Fantasy (A poem-like thing I came up with at school)
Just a poem-thing I came up with while at school. It just kind of popped into my head and I just kept writing. I'd love to hear what you think.
Why does fantasy have to be so much better than reality?
What is so fascinating about
Witches and Wizards,
Dwarves and Elves,
Special Islands,
and Magic Spells?
Why is it do hard to believe?
Yet, when you do you're called a freak.
A Loser.
Why is there so much comfort in a place that doesn't exist?
Why is there no comfort in a place that does?
Is it just me
Or does a place that kills off children sound more interesting
Than a place where we are free?
We have everything we could ever want
Except what doesn't exist.
They all say it is unhealthy
To want it so bad
But since when is imagination bad?
I want a place where we are loved for what we love.
Where no one will criticize what makes us happy.
But there is no such place.
Only is fantasy
But that is not reality.
So what did you think? I would love to know if you liked it or if it completely sucked. It won't hurt my feelings. I like criticism.
What is so fascinating about
Witches and Wizards,
Dwarves and Elves,
Special Islands,
and Magic Spells?
Why is it do hard to believe?
Yet, when you do you're called a freak.
A Loser.
Why is there so much comfort in a place that doesn't exist?
Why is there no comfort in a place that does?
Is it just me
Or does a place that kills off children sound more interesting
Than a place where we are free?
We have everything we could ever want
Except what doesn't exist.
They all say it is unhealthy
To want it so bad
But since when is imagination bad?
I want a place where we are loved for what we love.
Where no one will criticize what makes us happy.
But there is no such place.
Only is fantasy
But that is not reality.
So what did you think? I would love to know if you liked it or if it completely sucked. It won't hurt my feelings. I like criticism.
4 Comments
0.o well, it was good!
It nice really nice i wanna go to hogwarts so......
Me too! As you can tell, I probably take fantasy a little to seriously, but hey, I like it! :)
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