Prequel to Lupins Daughter
Well the title pretty much says it all its a prequel to my other story Lupins daughter. What I love about prequels is it doesn't matter if you read the prequel or the original either way the story makes sense (in this case anyway). Seriously though if you haven't read Lupins Daughter I would greatly appreciate it if you did read it. Any and all comments are accepted I want to know how good or bad I am so don't be afraid to be mean to me.
“What do you think about Lance Alders?” “Pretentious snob and he uses way too much hair gel.” “There is no such thing as too much hair gel.” Gil said running his hands through his perfect blonde hair. “Leslie Dirnell?” I suggested “Too many freckles.” Gil said with a grimace. “Remus Lupin?” He said. I thought about it for a second. Remus hung out with the Marauder’s I hated them. James was a jerk, Sirius was egotistical, and Peter was just weak. Remus was different he wasn’t like the others. He was smart, he didn’t pick on anyone, and he wasn’t loud and obnoxious. “He’s too young for me.” I said finally “Only by a year, maybe not even that much we could find out his birthday maybe it’s only a few months. “He’s too young Gilly.” “But he’s the only guy you ever actually thought about.” Gil argued. It was this stupid game me and Gil played I would name a girl he would say what was wrong with her, and then he would name a guy and I would do the same. It started as a way to find out who we could date at this school but we always found reasons why we couldn’t date the person named.
As luck would have it the Marauders walked by. James and Sirius were in the front bragging about whatever they had just done, Peter was behind them jumping around them trying to get noticed, and Remus was in the back reading a book and ignoring the others. “There’s your boyfriend.” Gil whispered nudging me. “Shut up.” I said hitting him hard over the head. I saw Sirius turn and smile at me. “Did I hear him right? You want me to be your boyfriend.” He said smiling broadly. “Gilly wasn’t talking about you.” I said coldly. “Gilly?” James said wrinkling his nose. “Oh isn’t that cute Gilderoy’s got his own little nickname.” He crooned to Peter. I noticed Remus lower his book slightly but he still seemed immensely interested in whatever he was reading. “If ‘’Gilly’’ wasn’t talking about me who was he talking about?” Sirius demanded. Let’s see tell the truth or lie? I pick lie. “That guy.” I said pointing blindly behind them at a random guy. Sirius turned to investigate and I noticed Remus had even stolen a glance himself. I took the opportunity to see who I had pointed at. Oh of all the bad luck. I was pointing at Lance Alders. “Want me to tell him how you feel?” Sirius challenged me he knew I was lying. “No I can do it myself.” I said standing and walking over to him.
“Hi Lance.” I said trying not to grimace at the fact his hair was dripping. “Hey babe.” He said gazing up at me. “What’s the time?” I asked quickly. “Time for me to ask you out.” He said trying to seem smooth. How long had I been over here? Long enough. “Thanks anyway.” I walked back over to the awaiting group. James was still making fun of Gil with Peter, Gil was staring at me with his mouth wide open, Sirius looked slightly crest fallen, and Remus was again buried in his book. “He asked me out.” I said proudly. “We’ll see.” Sirius said leading his gang of followers away.
“What happened to “too much hair gel”?” Gil asked. “He does, I didn’t tell him I liked him I asked for the time, and he did ask me out (sort of) but I turned him down.” “You know Remus was staring at you the whole time he looked worried that you might get a date with Lance.” Gil said “Shut up.” I said but on the inside I was ecstatic.
“Where’s your boyfriend?” I jumped about a mile in the air. “Sirius Black get away from me this instant!” I shouted. “Just wanted to know where Lance was.” He said sitting next to me and picking a piece of bacon of my plate. “For your information our date was last night and it didn’t go well.” I said pulling the bacon away right before he took a bite. “OW! Hey do bade me bide my tug.” Sirius said holding his tongue “That wouldn’t have happened if you hadn’t tried to steal my food.” I said coldly. “Since things didn’t work with Lance maybe you might want to go out with me?” Sirius said. I noticed Sirius wasn’t talking funny anymore; he must have been using it to get sympathy then dropped the act when he realized it wasn’t working. “Get lost.” I said rolling my eyes. “Come on babe you know you want to.” “How about this, I’ll go out with you if you can tell me my name.” I watched as Sirius’ eyes widened in shock. “Clara?” he guessed. “Bye Sirius.”
