Story Reviews:
(Sorry for it being late! But I got someone to help me out!)
Thank you too Alexis117 (or VioxShadow) for doing this. She's going to be doing story reviews as well as an advice column.
I haven't been able to do much stories to review, since I can't be on. My dad doesn't know, he doesn't want me talking to strangers.... Parent stuff.
Again, thank you Alexis117!!!
Creator: Heather_Mellissa
Those in Highschool (A sequel to Those With Wings)
Rating: 25
Comment:
Still an amazing story. I'm so being under control by your story! Love how you (and I forgot the other person, but she gets credit too) explain the mood and setting. Very interesting and descriptive. Lots of chapters, enough to keep everyone busy for awhile.
Creator: Paranoia
Playmate
Rating: 25
Comment:
If you guys love torturous movies, you would all love this story. It could be like a movie, except better. (I always believe stories are better than movies) It's suspenseful and makes you question what will happen.
Creator: X_Jay
Hogwarts: the Return
Rating: 25
Comment:
Wow! Such an interesting story. I'm pretty much liking Albus point of view. I don't know, something about what he see is interesting. You those who loves Harry Potter, you can her's! It' creative and a little funny.
Creator: owlloverrr
pompeii--the tragic event! PLEASE READ!
Rating: 22
Comment:
Reading this is giving me deep thoughts of what will happen. So suspenseful. It's like examining closely to the story. Just to better understand it!
Creator: Heather_Mellissa
If I (for Ari's contest ^.^)
Rating: 25
Comment:
Do you want to become a ninja?! XD Well you should read Heather's story! It has........................NIIIIIINNNJAAAAAAASSSSSSSS (Ninjas!)!!!!! And if you love anime, it got that too! Remember! Names are in Japanese, pronounce them right because she wrote out how to pronounce them.
Creator: Parker_Browning
The snake doesn't love the lion (A hogwarts love story).
Rating: 25
Comment:
Not to offend anyone, but this is my favorite HP fan fic. It's creative and sets the mood perfectly. I'm still reading it! You guys will love her's if you gave it a chance. But to everyone else's fan fic, don't worry, I loves yours too!!!!!
Creator: Someone_Likes_You
Be The One Who Catches All Your Tears...(A Draco Malfoy Love Story)
Rating: 25
Comment:
I find it pretty harsh that Draco would use a dare that can easily break someone's heart. And emotionally and mentally. But I don't need to tell you guys what happen. Read on to find out how well this works out for Draco.
Creator: Stormy_Raven
Faye,Faye,Run Away
Rating: 23
Comment:
This is very royal like. I find it strange how the king can't keep up with technology. I'm surprise it doesn't bring him to his interest. But this is a group story, and everyone is doing a fantastic job at writing. Hope you guys love their story.
Those in Highschool (A sequel to Those With Wings)
Rating: 25
Comment:
Still an amazing story. I'm so being under control by your story! Love how you (and I forgot the other person, but she gets credit too) explain the mood and setting. Very interesting and descriptive. Lots of chapters, enough to keep everyone busy for awhile.
Creator: Paranoia
Playmate
Rating: 25
Comment:
If you guys love torturous movies, you would all love this story. It could be like a movie, except better. (I always believe stories are better than movies) It's suspenseful and makes you question what will happen.
Creator: X_Jay
Hogwarts: the Return
Rating: 25
Comment:
Wow! Such an interesting story. I'm pretty much liking Albus point of view. I don't know, something about what he see is interesting. You those who loves Harry Potter, you can her's! It' creative and a little funny.
Creator: owlloverrr
pompeii--the tragic event! PLEASE READ!
Rating: 22
Comment:
Reading this is giving me deep thoughts of what will happen. So suspenseful. It's like examining closely to the story. Just to better understand it!
Creator: Heather_Mellissa
If I (for Ari's contest ^.^)
Rating: 25
Comment:
Do you want to become a ninja?! XD Well you should read Heather's story! It has........................NIIIIIINNNJAAAAAAASSSSSSSS (Ninjas!)!!!!! And if you love anime, it got that too! Remember! Names are in Japanese, pronounce them right because she wrote out how to pronounce them.
Creator: Parker_Browning
The snake doesn't love the lion (A hogwarts love story).
Rating: 25
Comment:
Not to offend anyone, but this is my favorite HP fan fic. It's creative and sets the mood perfectly. I'm still reading it! You guys will love her's if you gave it a chance. But to everyone else's fan fic, don't worry, I loves yours too!!!!!
Creator: Someone_Likes_You
Be The One Who Catches All Your Tears...(A Draco Malfoy Love Story)
Rating: 25
Comment:
I find it pretty harsh that Draco would use a dare that can easily break someone's heart. And emotionally and mentally. But I don't need to tell you guys what happen. Read on to find out how well this works out for Draco.
Creator: Stormy_Raven
Faye,Faye,Run Away
Rating: 23
Comment:
This is very royal like. I find it strange how the king can't keep up with technology. I'm surprise it doesn't bring him to his interest. But this is a group story, and everyone is doing a fantastic job at writing. Hope you guys love their story.
4 Comments
aww, thankies, and it's nubilis, she's the other person, who saved those with wings from being a dead end
this is awesome!!!!! can u do one for my fanfic??????
awesome!!!!!!!!!!! could you do one for mine too?????
Aww! I got a good rating on one of my story's!! YAY!!