Same, but different (a Fma fan-fic)
This is my first fan-fic, so don't get mad at me
~heather
Eclair's POV
"Now, there's two ways you can do this, the hard way, or the hard way" I say, as the man looks at me with a devilish grin.
"Not if I destroy your arm first!" He yells, clapping his hands together, for his alchemy circles are on his gloves, then jumps over to me, and before I can jump back, he has his hands on my left arm, destroying my coat, exposeing my left arm, as I jump into a backflip, kicking him at the bottem of the chin, and landing on my feet.
"How'd you're arm not explode?" He asked, getting his ballance again.
"Because my left arm's not made out of flesh, dumbo. I'm not called the 'half-metal alchemist for nothin'" I clap my hands together, running into a cartwheel, makeing a cage come up from the ground around the man, as I land on top of it.
I layed down on my stomach, and hung my head over to the side of the cage. The man put his hands together, and then on the cage, as it exploded, and flung me off, into a wall. I got up, and whiped the blood from my forehead, and flung my left arm out to the side, showing I was ready, as he came at me, clapping his hands, diving for my legs, which I jumped over him, as he slid head-first into the wall, and his head gushed out blood.
I used that as an advantage, and took off his gloves. The man was powerless without his alchemy. He then ripped off mine, so I clapped my hands, and used the ground to make handcuffs.
"How'd ya do that without a-"
"I don't need a transmutation circle. Duh," I say, putting his gloves on the ground, then clapped my hands again, and they ground destroyed them.
I am Eclair Elanie.
The half-metal alchemist.
"Now, there's two ways you can do this, the hard way, or the hard way" I say, as the man looks at me with a devilish grin.
"Not if I destroy your arm first!" He yells, clapping his hands together, for his alchemy circles are on his gloves, then jumps over to me, and before I can jump back, he has his hands on my left arm, destroying my coat, exposeing my left arm, as I jump into a backflip, kicking him at the bottem of the chin, and landing on my feet.
"How'd you're arm not explode?" He asked, getting his ballance again.
"Because my left arm's not made out of flesh, dumbo. I'm not called the 'half-metal alchemist for nothin'" I clap my hands together, running into a cartwheel, makeing a cage come up from the ground around the man, as I land on top of it.
I layed down on my stomach, and hung my head over to the side of the cage. The man put his hands together, and then on the cage, as it exploded, and flung me off, into a wall. I got up, and whiped the blood from my forehead, and flung my left arm out to the side, showing I was ready, as he came at me, clapping his hands, diving for my legs, which I jumped over him, as he slid head-first into the wall, and his head gushed out blood.
I used that as an advantage, and took off his gloves. The man was powerless without his alchemy. He then ripped off mine, so I clapped my hands, and used the ground to make handcuffs.
"How'd ya do that without a-"
"I don't need a transmutation circle. Duh," I say, putting his gloves on the ground, then clapped my hands again, and they ground destroyed them.
I am Eclair Elanie.
The half-metal alchemist.
140 Comments
OMG! CAN'T WAIT TILL NEXT CHAPTER!
hehe yesh!
^.^
Ohmagosh! XD this is so cool! Cant wait till the next chap! (Was that who i think it was, or someone else?)
who are you thinking.....
Colonel Mustang. :D
hehe, no, but like him (i still hate him....he's just annoying, and swings around little cute puppies!!!!)
Oh, ok. (If my friend heard you say that, she'd flip. She loves him. :D He's ok. Im not a fangirl of him or anything. XD)
yeah, i don't like him, but everyone else is fine
Great so far can't wait for more!
I will work on more :)
Thankies ^.^
Pleaseee write chapter 3!! :))
Chapter 3 Plz!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!! CHAPTER THREE NOW!!!!!
Awesome!
Wow you were working hard on chappies weren't you? Wanted Chapter 3 and got 3, 4 and 5 XD More Plz!!!
I will!!! I just somehow have to work your character in (because yours, and one other are the only ligit characters that I got...the rest....they don't even know what alchemy is...)
-.- wow...I weep for them lol. If you have to change the love interest it's fine with me. I prefer...you'll probably hate me lol. cough cough Mustang or Havoc. IF...you're having a hard time throwing Greeling into the mix. But Greeling is my #1 choice. Oh and if you need help with ideas you can always msg me=)
no, i just have to bring them in....some how...it's sad, cuz you're the only one who actually picked a character....besides me -_-
people, how could you not love this anime!!!
Ikr?!! This anime/manga is one of the best there is!!! Oh and just so you know...I'm actually an Ed fangirl but you had dibs on him first so I picked Greeling.
yes. and if anyone picks envy....I would just laugh, and ask, 'are you sure he's not a girl???'