Original Poem.
She hates her life,
So she picks up the knife.
You see her on the outside,
So why won't you look in?
She's to strong for her own good,
All she knows is that she's not supposed to breathe,
She's picking up the knife,
All she wants is someone on the outside to look in.
No one cares for her,
She is shedding her final tear,
The knife is finally,
taking away her life.
Tears tears tears,
She just can't stand peoples jeers.
Her name is Grace,
Her name is a lie.
She is not graceful,
Nor a gift from God,
She is anything but,
She is bullied,
hated for who she is.
Now she's tumbling down.
She's falling down,
down, down.
Drowning in a sea of sadness,
emotion a heavy cloud.
So she picks up the knife.
You see her on the outside,
So why won't you look in?
She's to strong for her own good,
All she knows is that she's not supposed to breathe,
She's picking up the knife,
All she wants is someone on the outside to look in.
No one cares for her,
She is shedding her final tear,
The knife is finally,
taking away her life.
Tears tears tears,
She just can't stand peoples jeers.
Her name is Grace,
Her name is a lie.
She is not graceful,
Nor a gift from God,
She is anything but,
She is bullied,
hated for who she is.
Now she's tumbling down.
She's falling down,
down, down.
Drowning in a sea of sadness,
emotion a heavy cloud.
25 Comments
Awww Sad, but beautifully written
Dark. But great!
I can totally relate to this poem T_T It's sad, yes... but so true for so many lives.
Aww! So sad, but BRAVO!
So sad but well written!!! This is amazing!!
So beautifully sad.
wow, it was great. it means a lot to many. like me, #_# i know. :(
i liked it though!! :)
Very sad, but it's wonderfully written.
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Scary... beautiful.... but scary...!!
Did you write this for someone you know?
It's about me...