loving a ghost
she thought it was just a dream he thought this would never happen soon they meet but it just puts their lives in danger (p.s i no this is random but sorry if one of the characters r ur names!) btw chapters go by the character.
i would never forget the day i was murdered, i was just running away from home away from all my fears and problems away from the abuseing my father beat me for sneaking out of the house in the middle of the night to hide. my mother left him for that and she took my little brother she said if anything happened to me i should come over right away. but right now i was outside, i ran in town at 1:00 A.M my dad watching tv . i ran into an alley in town i sat to rest but 2 drunks saw me
"crap" i said quietly i tried to leave but i was trapped my dad was on the other side.
"BRANDON! IM GETTING SICK OF THIS! YOUR COMING WITH ME NOW!"
"no im not you will just beat to death."
"how bout i kill u now" he said walking towards me the drunks held me my father pulled out a pocket knife i tried to scream but one of the drunks cupped my mouth and my father stabbed me in the gut several times.
" now." he said "burn in hell"
" b a s t e r d" i told him
the drunks ran and my dad jumped in his jeep and left me there bleeding on the concrete and he left me there to die.
( I hoped u liked it! comment if i should make more!)
"crap" i said quietly i tried to leave but i was trapped my dad was on the other side.
"BRANDON! IM GETTING SICK OF THIS! YOUR COMING WITH ME NOW!"
"no im not you will just beat to death."
"how bout i kill u now" he said walking towards me the drunks held me my father pulled out a pocket knife i tried to scream but one of the drunks cupped my mouth and my father stabbed me in the gut several times.
" now." he said "burn in hell"
" b a s t e r d" i told him
the drunks ran and my dad jumped in his jeep and left me there bleeding on the concrete and he left me there to die.
( I hoped u liked it! comment if i should make more!)
12 Comments
Wow,........... interesting, dark, but still interesting
More! :D Amazing! Too much awesomeness to describe!!!
thx!
amazing.. make more.. i hate that dad already.... grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :)
oh it gets better :) right now working on chapter 2
ok i need some help (im still new at quibblo) how do i make another chapter without re doing the title intro and wht not
nvm im such a blonde :P
:D !! I read it again XDD
Can't wait for the third!! this is an awesome story :D I think Brandon is my fav.."
thx! let me find my jornal and ill start
i LOVE LOVE LOVE thissssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss