Same Dystopian Story with "Better Grammar" Happy? New Version Same Plot.
So,I got plastered with hatred because of some flipping grammar mistakes and I'm sorry but I don't believe that's right.I've decided to say sorry for whatever and try to correct my grammar so people will "like my stories." Again I don't want bad comments.
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"Run" was all I heard.
Mothers,children,all doomed to die.Time froze for a moment.And then, BOOM the world shivered for a moment and I felt bricks fall on me.I get infected with radiation now,or I die this way.I shoved that thought out of my mind.Wait........Jennifer!My best friend,dead.I stopped and that was the last thought I processed before blacking out.
Yeah,I know,it's short.But it's an introduction.Thanks for reading,people.Now,here's the dealeo,If I'm gonna make some more chapters,I need to know if you like these,so I need 2 positive comments,8 reads,4 comments(They don't have to be different people commenting) and at least a 2 star rating.
"Run" was all I heard.
Mothers,children,all doomed to die.Time froze for a moment.And then, BOOM the world shivered for a moment and I felt bricks fall on me.I get infected with radiation now,or I die this way.I shoved that thought out of my mind.Wait........Jennifer!My best friend,dead.I stopped and that was the last thought I processed before blacking out.
Yeah,I know,it's short.But it's an introduction.Thanks for reading,people.Now,here's the dealeo,If I'm gonna make some more chapters,I need to know if you like these,so I need 2 positive comments,8 reads,4 comments(They don't have to be different people commenting) and at least a 2 star rating.
6 Comments
I like the intro! I want to read more now!
keep writing!
I already told you this is awesome twice! Keep going!
what lexi_riddle said.lexi_riddle is my sister
what lexi_riddle said.lexi_riddle is my sister
You did not egt "plastered with hatred". I got platered with hatred because of the comment I put. And people were having 'war' with me because they don't know THE WHOLE DAMN STORY. You were pposting crap on my profile because my profle was anti-twilight. SO I got pissed and posted that comment.
I already apologized, I think its your turn now.