Salvation: The story of Jezzica Dawn Tyler

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So this is the story of Jezzica Dawn Tyler. I'm not really sure what inspired it but I want it to get somewhere, maybe get published someday. So if you could read it and maybe give me some feedback that would be great. Feel free to private message me if you'd like. This isn't all I have written but I figured it was a good stopping point and if I get enough feedback I'll post more.

Chapter 1

Chapter 1

by: JezzyAtYo
She walked down the street quickly. The fact that she hadn't seen him in two weeks only added to her speed. She was freezing in only a thin T-shirt and black shredded skinny jeans but she had left her house early yesterday and it had been warmer then. She tried not to think about how that wouldn't be a problem for a normal teenager. A teenager who wasn't constantly being screamed at when she was home. Not a normal I-don't-have-any-freedom-you-don't-know-what-its-like-to-be-a-teenager fight, but a real knock down drag out match. SHe pulled herself out of her thoughts in time to narrowly avoid running into the gate in front of Max's house that held in his prize Siberian Husky. "Boa" she whispered trying to see if the dog was outside. There was no barking response and no pawprints in the snow. She smiled and turned the handle before pushing on the gate... which didn't move. She gasped slightly and then sighed. She kicked at the ice holding the gate shut but made no progress. Sighing she carefully hooked the to of her ugg in a gap in the fence and pulled herself over. She landed rather badly and cussed as she dusted snow off of her butt. She made her way to the porch, laughing softly to herself about how half of the walkway was shoveled and the other half was covered in footprints. She quickly hopped the three steps to the porch and rang the doorbell. Jezzicka stared out into the street and waited for someone to come to the door. She could hear Boa barking throught the door. She ran her hand through her chin length blonde hair and rang the doorbell again.
"Hold on, ya know Boa? You're pretty good at blocking doors. Maybe they should give you an award." Max opened the door and his jaw almost hit the frozen concrete. Jezzicka laughed at the expression and ran her hand through her hair again. "Jezzy what happened to your hair? I mean it still looks great but what happened to it?" Max asked as he reached out a hand to touch her hair.
"I cut it and bleached it." she replied smiling her signature crooked smile. He just stroked her hair, speechless. After a few seconds she laughed. "Are you going to let me in Mr. Maximillion?" she questioned, using a fake british accent. It seemed to snap him out of the strange fog he was in.
"Of course, Miss Jezzicka Dawn Tyler." he smirked and bowed slightly, opening the door so she could slip past him without letting to much cold air in.
"Don't call me bye my whole name." she walked past him into the warm house trying to hide her shiver. He laughed and shut the door before following her into the living room.

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Sky writing that says "Lurv Yew!", NJ, US

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