Say You'll Stay (A Starkidish Story)
I was watching "The Time Traveller's Wife" the other day and got the idea for this story. Kind of weird, but oh well. I'll see how it goes.
Comment, rate, enjoy.
Chapter 1
Chapter 1
Four years ago, I met a man called Brian Rosenthal. We started hanging out, and in short time, we began dating. But Brian had a strange condition.
It started not long after my 23rd birthday.
We had been at a party the previous night with some of Brian's old uni friends, and after a night filled with fun, alcohol and loud music, Brian and I returned to our flat and promptly fell asleep.
In the morning he was gone.
But the strange thing was, he had left all his possessions in the flat.
I checked through the wardrobe we shared: the only clothes missing were the ones Brian had fallen asleep in.
At first I suspected he was having an affair, but that didn't explain why none of his clothes were gone.
His phone was still in the apartment too.
I was starting to panic.
I logged onto my computer, tapping my fingers on the desk in frustration.
I clicked Facebook.
My profile flashed up and I clicked on my boyfriend's profile.
Brian Rosenthal.
His cover photo depicted us, hand in hand, in Central Park.
Nothing had changed.
I leant back in my chair, breathing heavily.
Where was he?
I went back to bed, trying not to notice Brian's half of the bed, which was stone cold.
Some hours later, my phone woke me.
I picked it up.
"One new message: Joey Richter." Joey was one of Brian's uni friends.
I opened the message.
"Where are you guys?" And then I remembered Brian and I were supposed to be having coffee with him.
So Brian wasn't with Joey either. This was starting to scare me.
Trying not to hyperventilate, I typed out a reply to Joey.
"Can you come over? Please? It's urgent."
A moment later, I got the reply.
"OK... See you soon."
While waiting for Joey, I paced briskly up and down the flat, trying to stop my hands shaking.
When the doorbell rang, I sprinted downstairs.
Joey stood on the doorstep. He was tall, with dark hair and a crooked jaw.
He smiled at me when I opened the door, a slightly confused smile.
"Hey Charlotte."
I looked up at him.
"Brian's gone."
Yeah first chapter done! I hope you guys like my random craziness.
Shall I carry on with this? Comment, rate, smile!
~Charlotte
It started not long after my 23rd birthday.
We had been at a party the previous night with some of Brian's old uni friends, and after a night filled with fun, alcohol and loud music, Brian and I returned to our flat and promptly fell asleep.
In the morning he was gone.
But the strange thing was, he had left all his possessions in the flat.
I checked through the wardrobe we shared: the only clothes missing were the ones Brian had fallen asleep in.
At first I suspected he was having an affair, but that didn't explain why none of his clothes were gone.
His phone was still in the apartment too.
I was starting to panic.
I logged onto my computer, tapping my fingers on the desk in frustration.
I clicked Facebook.
My profile flashed up and I clicked on my boyfriend's profile.
Brian Rosenthal.
His cover photo depicted us, hand in hand, in Central Park.
Nothing had changed.
I leant back in my chair, breathing heavily.
Where was he?
I went back to bed, trying not to notice Brian's half of the bed, which was stone cold.
Some hours later, my phone woke me.
I picked it up.
"One new message: Joey Richter." Joey was one of Brian's uni friends.
I opened the message.
"Where are you guys?" And then I remembered Brian and I were supposed to be having coffee with him.
So Brian wasn't with Joey either. This was starting to scare me.
Trying not to hyperventilate, I typed out a reply to Joey.
"Can you come over? Please? It's urgent."
A moment later, I got the reply.
"OK... See you soon."
While waiting for Joey, I paced briskly up and down the flat, trying to stop my hands shaking.
When the doorbell rang, I sprinted downstairs.
Joey stood on the doorstep. He was tall, with dark hair and a crooked jaw.
He smiled at me when I opened the door, a slightly confused smile.
"Hey Charlotte."
I looked up at him.
"Brian's gone."
Yeah first chapter done! I hope you guys like my random craziness.
Shall I carry on with this? Comment, rate, smile!
~Charlotte



16 Comments
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Glad you like it! :D will try my best, but I'm back at school again so could be slower to update....
I understand, me too! I hate school getting in the way of Twitter and Tumblr and Quibblo!
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