Sirius POV
How had I been drooling over this girl for a week without even knowing her name? I walked back to the Gryffindor table where James and Peter waited anxiously. Remus was busy correcting James homework from last night. “How did it go?” James asked anxiously. “Do you guys know her name?” I asked. James and Peter looked away obviously confused as to how we could all overlook something this big. “I knew that would come back to bite you in the butt.” Remus said. “Oh really so what’s her name then Mr. Smarty pants?” I demanded. “No idea, but at least I have the common sense to find out a girl’s name before I ask her out.” “Then why didn’t you warn me?” “I thought it would be funnier this way.” “No way guys Remus Lupin has a sense of humor.” James teased. Remus held up his homework. “I don’t have to help you with this.” He said “Sorry, keep going.” “I’m done anyway I have prefect duties.” Remus said handing James back his homework and strolling out of the hall.
Later that day we saw what’s-her-face again. She was walking down the hall with an arm load of books. Then for no reason she turned suddenly and all the books fell out of her hands and people started running all over them. “We should help her.” Remus said “Mm mm” James said. “Don’t all get up at once.” Remus said dodging the crowd to help her. “Pad foot you are so thick.” James said. “What are you talking about?” “Are you even watching Moony? He’s totally hitting it off with your chick. That could have been you.” I noticed the smile what’s-her-face was giving Remus. James was right that could have been me. “You’re going to love me.” Remus said resuming his position against the wall with the rest of us. “Why because you stole my woman?” I said angrily. “First off she’s not your woman and second I didn’t steal anyone.” Remus said. “Forget it I don’t care what you have to say. “I know what her name is, but since you don’t care I’ll just keep it to myself.”
Shana POV
“Gil you jerk! Did you see what you made me do?” I said rushing over to him cradling my books. “Sorry but at least your boyfriend was able to help.” He said slyly whilst giving me one of his award winning smiles. “Stop calling him that we barely know each other.” “What’s with all the books?” he asked. “Professor McGonagall asked me to take these back to the library for her.” “I’ll walk with you.” “Since you’re walking with me you might as well help me carry these.” I said trying to make him help. He reluctantly took one book that’s right just one.
“Do you want to go to the Quidditch game with me?” Gil asked as he poked his head inside my room. I don’t know how he gets past that slide. “Nah Ravenclaw isn’t even playing today.” “But Gryffindor is.” “So….” “Remus will be there.” “Will you stop bringing him up.” “Not until you admit you’re in love with him.” “If I go to the game will you at least shut up for the rest of the day?” “Yes!” I slid down the stairs then followed Gil to the Quidditch field where he insisted we sit as far back as we could. A few minutes later I realized it was because we were right behind Remus. “Gil can we please sit somewhere else?” I whispered as quietly as I could. “Sorry Shana I see a girl who wants to be my next girlfriend.” He said abandoning me to go talk up a Blonde Hufflepuff. “Look at Sirius showing off he’s such a jerk.” said a red headed girl in front of me. “You can say that again.” The girl turned around along with Remus and Peter, I didn’t even notice Peter was there. “Sorry, I shouldn’t have been listening its none of my business.” I apologized. “No its fine at least someone agrees with me.” The red headed girl said smiling. “Oh hello Shana.” Remus said calmly. “So then you two have met?” the red head asked. “Great you can sit with us!” she said without even waiting for an answer then she grabbed my arm and pulling me forward so that I was sitting between her and Remus. “So you’ve met Remus, I’m Lily, and that’s Peter.” She said pointing to the pathetic little boy.
Just then James flew by the stands cradling the quaffle “LILY!” he yelled as he passed. I noticed her face turn red but not from embarrassment from anger. “I take it you’re not too fond of James.” I said “I can’t stand that jerk, and he’s always picking on one of my best friends Severus. He couldn’t come to the game today he got detention but he won’t tell me why.” She said looking around nervously. “I think someone’s trying to get your attention.” Remus said tapping my shoulder and then pointing onto the field. Sirius was waving at me with his beaters bat. Just then a buldger hit him across the face. “Oh my God! Is he all right.” I asked watching in horror as he fell off his broom as blood gushed out of his mouth. “He’s been through worse,” Remus admitted “but that still doesn’t look good.”
