tov



1 Comment
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