story idea (lemme know what u think please!)
This is a story I wanna write & I kind of wanna know if id be wasting my time or not
(This is just the description)
A young girl is abused by her bf and leaves his house one night after a fight. She runs into a small gang of immortals looking for fun. They use their superior strength to turn her but leeave her for dead without finishing the process. Shes then found by another group of immortals that realized she wouldn't survive without becoming one if them. With the process completed she soon begins to receive her powers while in the care of the her rescuers. But she must cope with the pain of what her bf did to her & decide whether to use yer new powers for revenge or to help people like her rescuers.
A young girl is abused by her bf and leaves his house one night after a fight. She runs into a small gang of immortals looking for fun. They use their superior strength to turn her but leeave her for dead without finishing the process. Shes then found by another group of immortals that realized she wouldn't survive without becoming one if them. With the process completed she soon begins to receive her powers while in the care of the her rescuers. But she must cope with the pain of what her bf did to her & decide whether to use yer new powers for revenge or to help people like her rescuers.
11 Comments
Sounds really great to me!! :D
I would read a story like that!! :)
this guy who stole my idea journal at school said the same thing. until i kicked him in the nuts xD no body takes my idea journal now lol.
I rly like it
& lol to ur response ^^^^^^^^^^
lol i love my writing and last time someone borrowed my story they brought it back looking like it was mauled by a bear so i don't let anybody touch my stuff ha
Good but I would take out the deaed part I still lug but the idea of death creepsme out
she just comes close to dying but then she becomes an immortal.
Sounds interesting, I would read it.
OHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT TO READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
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I'd read that. sounds cool :D
i love it write more write more write more write more