After the game I walked with Remus, Peter, and Lily down to the Hospital wing. James was sitting by Sirius’ bed along with the rest of the team. “Lily!” he said standing. “I’m only here to show support for Remus and Peter, Sirius was being an idiot and it’s his own fault he got hurt.” She said turning her head. James gave her a hopeful look before noticing me. “Come on he’ll be glad to see you.” James said reaching out and grabbing my arm. He pushed past his team mates and led me to the edge of Sirius’ bed. I gasped when I saw Sirius.
As luck would have it the Marauders walked by. James and Sirius were in the front bragging about whatever they had just done, Peter was behind them jumping around them trying to get noticed, and Remus was in the back reading a book and ignoring the others. “There’s your boyfriend.” Gil whispered nudging me. “Shut up.” I said hitting him hard over the head. I saw Sirius turn and smile at me. “Did I hear him right? You want me to be your boyfriend.” He said smiling broadly. “Gilly wasn’t talking about you.” I said coldly. “Gilly?” James said wrinkling his nose. “Oh isn’t that cute Gilderoy’s got his own little nickname.” He crooned to Peter. I noticed Remus lower his book slightly but he still seemed immensely interested in whatever he was reading. “If ‘’Gilly’’ wasn’t talking about me who was he talking about?” Sirius demanded. Let’s see tell the truth or lie? I pick lie. “That guy.” I said pointing blindly behind them at a random guy. Sirius turned to investigate and I noticed Remus had even stolen a glance himself. I took the opportunity to see who I had pointed at. Oh of all the bad luck. I was pointing at Lance Alders. “Want me to tell him how you feel?” Sirius challenged me he knew I was lying. “No I can do it myself.” I said standing and walking over to him.
“Hi Lance.” I said trying not to grimace at the fact his hair was dripping. “Hey babe.” He said gazing up at me. “What’s the time?” I asked quickly. “Time for me to ask you out.” He said trying to seem smooth. How long had I been over here? Long enough. “Thanks anyway.” I walked back over to the awaiting group. James was still making fun of Gil with Peter, Gil was staring at me with his mouth wide open, Sirius looked slightly crest fallen, and Remus was again buried in his book. “He asked me out.” I said proudly. “We’ll see.” Sirius said leading his gang of followers away.
“What happened to “too much hair gel”?” Gil asked. “He does, I didn’t tell him I liked him I asked for the time, and he did ask me out (sort of) but I turned him down.” “You know Remus was staring at you the whole time he looked worried that you might get a date with Lance.” Gil said “Shut up.” I said but on the inside I was ecstatic.
“Where’s your boyfriend?” I jumped about a mile in the air. “Sirius Black get away from me this instant!” I shouted. “Just wanted to know where Lance was.” He said sitting next to me and picking a piece of bacon of my plate. “For your information our date was last night and it didn’t go well.” I said pulling the bacon away right before he took a bite. “OW! Hey do bade me bide my tug.” Sirius said holding his tongue “That wouldn’t have happened if you hadn’t tried to steal my food.” I said coldly. “Since things didn’t work with Lance maybe you might want to go out with me?” Sirius said. I noticed Sirius wasn’t talking funny anymore; he must have been using it to get sympathy then dropped the act when he realized it wasn’t working. “Get lost.” I said rolling my eyes. “Come on babe you know you want to.” “How about this, I’ll go out with you if you can tell me my name.” I watched as Sirius’ eyes widened in shock. “Clara?” he guessed. “Bye Sirius.”
Sirius POV
How had I been drooling over this girl for a week without even knowing her name? I walked back to the Gryffindor table where James and Peter waited anxiously. Remus was busy correcting James homework from last night. “How did it go?” James asked anxiously. “Do you guys know her name?” I asked. James and Peter looked away obviously confused as to how we could all overlook something this big. “I knew that would come back to bite you in the butt.” Remus said. “Oh really so what’s her name then Mr. Smarty pants?” I demanded. “No idea, but at least I have the common sense to find out a girl’s name before I ask her out.” “Then why didn’t you warn me?” “I thought it would be funnier this way.” “No way guys Remus Lupin has a sense of humor.” James teased. Remus held up his homework. “I don’t have to help you with this.” He said “Sorry, keep going.” “I’m done anyway I have prefect duties.” Remus said handing James back his homework and strolling out of the hall.
