United ~ A Song
(C) Neare Beyonde
For someone. ^_^
Don't move on
Don't go yet
As the sun sets again
Remember the destiny of the edge
[Bridge]
I dunno what else to do
Take a deep breathe
Each time I see the darkness
There's nothing to be afraid of!
[Chorus]
I said the ties will never break!
Our hearts are one!
Forever connected
No matter the fate of the one or two
The strength of the waves
As the staic fades
The ties will never break
Our love will never fade
White tooth
Red eyes
Purple birds, folded by paper
With the black moon, made by our light
See the lights in our eyes
Aren't our hearts united as one?
Smile for the last of the lonely souls
We see the last of the last
The feeling we will surive
'Cause the destiny we feel
'Cause the pain we cause
'Cause the life we steal
Take a deep breathe
The ties of ours cannot be divided
We will never be afraid, Nothing will stop us now!
[Chorus]
Together we are one
Together we are the sun!
[Bridge]
[Chorus]
We can never be broken
As the long lies stay forever
Our truths aren't ever faded
Don't go yet
As the sun sets again
Remember the destiny of the edge
[Bridge]
I dunno what else to do
Take a deep breathe
Each time I see the darkness
There's nothing to be afraid of!
[Chorus]
I said the ties will never break!
Our hearts are one!
Forever connected
No matter the fate of the one or two
The strength of the waves
As the staic fades
The ties will never break
Our love will never fade
White tooth
Red eyes
Purple birds, folded by paper
With the black moon, made by our light
See the lights in our eyes
Aren't our hearts united as one?
Smile for the last of the lonely souls
We see the last of the last
The feeling we will surive
'Cause the destiny we feel
'Cause the pain we cause
'Cause the life we steal
Take a deep breathe
The ties of ours cannot be divided
We will never be afraid, Nothing will stop us now!
[Chorus]
Together we are one
Together we are the sun!
[Bridge]
[Chorus]
We can never be broken
As the long lies stay forever
Our truths aren't ever faded
10 Comments
It's a lovely poem. But that's all it is. A poem. If you don't provide a tune, a song is just a poem. Maybe write down the notes and chords for it?
Thanks, I know.... I usually use other song instrumentals that fit it like 'Period' by SID, and 'Uso' by SID... ^_^ But I usually let others find out themselves for a reason. It keeps my mind going.
Then say that. It may keep your mind reeling to not, but it inconveniences readers.
(and also us composers)
It doesn't incovience me!
Oh... Okay then,
(Sorry... )
Hey, how about I try to think and do a guitar instrumetal for the song? ^_^
Bravo!
It was really good!
5 stars!
:D
I'.m talking about nitpicky people.
KK :P
Coolio! I'd love to hear you play!
Yeh, do you play an instrument?