Overlooked (A Love Story)
This about a 12-year-old girl named Natalia who comes from Brazil and moved to the USA when she was 5. Outfits: First day of Middle School: http://www.polyvore.com/natalia_first_day_school/set?id=43053947 . The rest you'll find in the story.
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Natalia's POV: Natalia Alencar gasped in surprise as she entered the middle school she would spend 3 years in. "Or was it 2?" she thought, she still, after 7 years, had trouble understanding the USA. She shook her head to shake out the confusing country and entered, almost getting crushed by a crowd of giggling girls. "Excuse me, please" she said in her funny accent, at least to the people in America it was funny.
one girl laughed at her voice. "Ha! Where'd you come from, newbie?" Natalia stared at her in disbelief, Brazil was better than America by far. Why should she be making fun of me? Natalia thought, "I'm from Brazil, and I'm not new, I'm the same age as you." People stared, no one had ever stood up to Amanda Wield before. "How do you know that? You don't even know my age." Natalia laughed, "It's easy, you're 12-years-old, your body shape, height , and clothes show that" Amanda stared at Natalia in disbelief, "Nicely done newby, I'm Amanda, you must be... hmm.... Natalie?" 'Of course, the American didn't say my real name' Natalia thought, "No," she said angrily, "my name is Natalia." Amanda backed down, "Gosh, don't get so angry, newbie." Natalia's fists closed, "DON'T CALL ME NEWBIE!!!!" She stormed down the hallway, Amanda and her "crew" gaping at her sudden outburst.
As Natalia opened her locker, posters burst out, 'What the.... I wonder who put these in here...' she thought, reading the posters.
Jordan's POV: When Natalia had walked through the doors and stood up to Amanda, Jordan had been very surprised. He was the most popular boy in school and every girl had a crush on him, but when he had said 'hi' to Natalia, she had just looked at him and scowled. Now he was hoping she was in his class. He walked into Mr. Hod's classroom and was happy to see that Natalia was sitting in the back of the room. He hurried towards the seat next to him but Jacob reached it first. "Sorry, Jordan, but I'm sitting next to this lovely lady, now go away Italian loser" Natalia suddenly got up and walked to a different seat, next to another person, so none of them could sit next to her. But to Jordan's surprise and pleasure, the girl sitting next to her got up with disgust and sat by Jacob. He sat down next to her, "Hi, Natalia, I'm Jordan," she moaned, "I really thought I'd like this school, but with the boys all running after me and the girls running AWAY from me, I won't even survive" Jordan looked at her, understanding how she felt, when he had been transferred from Italy to America in the 4th grade, all the girls chased him and the boys ran away from him, "I know how you feel. I was in the same situation when I moved from Italy to America." Her face suddenly turned to sad to angry, "You're from Italy! UGH!" She walked towards Amanda. Jordan looked at her, full of confusion. "Hey, what's wrong with Italians?" She looked at me, glaring, "Come to the park today, I'll tell you there." He nodded, then went to sit down.
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one girl laughed at her voice. "Ha! Where'd you come from, newbie?" Natalia stared at her in disbelief, Brazil was better than America by far. Why should she be making fun of me? Natalia thought, "I'm from Brazil, and I'm not new, I'm the same age as you." People stared, no one had ever stood up to Amanda Wield before. "How do you know that? You don't even know my age." Natalia laughed, "It's easy, you're 12-years-old, your body shape, height , and clothes show that" Amanda stared at Natalia in disbelief, "Nicely done newby, I'm Amanda, you must be... hmm.... Natalie?" 'Of course, the American didn't say my real name' Natalia thought, "No," she said angrily, "my name is Natalia." Amanda backed down, "Gosh, don't get so angry, newbie." Natalia's fists closed, "DON'T CALL ME NEWBIE!!!!" She stormed down the hallway, Amanda and her "crew" gaping at her sudden outburst.
As Natalia opened her locker, posters burst out, 'What the.... I wonder who put these in here...' she thought, reading the posters.
Jordan's POV: When Natalia had walked through the doors and stood up to Amanda, Jordan had been very surprised. He was the most popular boy in school and every girl had a crush on him, but when he had said 'hi' to Natalia, she had just looked at him and scowled. Now he was hoping she was in his class. He walked into Mr. Hod's classroom and was happy to see that Natalia was sitting in the back of the room. He hurried towards the seat next to him but Jacob reached it first. "Sorry, Jordan, but I'm sitting next to this lovely lady, now go away Italian loser" Natalia suddenly got up and walked to a different seat, next to another person, so none of them could sit next to her. But to Jordan's surprise and pleasure, the girl sitting next to her got up with disgust and sat by Jacob. He sat down next to her, "Hi, Natalia, I'm Jordan," she moaned, "I really thought I'd like this school, but with the boys all running after me and the girls running AWAY from me, I won't even survive" Jordan looked at her, understanding how she felt, when he had been transferred from Italy to America in the 4th grade, all the girls chased him and the boys ran away from him, "I know how you feel. I was in the same situation when I moved from Italy to America." Her face suddenly turned to sad to angry, "You're from Italy! UGH!" She walked towards Amanda. Jordan looked at her, full of confusion. "Hey, what's wrong with Italians?" She looked at me, glaring, "Come to the park today, I'll tell you there." He nodded, then went to sit down.
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5 Comments
this is great!! please write the next chapter
This is interesting.
Also, I have a question-- Can you make edits (like adding a new chapter or changing a chapter) after you've posted a story?
Yeah, you can. At the top click ad a new chapter or edit this chapter.
(Yeah, figured the story of the Italians rubbing others from their riches had been false, I remember every detail in any interesting topic such as history. I am seventeen so my semester at the moment consists of American History.)
Definaly abit depressing how Natalia has just about no clue what to do and go toward communication with American citizens. Jordan shall most likely help Natalia adjust to living in a arrogant and overally populated country like United States.
Since Natalia is a new comer in her school attendings, she'll soon realize there is no place like home, these otherwise possibilies vanish. Home is anywhere you can say something loud and not care because you feel comfortable and able to eat any breed of food just walking in socks around the house. Natalia also seems to be an hidden shy being in general, was this a personality trait of hers then, living in Brazil?
Jordon seems of an true leo. Next chapter!