Story Reviews
http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g3TuRvq/What-a-Girl-Can-Do-HeatherMellisas-Contest?story_chapter=1 Linky
Title: What a Girl Can Do
Author: Linky
Link: http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g3TuRvq/What-a-Girl-Can-Do-HeatherMellisas-Contest?story_chapter=1
Rating: 5
My Thoughts: Gotta say, I was not too impressed with this story; although it is good and I do like the idea of a girl in an all boys school, it just doesn't fit all together.
Helpful hints: Make sure to check your spelling. There were parts where words needed 'ing' or 'ed' but did not have it. Also, sometimes you would seem to get off track; try to stay focused.
Title: Help Me, I Fell In Love With A Hunter
Author: MyCatLooksLikeCROOKSHANKS
Link: http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g9HEJNX/Help-Me-I-Fell-In-Love-With-A-Hunter-a-Dean-Winchester-Love-Story
Rating: 8
My Thoughts: Very well writen and interesting; though, I myself am not very big for fanfics.
Helpful hints: You should add more detail and make sure you put some length on to your story; I also personally think you should try a original sometime.
Title: The Life of a Tainted Angel
Author: Subrina
Link: http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g0yM28S/The-Life-of-a-Tainted-Angel
Rating: 10
My Thoughts: Oh. My. Gott. Absolutly amazing story! The detail is very good and I love the characters.
Helpful hints: Just a TINY bit more detail wouldn't hurt; I'd love to see more from this story.
Title: Fighting for the Memories
Author: Subrina
Link: http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g8im8k2/Fighting-for-the-Memories
Rating: 8
My Thoughts: Not as good as the other one mainly because they both reflect each other slightly; angles and demons and such.
Helpful hints: Try to not reflect on your other story; add some new creatures, like monsters from Greek mythology.
Title: In Love With My Kind
Author: Alohamora
Link: http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g7IUjvF/In-Love-With-My-Kind-Jacob-Black-Love-Story
Rating: 7
My Thoughts: Not a hude fan of Twilight or fanfics; skimmed it. The idea of the person creating their own character is overused too.
Helpful hints: Give the character her/his own name and such; the idea of having someone describe their own character is much too overused and you would have a better try at being original.
Author: Linky
Link: http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g3TuRvq/What-a-Girl-Can-Do-HeatherMellisas-Contest?story_chapter=1
Rating: 5
My Thoughts: Gotta say, I was not too impressed with this story; although it is good and I do like the idea of a girl in an all boys school, it just doesn't fit all together.
Helpful hints: Make sure to check your spelling. There were parts where words needed 'ing' or 'ed' but did not have it. Also, sometimes you would seem to get off track; try to stay focused.
Title: Help Me, I Fell In Love With A Hunter
Author: MyCatLooksLikeCROOKSHANKS
Link: http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g9HEJNX/Help-Me-I-Fell-In-Love-With-A-Hunter-a-Dean-Winchester-Love-Story
Rating: 8
My Thoughts: Very well writen and interesting; though, I myself am not very big for fanfics.
Helpful hints: You should add more detail and make sure you put some length on to your story; I also personally think you should try a original sometime.
Title: The Life of a Tainted Angel
Author: Subrina
Link: http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g0yM28S/The-Life-of-a-Tainted-Angel
Rating: 10
My Thoughts: Oh. My. Gott. Absolutly amazing story! The detail is very good and I love the characters.
Helpful hints: Just a TINY bit more detail wouldn't hurt; I'd love to see more from this story.
Title: Fighting for the Memories
Author: Subrina
Link: http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g8im8k2/Fighting-for-the-Memories
Rating: 8
My Thoughts: Not as good as the other one mainly because they both reflect each other slightly; angles and demons and such.
Helpful hints: Try to not reflect on your other story; add some new creatures, like monsters from Greek mythology.
Title: In Love With My Kind
Author: Alohamora
Link: http://www.quibblo.com/quiz/g7IUjvF/In-Love-With-My-Kind-Jacob-Black-Love-Story
Rating: 7
My Thoughts: Not a hude fan of Twilight or fanfics; skimmed it. The idea of the person creating their own character is overused too.
Helpful hints: Give the character her/his own name and such; the idea of having someone describe their own character is much too overused and you would have a better try at being original.
11 Comments
Thank you so much for reviewing my story!!! I know, my stories are alike in many ways, but I'm not really good at writing anything else... anyway, thanks again!! :D
ima just gonna say this, that story was for an old contest of mine, and it didn't need to be the best, you shouldn't be mean about them, just because. They did do their best, and they only had about a week, so please, don't be mean.
I don't see me being mean; I see me being completely honest instead of sugar coating it like most people doing Story Reviews do. The person asked for my opinion on the story and I gave them the truth.
There are people who would give it a worse rating then mine - just because I give my honest opinion on their story does not mean I am mean.
Personally, I'm a bit offended you would consider me mean on that subject.
But whatever.
I gave them fiveish days to write it, and I don't care what the spelling was (who even checks for spelling...as long as people know what i mean, it's correct to me), and they had a time crunch. I know what it's like to have a bad grade, I have a teacher who grades my papers harder than the others just because I show everything that should get me a 100. but honestly, if they continued, i bet it would've made sense,
And i said please
Gosh, being nice in this word gets hatred...sad.
...So, I'm automatically hating on them and being mean for trying to help their writing, no matter what time limit? Spelling is important and a lot of people do check for it.
I do not see me being rude or any of that such; in fact, I was being nice when I gave that rate. I could grade a lot harsher.
Plus; am I grading your stories? I think not. The person who I did the review for can 'fight their own battles'; they have not complained about my review, so what gives you the right to?
Hey, I dunno if you'll take requests, but there's a story I'm writing and I'd like to hear what you think of it. I'm not that great of a writer, and I'm dying for constructive criticism. I'm tired of hearing, "It's good." You seem really nice and I really need people who will criticize. It's called "From the Blacktop Mountains of Jadere" and I've only written the first chapter, but I just want to know how to make that better. So if you have time, it'd be great if you could give me feedback.
I have another story called "Story Reviews" that you can sign up for being reviewed; go look at that please. ^^
Oh, okay. I feel stupid now. XD
I give up. I'm juust tooo tired too fight. Otherwise, i'd keep gooing.
cool...can you review my Pompeii story? it will be on page 2 or 3 on my recently created. PWEASE?
Could you please review my story:
What Could Have Been and What We Wished To Be
Thanks.