Later that day we saw what’s-her-face again. She was walking down the hall with an arm load of books. Then for no reason she turned suddenly and all the books fell out of her hands and people started running all over them. “We should help her.” Remus said “Mm mm” James said. “Don’t all get up at once.” Remus said dodging the crowd to help her. “Pad foot you are so thick.” James said. “What are you talking about?” “Are you even watching Moony? He’s totally hitting it off with your chick. That could have been you.” I noticed the smile what’s-her-face was giving Remus. James was right that could have been me. “You’re going to love me.” Remus said resuming his position against the wall with the rest of us. “Why because you stole my woman?” I said angrily. “First off she’s not your woman and second I didn’t steal anyone.” Remus said. “Forget it I don’t care what you have to say. “I know what her name is, but since you don’t care I’ll just keep it to myself.”
Shana POV
“Gil you jerk! Did you see what you made me do?” I said rushing over to him cradling my books. “Sorry but at least your boyfriend was able to help.” He said slyly whilst giving me one of his award winning smiles. “Stop calling him that we barely know each other.” “What’s with all the books?” he asked. “Professor McGonagall asked me to take these back to the library for her.” “I’ll walk with you.” “Since you’re walking with me you might as well help me carry these.” I said trying to make him help. He reluctantly took one book that’s right just one.
“Do you want to go to the Quidditch game with me?” Gil asked as he poked his head inside my room. I don’t know how he gets past that slide. “Nah Ravenclaw isn’t even playing today.” “But Gryffindor is.” “So….” “Remus will be there.” “Will you stop bringing him up.” “Not until you admit you’re in love with him.” “If I go to the game will you at least shut up for the rest of the day?” “Yes!” I slid down the stairs then followed Gil to the Quidditch field where he insisted we sit as far back as we could. A few minutes later I realized it was because we were right behind Remus. “Gil can we please sit somewhere else?” I whispered as quietly as I could. “Sorry Shana I see a girl who wants to be my next girlfriend.” He said abandoning me to go talk up a Blonde Hufflepuff. “Look at Sirius showing off he’s such a jerk.” said a red headed girl in front of me. “You can say that again.” The girl turned around along with Remus and Peter, I didn’t even notice Peter was there. “Sorry, I shouldn’t have been listening its none of my business.” I apologized. “No its fine at least someone agrees with me.” The red headed girl said smiling. “Oh hello Shana.” Remus said calmly. “So then you two have met?” the red head asked. “Great you can sit with us!” she said without even waiting for an answer then she grabbed my arm and pulling me forward so that I was sitting between her and Remus. “So you’ve met Remus, I’m Lily, and that’s Peter.” She said pointing to the pathetic little boy.
Just then James flew by the stands cradling the quaffle “LILY!” he yelled as he passed. I noticed her face turn red but not from embarrassment from anger. “I take it you’re not too fond of James.” I said “I can’t stand that jerk, and he’s always picking on one of my best friends Severus. He couldn’t come to the game today he got detention but he won’t tell me why.” She said looking around nervously. “I think someone’s trying to get your attention.” Remus said tapping my shoulder and then pointing onto the field. Sirius was waving at me with his beaters bat. Just then a buldger hit him across the face. “Oh my God! Is he all right.” I asked watching in horror as he fell off his broom as blood gushed out of his mouth. “He’s been through worse,” Remus admitted “but that still doesn’t look good.”
After the game I walked with Remus, Peter, and Lily down to the Hospital wing. James was sitting by Sirius’ bed along with the rest of the team. “Lily!” he said standing. “I’m only here to show support for Remus and Peter, Sirius was being an idiot and it’s his own fault he got hurt.” She said turning her head. James gave her a hopeful look before noticing me. “Come on he’ll be glad to see you.” James said reaching out and grabbing my arm. He pushed past his team mates and led me to the edge of Sirius’ bed. I gasped when I saw Sirius.
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really good tell me when there's more.